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Kelsey. 24. Writeblr. I follow back at sleepyoceaneyes. Open to tag games! Feel free to chat with me about your wip!
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lyralit

character pairing prompts

  • menace of a child + their tired caretaker
  • flirty but easily flustered + absolutely brazen
  • can explain how to do it but can't do it + can do it but doesn't know how
  • always invested in their work + the one who takes care of them
  • eager to fight + eager to encourage
  • sunshine + midnight rain
  • clichéd hero + Will Break the Fourth Wall
  • busy saving the world + slow down, let me cook something for you
  • fighter + flight [er...?]
  • hothead + has a younger sibling
  • extrovert + overthinker
  • rbf + overthinker
  • will negotiate anything + lawyer
  • anxious + will jump right in
  • dumb + stupid + god I'm sick of this how did I end up here
  • impulsive + eager to please
  • Not A Couple + child they ended up with
  • oldest child + only child
  • academically smart but socially stupid + most obvious person ever
  • lawyer + assassin
  • grumpy retiree + toddler
  • doe-eyed Chosen One + trained for this for years
  • will say what they think + would kill you if they could
  • stupid villain + evil henchman
  • unilingual + group of polygots
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Writing Blind and Visually Impaired Characters: Tropes

Hmm, I decided to work on part three before I got to part two. Forgive me.

This is part three of a multi-step series I’m writing on how to write a good visually impaired or blind character. The master post with links is here: https://mimzy-writing-online.tumblr.com/post/185122795699/writing-a-blind-or-visually-impaired-character

The Master Post will include links to all parts. All posts of this multi-step guide and all guides I make in the future about blind characters will be tagged blindcharacter on my blog.

Disclaimer: I am a visually impaired writer and blogger who has written two blind characters thus far. I have been living with vision loss for two years, have had my cane for almost as long, and every day I strive to learn all there is to know about writing and living my life blind.

Part Three: Tropes and Cliches to Avoid, and Other Things You Should Avoid

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luna-azzurra

Some tips for using a few words to describe voices:

1. Tone Words: Use tone words to convey the emotional quality of a voice. For example, you can describe a voice as "melodic," "soothing," "sharp," "gentle," or "commanding" to give readers a sense of the tone.

2. Pitch and Range: Mention the pitch and range of the voice. Is it "deep," "high-pitched," "raspy," or "full-bodied"? This can provide insight into the character's age, gender, or emotional state.

3. Accent and Diction: Describe the character's accent or diction briefly to give a sense of their background or cultural influences. For instance, "British-accented," "Southern drawl," or "formal."

4. Volume: Mention the volume of the voice, whether it's "whispering," "booming," "murmuring," or "hushed."

5. Quality: Use terms like "velvet," "silken," "gravelly," "honeyed," or "crisp" to convey the texture or quality of the voice.

6. Rate of Speech: Describe how fast or slow the character speaks, using words like "rapid," "slurred," "measured," or "rambling."

7. Mood or Emotion: Indicate the mood or emotion carried by the voice. For example, a "quivering" voice may convey fear or anxiety, while a "warm" voice may express comfort and reassurance.

8. Resonance: Describe the resonance of the voice, such as "echoing," "nasal," "booming," or "tinny."

9. Timbre: Mention the timbre of the voice, using words like "rich," "thin," "clear," or "smoky."

10. Cadence: Highlight the rhythm or cadence of speech with descriptors like "staccato," "lilting," "rhythmic," or "halting."

11. Intonation: Convey the character's intonation by saying their voice is "sarcastic," "apologetic," "confident," or "questioning."

12. Vocal Characteristics: If applicable, mention unique vocal characteristics, like a "lisp," "stutter," "drawl," or "accented 'r'."

Cuz ik i have at least 4 writers that im mutuals with

Have dis incase you need it ♡

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Expanding a thought from a conversation this morning:

In general, I think "Is X out-of-character?" is not a terribly useful question for a writer. It shuts down possibility, and interesting directions you could take a character.

A better question, I believe, is "What would it take for Character to do X?" What extremity would she find herself in, where X starts to look like a good idea? What loyalties or fears leave him with X as his only option? THAT'S where a potentially interesting story lies.

In practice, I find that you can often justify much more from a character than you initially dreamed you could: some of my best stories come from "What might drive Character to do [thing he would never do]?" As long as you make it clear to the reader what the hell pushed your character to this point, you've got the seed of a compelling story on your hands.

this connects to some REALLY good writing advice i remember from @batshaped

Characters are contradictory, just like people are. What would it take for them to do the thing they've told themselves they'd never do, and how would they try to justify it?

So what I'm hearing is, "Under what circumstances would he fucking do that?"

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luna-azzurra

Good Traits Gone Bad

Exploring good traits gone bad in a novel can add depth and complexity to your characters. Here are a few examples of good traits that can take a negative turn:

1. Empathy turning into manipulation: A character with a strong sense of empathy may use it to manipulate others' emotions and gain an advantage.

2. Confidence becoming arrogance: Excessive confidence can lead to arrogance, where a character belittles others and dismisses their opinions.

3. Ambition turning into obsession: A character's ambition can transform into an unhealthy obsession, causing them to prioritize success at any cost, including sacrificing relationships and moral values.

4. Loyalty becoming blind devotion: Initially loyal, a character may become blindly devoted to a cause or person, disregarding their own well-being and critical thinking.

5. Courage turning into recklessness: A character's courage can morph into reckless behavior, endangering themselves and others due to an overestimation of their abilities.

6. Determination becoming stubbornness: Excessive determination can lead to stubbornness, where a character refuses to consider alternative perspectives or change their course of action, even when it's detrimental.

7. Optimism becoming naivety: Unwavering optimism can transform into naivety, causing a character to overlook dangers or be easily deceived.

8. Protectiveness turning into possessiveness: A character's protective nature can evolve into possessiveness, where they become overly controlling and jealous in relationships.

9. Altruism becoming self-neglect: A character's selflessness may lead to neglecting their own needs and well-being, to the point of self-sacrifice and burnout.

10. Honesty becoming brutal bluntness: A character's commitment to honesty can turn into brutal bluntness, hurting others with harsh and tactless remarks.

These examples demonstrate how even admirable traits can have negative consequences when taken to extremes or used improperly. By exploring the complexities of these traits, you can create compelling and multi-dimensional characters in your novel.

Happy writing!

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theartingace
Anonymous asked:

Do you have any references for centaur foals? It's really hard to find any references that's not adults

Yea! Enjoy a dump of all my centaur babies! They're mostly a bit older drawings but I think they still hold up haha and I don't think many people draw them cause they can be a little funky- what with the chunky little bodies on big ol spidery legs 😅 But I still think they're cute 💜

And a lot of my drawings of the bitties are in slings, as that's how I built in infant care with an L-shaped infant 😂

and of course, some goofy little baby Sunny doodles <3

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maresirenum

I hate that no one talks about just how distressing memory loss from adhd actually is. I always see memes that are like “haha I forgot my phone, I don’t remember where my laptop is, etc”, but no one seems to talk about how it can really fuck you up long term to just, not remember things that are completely mundane to non-adhd’ers. The memory loss is, however, so frustrating to us. I cannot physically count how many meltdowns I have had over the sheer mental frustration and torture of not being able to remember seemingly simple things

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masks and helmets that hides someone's face in such a way that they become the face themselves my beloved

these are all creatures to me

Angel of War, angular and strange, gleaming silver and gold, Angel of Wonder, pure and one-eyed, looking to stars new and old, Angel of Harvest, simple and hidden, bring nature's sweetness to all, Angel of Health, mysterious and fine, beacon when life starts to fall, Angel of the Deep, crooked and cage-like, guide us across the sea, Angel of Solace, protect us from evil, lead us to where we are free.

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The Emotion Thesaurus: Adoration

Hello, everyone! I will be starting a new series that will help you the writers describe emotions.

This guide will be a writer’s tool to characters expression.

This section comes from The Emotional Thesaurus by Ackerman and Puglisi.

Adoration

Definition: the act of worship; to view as divine.

Note: the subject of adoration can be a person or thing

Physical Signs:

  • Lips parting
  • A slack or soft expression
  • Waking quickly to erase distance
  • Mimicking body language
  • Touching one’s mouth or face
  • Reaching out to brush, touch or grasp
  • Steady eye contact, large pupils
  • Leaning forward
  • Stroking one’s own neck or arm as a surrogate
  • Pointing one’s torsos and feet towards the subject
  • A flushed appearance
  • Nodding while the subject speaks
  • Smiling
  • Open body posture
  • Releasing an appreciative sigh
  • Laying hand over the heart
  • Frequently moistening lips
  • Pressing palms lightly against the cheeks
  • Skimming fingertips along the jaw lines
  • Eyes that are bright
  • Agreement
  • Speaking praise and compliments
  • Keeping trinkets, pictures of the subject
  • Constantly talking about the subject to others
  • Rapt attention, still posture
  • Becoming unaware of one’s environment
  • A radiant glow
  • Visible shakiness
  • Reduced blinking
  • Closing eyes to savor moment
  • Speak with a soft voice
  • A voice that cracks with emotion

Internal Sensations

  • Quickening heartbeat
  • Breathlessness
  • Feeling one’s pulse in throat
  • Mouth dry
  • Throat growing thick
  • Rising body temperature
  • Tingling nerve endings

Mental Responses

  • A desire to move closer or watch
  • Fixating one’s thoughts on the subject
  • Acute listening and observation
  • Ignoring distractions
  • An inability to see the subjects flaws or faults

Cues of Acute or Long-Term Adoration

  • Obsession
  • Fantasizing
  • Believing that the feelings are mutual
  • A sense of destiny
  • Stalking
  • Writing and sending letter, emails, and gifts
  • Taking risks or breaking laws to be near or with subject
  • Weight loss
  • Poor sleep patterns
  • Jealousy towards those interacting with the subject
  • Taking on traits or mannerisms of the subject
  • Carrying something that represents the subject
  • Possessiveness

May Escalate To:

  • Love
  • Desire
  • Frustration
  • Hurt

Cues of Suppressed Adoration:

  • Clenching or hiding one’s hands to hide sweating or shaking
  • Avoiding conversations about the subject
  • Watching or observing from afar
  • Staying out of subjects proximity
  • Blushing
  • Sneaking looks at subject
  • Creating chance run ins
  • Writing secret letters, keeping diary
  • Lying about one’s feelings regarding the subject

Writer’s Tip:

  • Body cues should create a strong mental picture. If the movement is too drawn out or complicated, the emotional meaning behind the gesture may be lost.

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Physical characterizations that can make your characters more human

  • Irritated skin, red spots and stretch marks
  • Acne on forehead, cheeks and chin
  • Dark under eyes circles
  • Dry skin
  • Uncovered scars and birthmarks
  • Tattoos
  • Unshaped teeth
  • Unshaved body hair
  • Messy/ curly hairs that won't be managed no matter what you do to them
  • Chewed and unpolished finger nails
  • Spontaneous smile
  • Nervous tics
  • The sound of their footsteps
  • The way they stand/ posture
  • Weight loss/ weight gain due to emotional antecedents
  • Putting on make up or none at all
  • Wearing extravagant clothes
  • Wearing unmatchable but comfortable clothes
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