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REID CONOR MONOGHAN III

AGE: 17 
OCCUPATION: Prince 
POWERS: Compulsion 
HOME: Galdare, Mir Dorain
TRAITS: Anxious, pensive, reserved
NEEDS: Validation, to be seen, freedom

EXCERPT:

Reid kneeled down, his knees pressing into the new-fallen snow. Cold seeped through the thin fabric of his trousers, chilling his skin. The world hushed around him, even the sounds of the birds falling quiet. And above it all, the sense that someone was listening—that any words he spoke would truly be heard by the Dáine Mir. 

“Hello,” he whispered to the rock, feeling foolish and yet somehow peaceful. “I don’t do this often—ever, really, so I apologize if it’s not how it’s supposed to be.” He cringed retroactively, hating how court etiquette slipped into his words. He was talking to a rock, not an ambassador. “Anyway. I’m sorry I never prayed to you before, or thanked you, or anything.” 

He’d never spoken this long to anyone except Saraya. Still, he found the words coming easier and easier, pouring out of his mouth the longer he spoke. “My father always told me that mages were bad. I never liked being one. I never used my magic, either, which....I suppose you would know. Or not.” He paused, contemplating. “I don’t really know how all of this works.” 

Stupid. He sounded so stupid. He rested his head against the rock, the Dáine Mir’s name digging into his forehead. Maybe it would leave an impression. “I’m sorry that I’ve shunned your gift for so long. I still...I still struggle with it,” he got out, his lashes fluttering against the cold stone, pieces of snow getting caught among them. “I don’t know if I’ll always struggle with it. But I hope you’re not really slipping, like everyone here seems to think. I hope you’re okay, and that the world isn’t ending. And I hope I won’t be ashamed for much longer.”

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“What were you doing?” she asked as they walked back to the clearing, following their own frantic footsteps. Ara’s tracks were mechanical, turning at odd angles to cut through the trees. 
“I heard a baby crying,” Ara replied. “It was terrible, the most awful sound.” Saraya loved the way her accent cupped each word, dancing around the syllables and sounds. “I couldn’t leave it there, and once I started walking...I couldn’t stop.” She rubbed at her eyes, though she wasn’t crying. Saraya felt like she should be, though her chest only felt hollow. 
“There was no baby,” Saraya said, trying to keep her voice even. 
Ara scowled. “I know that.” The girl huffed, storming ahead several paces, leaving Saraya trailing behind.

Something in the giant mess I wrote today. I know you guys know nothing about this story or these characters. I’m sorry. oop ! im just bloggin 2 blog

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a bit of writing i did that i liked today :^) part of my nano wip. have you guys heard of 4thewords? im doing their free trial and i wrote 3.7k today!

[BLACK TEXT ON PINK BACKGROUND READING:
“So…do you want to try?” 
“Praying?” Reid asked. He hoped it was praying. 
“Magic.” Ara said it so plainly. It didn’t bother her one bit, to be a mage. She was so at peace with the pieces of herself that Reid only shattered more.]
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my favorite line from today:

“Conor.” She scooted to her knees in front of him, bodying the rock and shoving it off of him. It thudded to the ground, clattering against another pile of debris. Her hands fluttered over him, not sure where to reach next, not sure what to do. He could have broken ribs, broken legs, he could bleed out— 
Let him, a voice within her said. He deserves it, after all.

i think this is very representative of the divide created in saraya, whose entire world has just been flipped upside down

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