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Ramblings from Apalapachia...

@thesunflowersqueen / thesunflowersqueen.tumblr.com

Helen Sunflower. 34. Enby/Demisexual/Queer. They/Them. Feminist. British-Canadian. Traveller. English Language Teacher. Artist. Reader. Writer. Dramatist. Whovian. Sci-fi & fantasy lover. Talks too much. Wants more than ordinary. Willing to fight for it. Sometimes NSFW.
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Me: So how spicy should this Belle x Adam first kiss scene be, given that they're both virgins with no prior kissing experience?

Me to me: YES.

(B/c it's WIP Wednesday and I need to make myself feel better about certain political events. Adam is a naturally good kisser in all of my AUs.)

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firawren

This is Beauty and the Beast, who cares about realism! Love this kiss scene, especially Belle being so assertive! 🤩

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bloomsoftly

if you are still doing kiss prompts, i would like to see #16 in a WinterShieldShock flavor, please?

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hi there! i was in need of something super happy and fluffy today, so that’s what you get. :) it’s not actually smutty, but it dances along the line, i think. hope you like it! ❤️❤️

“Daaaaaarcy,” a rumbling baritone sang, pulling her from a sweet dream that lingered behind her eyelids. She groaned loudly, turning to lie on her stomach and pulling the pillow over her head to block out the sun that was now drifting through the blinds. A hand stroked lightly over the arm hanging out of the covers, and she swatted at it blindly.

Steve was sitting close enough that his chuckle practically vibrated through her, sending pleasant shivers down her spine. She loved that sound. But she still didn’t want to get up. “What time is it?” she grumbled. They had a rule in the apartment: the boys were not allowed to wake her up before 8:00 on Saturdays.

The pillow was pulled away from her face and Steve’s hands were brushing back her hair. “8:30,” he said, sounding altogether too enthusiastic for such an early time. Still, he hadn’t technically broken the rule. She pouted, crinkling her nose in supplication.

“Five more minutes?” she begged.

“The pancakes’ll be ready in two, sweetheart,” he said, leaning down to pepper kisses across her nose and cheeks. She kept her face scrunched up, and he laughed. “Buck!” he called, “I need some backup in here!”

“The bacon’s about to fry to a crisp, Stevie,” Bucky said from the doorway. “Go on. I got this.” His voice dropped a register on the last part, sending a shiver down Darcy’s spine. With a knowing wink at Darcy, Steve climbed to his feet and moved toward the kitchen.

“Make sure she’s still in one piece,” he threw over his shoulder at them.

Darcy turned her face back toward the mattress, grumbling. She knew there was no way she was getting any more sleep now. Steve was commanding, but Bucky was relentless. Sure enough, he sat next to her at the edge of the bed, rubbing firm circles into her shoulder. She tried, and failed, not to melt into him.

By the time he rolled her onto her back, she was already pouting. It was her last defense, and had a one in a million chance of working. Instead, he just laughed and pressed a kiss to her forehead. “If you’re not careful, doll,” he said, moving so his lips hovered only inches over hers, “your face’ll get stuck like that.”

And then his mouth swooped in to claim hers, swallowing her indignant retort. Lazy strokes of their tongues slowly grew more heated, until she was gasping against him. Her hand snuck up to sift into his shoulder length hair, tugging hard enough to make him groan. While he was distracted, she pushed off the bed with a heave, rolling so that he was trapped beneath her. She grinned down at him in triumph, stealing a kiss in victory.

“Sheesh, Darce, you been workin’ out or somethin’?” Bucky winked up at her from where he lay pinned underneath her hips. She had no doubt he could get free in less than an instant, but he looked very happy to be exactly where he was.

“I had to figure out a way to keep up with my supersoldier boyfriends,” she confided in a stage whisper, leaning in close. He reached up to pull her down for a filthy kiss, rolling his hips up into her at the same time.

“I think you’re doin’ just fine, doll,” he groaned, closing his eyes at the friction their motions made. She could feel the heat of him through the thin fabric of her panties, and all thoughts of breakfast completely fled her brain. She opened her mouth to call for their other partner, but he spoke before she could even make a sound.

“Buck,” came Steve’s exasperated voice from the doorway, “you were supposed to help get our girl out of bed. Not give her a reason to stay.”

Darcy turned to look at him over her shoulder, shooting him an inviting grin. “Hey, Steve,” she said, rocking her hips in time with her words. Bucky groaned unintelligibly below her. “I think he said hi, too,” she clarified with a wink.

Steve leaned against the doorframe with a smile. “I’m feelin’ a little left out over here,” was all he said, smile faltering for a single moment. Quickly, his face smoothed out and he tacked on, “Breakfast is ready and on the table, if you’re ready.”

But Bucky and Darcy were already reaching for him. They worked hard to keep their relationship equal, to keep anyone from feeling unloved or underappreciated. Over time, they’d developed a set of phrases to let each other know how they felt. And, well, Bucky and Darcy wanted Steve to feel anything but left out.

He came to them willingly, as he always did. They pulled him down between them, smothering him in kisses and hugs and an overwhelming surge of affection so strong they were all gasping from the weight of it. Darcy peppered his face with quick, light kisses, mimicking what he’d done to her not half an hour before. Bucky nipped at his earlobe and his neck, setting them all aflame.

“Breakfast can wait,” Darcy announced unnecessarily, wanting to make sure they were all on the same page. Bucky reached for the waistband of Steve’s pants at the same time as Darcy reached for his shirt, in perfect agreement. But Steve put a hand on each of their waists, stopping them for a moment. “I love you,” he said seriously, looking first at one and then at the other. And he did love Bucky and Darcy, anyone could tell. Pure love and adoration shone from his eyes every time he looked at them.

“I love you, too,” Darcy said, laying a kiss on his lips first, since she was closer. Bucky followed suit, murmuring the words with a rumbling sincerity.

Then he drew back, pressing his mouth to Darcy’s in turn. “And I love you, doll,” he said, low and fierce. If Steve’s love was like lightning, sharp and bright and something that drew everyone’s eye, Bucky’s was like thunder—steady and fierce and a force that would move the earth, if necessary.

“Now,” Bucky said, waiting for Darcy’s whispered “I love you too” before pressing another kiss to her lips and then to Steve’s, “where were we?” He drew his own shirt over his head, tossing it across the room and cocking an eyebrow in challenge.

There wasn’t a whole lot of talking after that.

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steinbecks

writing a kiss, tips for everybody

  1. whatever the hell you’re doing with tongue, stop
  2. invade, fight for dominance, and wrestle are literally the worst descriptors ever in the whole entire world of talking about kissing
  3. tongues do not roam and they do not go exploring they are like TIDES they come forward a little bit and then maybe recede a little bit EVEN IN FRENCHING
  4. most kissing action actually happens with the lips GO FIGURE??
  5. kissing is really awkward you get noses bumping everywhere and sometimes saliva all over your chin or theirs, please keep this in mind, only the chastest kisses are clean and neat
  6. really aggressive tongue is really an acquired taste not gonna lie (L O L)
  7. Avoid scientific clinical words like probe for the love of god
  8. if you’ve ever listened to a kiss you know it sounds really gross with all the sucking and smacking breathy moans and hums are the way to go
  9. No one pays enough attention to the lips imho y’all are so damn focused on tongues
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I once kissed a boy

I once kissed a boy outside of a church. He put his camouflage hat on my head while we laughed. That kiss meant nothing more to me than “….so this is what a first kiss feels like?”

I once kissed a boy on the beach after he told me how sad life made him. It was a kiss that meant nothing more to me than “thanks for paying for dinner.”  It was a kiss that he craved from anyone because his mother forgot to tuck him in all those nights.

I once kissed a boy to make my ex jealous. It was the worst kiss I’ve ever received, not because it was a kiss of revenge but because the boy didn’t know what the hell he was doing. It was a kiss that meant nothing more to me than “I hope he sees me bite your bottom lip.” I once kissed a boy in the cold. He was nervous and I looked him in the eyes and said, “don’t be scared.” I spent five years kissing those lips while tasting winter, lemon heads, coffee and late nights. That kiss shook my bones every night but meant nothing more to him than “It’s been five years and it’s not your kiss that makes me nervous anymore.”

I once kissed a boy softly while he imagined someone else pressed against his chest.

Whispering Bones, by Drew Hairgrove Purchase your copy here

Last one is heartbreaking

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How to write a kiss

Rebloggable version, as requested by davrosbro. :)

Oooh!  Yes!  I love kisses.  Kisses are where it all starts ;).

Okay, first, remember that a kiss is much, much more than just lips.  It is lips, but also tongues, teeth, eyes, faces, hands, noses, bodies, heartbeats,  breath, voice- and most importantly, a kiss is emotions.  A kiss without emotion is just wet mushy lips stuck together.  Ew.  Gross.  The most important part of a kiss isn’t the how, but the who- because of the emotions between the two people.

Okay so:

lips- Lips can slide, glide over each other smoothly, or they can be chapped and rough and dry and get stuck on each other.  They can match, top-to-top and bottom-to-bottom, or they can overlap, with one person’s top or bottom lip captured between the other person’s lips (yummy).  If there is lipstick or chapstick there is lipstick or chapstick flavor, otherwise, lips don’t have a taste (can you taste yours?).  Lips also can smack- the sound of two of them coming together or pulling apart, because they’re wet and warm and soft. 

tongue- Tongues are always wet, and always warm.  They’re very versatile.  They can trace over lips, teeth, or another tongue.  They can be smooth and graceful or teasing and flicking.  When tongues are involved, there is drool.  It’s only sexy when you like the person you’re kissing, or else it’s kinda gross. :P

teeth- teeth can clack together awkwardly, or teeth can bite down sensually.  A person biting their own lip is cute, a person biting another’s lips is sexy.  A person biting gently is sensual, a person biting roughly is sexual. 

eyes- Eyes can be wide open with surprise, half-lidded with desire, fully closed with pleasure.  Eyes can gaze lovingly, lustfully, wistfully, hungrily, seductively- it all depends upon the emotions of your characters.  Have them do whatever you like, but don’t leave them out- give them at least a mention!

faces- Faces are what the lips are attached to.  Noses bump, cheeks flush, ears turn red, foreheads either wrinkle or relax.  Kisses can leave lips, quite easily, and become kisses on chins, cheeks, noses, foreheads, ears, necks, throats.  Kisses on noses or foreheads are cute and adorable, kisses on cheeks are sweet, kisses on chins, ears, and throats are very sexual.  And a kiss on the lips can be all of those! <3

hands- Hands are super-important.  In order to describe a kiss, usually you want to also describe the hands.  Where are they?  Does one character have their hand behind the other’s head or back, holding them close?  Are they on someone’s shoulders pulling them near, or pushing them away?  Fingers brushing someone’s cheek or palms grabbing someone’s ass convey two very different kinds of situations, even if the kiss itself is exactly the same.

noses- Noses are annoying.  They easily get in the way, especially for first kisses!  People have to tilt their head to one side or the other, and if they don’t, noses bump.  I’d only mention noses if a kiss is supposed to be awkward or uncertain or nervous.

bodies- bodies are either close together, or far away.  Someone can be surrounded comfortingly by someone’s arms, or terrifyingly trapped by them.  Bodies are warm or hot, they are calm or nervous, relaxed or tense.  Body language says a lot.  Is your character pulling away, or moving closer?

heartbeat- Hearts can beat fast or slow, and that’s about all they can do- but there are lots of reasons why they do!  A heart can beat fast with fear or excitement or nervousness; a heart can pound with lust or race with terror or sing with joy.  Hearts can glow, cower, or shatter.  When you really want to drive the emotions of a character home, mention the heart.

breath- To me, the most consuming part of a kiss is the breath.  The air that someone else has just breathed going deep into your lungs is very intimate.  Lips and tongues don’t have a taste, but breath does.  Each person’s breath tastes different, smells different, and surrounds a person differently than anyone else’s breath.  Breath can be warm and sweet, breath can be hot and sexy, breath can be hot and frightening.  It is something that is very present and should not be left out.  A lot of writers leave breath out.  And it’s so important; it’s the most intimate part of a kiss.  Someone else is breathing into your lungs, and it’s either heaven or it’s hell.

voice- Voice conveys much, even without words.  A voice can groan, whimper, gasp, moan, catch, whine, scream, sigh.  Voice can convey emotion powerfully, and while some kisses are silent, usually they’re not. 

emotion-  Emotion is the most important- and the thing you try not to say.  You want to describe it, through all of the things above, so that it’s perfectly clear what your characters are feeling, without you ever using the “feelings words”.  If they’re in love, their bodies will lean close, their eyes will smile, their voices will giggle softly.  If they’re nervous, their palms will sweat, their noses will bump, their voices will shudder.  If they’re afraid, their muscles will be tense, their faces will grimace, their lips will not open.  Emotion is the color that you keep inside your mind as you write; it’s the base line that drives the description behind everything else you say.

Wow, that was a lot!  Gosh I hope it wasn’t too much!  Keep in mind not every kiss has all these things- this is just a list of things to consider when writing a kiss, and based on how long of a kiss you want to make.  Keep in mind that typing “they kissed for a long time”…that’s six words, it takes half a second to read, so that’s a short kiss!  If you want a long kiss, you need long sentences that make the reader linger. 

So maybe to start off, pick three things on the list to describe in your first kiss.  Don’t try to do it all- that would be too much for even the most epic kiss.  Just pick what’s most important to this particular scene, to these particular characters, and describe those parts along with the lips, and you’ve got yourself an awesome, emotional kiss. <3

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