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He watched as Zoro glanced over at the others. "Well, captain, I guess I wouldn't be thrilled if you decided you wanted us to sail under another man's flag." "Would you leave?" Luffy was gripped with a sudden terrible panic that Zoro's soft look and little shake of his head immediately assuaged. "Never." Two years ago, in the first few months when they had met, Luffy was sure that the answer would have been 'yes'. He let go of Zoro's hand and twined his arms around his arm in a curling spiral instead, walking as close to him as possible. They were quiet together for a moment, bathed in the last warm rays of twilight and the soft chatter of the rest of the Straw Hats, and the former Heart Pirates and Doflamingo– all of them surrounded by the greater, distant noise of the crowd and Uta's song. When Luffy had been little, talking with Ace and Sabo about how they'd all be pirate captains, he didn't really understand what that meant, or why it meant that the three of them couldn't sail together. It had been Zoro who taught Luffy what being a captain meant. He still wasn't sure that he understood it. Or maybe it was more that there was a part of him that didn't quite like the answer. Pride. Pride and rank. It made him think of the marines.  And he hated it.

-WIP sneak peek: Deicide: Red Shift chapter 15 (upcoming).

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Niji smiled, that soft, real smile again, slightly pained, and took her wrist in his hand.He turned it over and looked over her veins. "The surgery I was dreaming about. It was when Caesar put the ports into my arms for injections." Rebecca's eyes trailed down his arm—to the very ports he was talking about. The ports installed to make it easier for them to receive their injections through that hard internal—carapace? She still wasn't sure what it was called.  The little silver ring there gleamed like a piercing in the middle of his arm.

WIP snippet-- Little Dark Age (chapter 1, not yet posted)

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Major differences between Deicide universe and One Piece canon that happen prior to Deicide: Onigashima Aftermath

  • Mihawk is Crocodile's first mate in their early days of piracy. Crocodile is Whitebeard's son. Galdino is a cabin boy and later crewmate on their ship.
  • Crocodile, Mihawk, Buggy, Doflamingo, Vergo, and Daz have an accidental misadventure together on a lost island in the aftermath of Roger's execution.
  • Donquixote Rosinante is the victim of a precursor to the experiments performed on Kuma.
  • Caesar Clown is involved in the experiments on the Vinsmoke Siblings, and is the one who assists Sora with her attempt to thwart part of them.
  • Marianne/Miss Goldenweek's abilities are due to a devil fruit.
  • Vivi is 20 during the events of Alabasta rather than 16.
  • Enel is killed during the Skypeia arc.
  • Carrot is the crew member who the Straw Hats acquire at Thriller Bark, rather than Brook, and she remains with them throughout.
  • Gecko Moria is ejected from the Warlords due to his failure against Straw Hat Luffy. He slinks off from his miserable defeat to get drunk on a resort island, having lost all his drive. He remains there for two years.
  • After hearing news of Marineford, Vivi becomes determined to rejoin the Straw Hat crew and runs away from her kingdom. She runs straight into Crocodile, adventures with him and the remnants of Baroque Works during the timeskip, and gets a devil fruit for herself. 
  • Bon Clay, with the encouragement of his fellow prisoners, sneaks out of Impel Down with the intention to join up with the Straw Hats. He ends up with Crocodile and the former Baroque Works members.
  • Koala and Sabo discover that Ace's soul is sharing Sabo's body. They reconnect with Ace's former first mate Deuce.
  • Luffy spends more personal alone time with Hancock during the timeskip, training on the outskirts of Amazon Lily rather than another island.
  • Vergo survives the events of Punk Hazard, his body found in pieces by Doflamingo and reassembled. He is resting/healing outside the city during the events of Dressrosa, but rushes in at the end when he discovers there's trouble. He's in time to save the Donquixote family from captivity by marines, but is unable to get to Doflamingo who is being kept separately.
  • Rebecca, (who is 18, not 16)  wanting to determine her own path, and not wanting to be forced into a peaceful life after her experience as a gladiator, flees Dressrosa with the Straw Hat crew. 
  • The Straw Hats are not separated in Dressrosa, and travel to Zou together. 
  • Crocodile's ship catches up to the Straw Hats as they're leaving Dressrosa. He has a short reunion with Robin, and delivers Vivi to the Straw Hat crew as promised. He then goes after the marine ship carrying Doflamingo, and successfully frees him from custody.
  • Viola has a change of heart and rejoins the Donquixote pirates as Violet.
  • Events of One Piece Stampede and Film Gold happen.
  • Crocodile forms Cross Guild with Mihawk, Buggy, Doflamingo and Hancock.
  • The Straw Hats encounter Lim and Adio– something like the events of "One Piece Odyssey" happen.
  • When Sanji is forced to leave the Straw Hats for his wedding Rebecca goes along to watch after him. Luffy and the rest of the Straw Hats go after him immediately, despite Sanji's insistence not to.
  • After the events of Whole Cake Island, Caesar Clown joins the Straw Hat crew on a permanent basis. Luffy insists that his position on the crew is "Chopper's assistant". 
  • During the events of Whole Cake Island, Rebecca gets close to the Vinsmoke siblings, and in the aftermath of the event they adopt/kidnap her. The siblings abandon their father to Big Mom's wrath and sail away, after which they convince Rebecca to undergo enhancements similar to their own.
  • In the aftermath of Whole Cake Island, Pudding flees the Charlotte family trying to find her own way in life. Katakuri discovers her leaving, and follows her as a sort of bodyguard. They eventually end up running into the Vinsmoke Siblings and Rebecca.
  • Koala, Deuce, and Isuka accompany Sabo (and Ace) on their raid on Mary Geoise during the Revelry. 
  • Otama is 18 years old, rather than 8.
  • On Wano, Luffy finds out about Kaido and King's backstory and is unsettlingly reminded of himself and Zoro. These feelings lead him to resist his urge to kill Kaido during their battle, and to discover that "Gear 5" has some kind of mind of its own.
  • Big Mom also survives the battle on Wano, but winds up in a coma. She is brought back to Tottoland by her children.
  • Deicide: Onigashima Aftermath starts, and Deicide and One Piece canon completely part ways so much as to become unrecognizable.
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Was going to sit down and write a Deicide short, but then I realized I had to go back and edit one of the earliest pieces from the series because there was a minor inconsistency driving me crazy that would have conflicted.

Glad I did too, because that particular fic turned out to have a whole bunch of punctuation errors. (I think somebody on the team just put it up without an editing pass.)

Anyway now I'm gonna take a shower and see if I still have the steam in me to write or not.

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Sending hugs always!

🦋 - Which character has the biggest transformation?

Please and thank you!

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*clapping hands* excuse to talk about Deicide, yaaaaay!! <3 ty for the ask.

The character that goes through the biggest transformation is proooobably Komurasaki aka princess Hiyori.

She's a princess of a fallen regime who has been hidden away since she was a small child, sheltered by a group of yakuza and raised as an Oiran (a kind of high class escort.)

In canon, when her brother reclaims the throne she takes back her identity as a princess and fades into the background of the narrative.

In Deicide, she instead continues to pretend to be dead and escapes the closed little island she grew up on with a crew of pirates (Law and the Heart pirates), deciding to live a pirate life instead of being doomed to be nothing more than royal decoration. She gets a girlfriend, too, and starts going by the name 'Saki'.

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Christmas as a North Blue holiday

* also sometimes styled as "Crossmas" or "Xmas"

* Mythologically celebrates the rampage of "Saint Eklass" a Celestial Dragon said to have gone mad in the first years after the Void Century who distributed wealth to the poor and toys to children of the North Blue before being caught by the world government and sentenced to death on the cross.

* "Christ" here still etymologically means "anointed", referring to the oils that the peasants anointed Eklass' brow with as he died, as well as attempting to feed him with bread and wine (before they were killed by soldiers of course)

* actual "Saint Eklass" story suppressed, replaced in oral tradition by "Santa Klaus" supposedly a good fairy from the sky islands who flies around on a chariot distributing presents. Leaving out bread and wine becomes cookies and milk as the legend becomes more sanitized.

* celebration of the holiday was historically suppressed during the reign of the Vinsmoke dynasty.

* in the aftermath of the ousting of the Vinsmokes, the celebration of the holiday was encouraged again (as it was on our earth) with the publishing of a popular novel "A Christmas Carol", which like its earth counterpart features a wealthy money lender being haunted by spirits until he repents.

* celebration in the North Blue looks very much like what our cultural image of Christmas in the Victorian era looks like, leaning heavily on English and German style traditions. Something between "Christmas Carol" and "The Nutcracker". Balls and feasts and ballets for the wealthy, meager celebrations for the poor. Popcorn garlands. Trees lit inadvisably with candles. Gifting ceremonies, etc.

* outside the North Blue Christmas is celebrated in a more culturally modern Japanese way as a minor romantic holiday typically reserved for couples, with traditions of Christmas cake, fried chicken, and commercialized Santa Klaus imagery.

You see, I need this lore in order to be able to write internally consistent One Piece xmas drabbles.

And I need to be able to write internally consistent One Piece xmas drabbles or my brain will betray me, hit the breaks on all our One Piece Deicide works in progress, and decide its time to write a Sherlock Holmes novel or steampunk fic.

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We just finished chapter 10 of Red Shift. (5 chapters are posted so far). 10 marks the end of one of the emotional arcs, so we're looping back to write more Fire in the Belly and Sandstorms and Starfall.

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