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@sprinkleonthatcriticism / sprinkleonthatcriticism.tumblr.com

Blog for criticizing Hazbin Hotel, Helluva Boss, Vivziepop and other stuff
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Welcome to my criticism and drama blog!

Here is where I'll most criticize shows, films, other artist/content creators and such as well as talking about drama.. Originally, I use to do this on my main blog but after recent events I decided to separate it since I know that some of my followers may be sick and tired of me getting into fights with weirdos or helluva/hazbin stans for just wanting to express my opinions. Please note that I may do a lot of ranting on this blog as well as critiquing some series that you may like, if you are a huge fan of said series or a stan.. for your own mental health (I can't stress this enough) PLEASE do not follow me or interact with me, PLEASE block or ignore me if you do not wanna hear me criticize someone you look up to or a show/movie/game that you really really REALLY enjoy and you don't see any "flaws" in it. ‧₊˚🌈✩ Remember, Shows, Movies, Games and everyone else are not flawless.. we all have our flaws ‧₊˚🌈✩

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~Small Info about me~

. I’m Panromantic, Polyamory and Genderfluid going by He/She/They/Them pronouns.. I came out as Genderfluid last year (2022)

. I don’t like receiving messages that is literally just ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ (unless it’s from a close friend or someone i know) because I get easily panicked so I rather you just get straight to the point xp /nbr

. My bad for not including this here until now but, if you are reblogging my critic posts towards Vivziepop, Helluva Boss or Hazbin Hotel.. PLEASE do not use any "anti" tags because I'm not anti helluva boss or hazbin hotel, yes, I hate Viv but I do not hate her series plus, I do not want to be seen as an "anti Vivzie" to the stans since they already have that "all critics are evil" mindset no thanks to her and I do not want it to get worse.

. Please be aware that I will be sharing or talking about adult topics that some people may find sensitive, I'll put the appropriate tags if I do mention said topic . I will be criticizing series like Helluva Boss, Hazbin hotel, Muffins and people like Vivziepop, Reitanna Seishin.. If this is not your liking then I highly advise that you don't follow this blog. . Another thing to note is yes, I am a fan of Helluva Boss, Hazbin Hotel and Muffins but however I obviously do NOT support the creator (Yes, I am those type of people that believe that you can seperate art from artist in some cases) Also YES, you can criticize someone while also liking it too.

. I'll also be criticizing fandoms and communities (communities like people who support proshipping)

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Do not interact with me if you are the following or support the following: - You are a Reitanna Seishin Stan. - You are a FNAF stan or Scott Cawthorn Stan or a Scott/FNAF anti - You are a Vivziepop Stan or Vivziepop Anti (and PLEASE do not reblog my posts and use any anti vivziepop, anti hazbin hotel, anti helluva boss or anything with the anti tag in them, ESPECIALLY if it posts about criticism) - You support Pedophilla/lolicon/Shotacon. - You support Zoophilla, Necrophilla or anything problematic. - You support Proship, profic (Yes, I do realize there are some people that label theirselves profic while not fetishizing/romanticizing problematic content but still, this is mostly aiming at people who DO), non-con, comship, cub-con, nsfw babyfur artists/supporters, abdl ect. - You are homophobic, transphobic, racist, zionist, sexist, ableist or basically just a problematic person in general. -You support bullying people for just drawing non-problematic art (like scenecore, canon x oc ship art, canon x self-insert ship art or what people consider "cringe") - You are a trump supporter.

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Last thing to say about the Damagedcoda6669 situation because I need to get this off my chest but i noticed that Slime's channel is gone which I assume is because some jerkasses decided to harass them for simply criticizing and calling Jack out, which if that's the case fuck you all. Like yes, there are some stuff I disagree with Slime HOWEVER harassing them is disgusting, you guys need to chill.. just like what I'm saying to Jack, do better.

Like seriously, do NOT go after anyone, don't go after Jack, don't go after Slime, don't go after Yippee and DON'T go after everyone who is actually criticizing and calling Jack out without acting like morons and without being disrespectful to his mental illness, disablity, gender, pronouns and so on.

holy shit-

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So is anybody else just creep out but the obvious racist undertones that keeps happening in viv shows

paimon buying blitzo so that he can be his son playdate for a day

Stolas obviously having fetish for imps which doesn’t help the fact that he is canonically a white British man and blitzo is a poc person

Charlie being the white savior who help the trouble souls and most of them are poc people

Alastor owning husk soul being seen in a slave metaphor (and yes I’m aware he is a black man but that tan skin color and that fuck ass Bob is not helping)

ROSIE owning Alastor soul in a slave metaphor and saying shit like “I can make him fetch and roll over”

Yeah there’s definitely something wrong with this

Let's not forget the jewish stereotypes that are in the series too just as how Mimzy is heavily inspired by Jewish flappergirls and she has a pointy nose which is commonly used in THOSE cartoons back in the day....

Which ya know, comes off as antisemitic and unsurprisingly, Vivziepop lied between her teeth and claimed that "Oh no, Mimzy is actually base on a chicken NOT a jewish person-"

Like, that is NOT a chicken viv....

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yippee-boi09

Final response to everything (and an important update)

I've honestly had a plunge in my mental health due to everything happening... I've been irrationally angry and negative despite that being the total opposite of what I've striven to do. I've been surrounded by negativity and anger for the past week and a half and I've had so much happen to me than in the past few months that have negatively affected me

First, I'm gonna say that I'm gonna be leaving for a few months... I'm not gonna post or reblog on this blog for a few months (or longer) to try and improve my mental health and get better with how I handle things on the internet... I'll still be around (liking and commenting on posts I like) and I'm even gonna be trying to make more friends on here, hanging around and finding more positive spaces on the internet for my sake... I'll come back and post when I'm in a better headspace and when I turn 16, so expect to see this pinned for the meantime until I come back and make a new intro post sometime in the future...

Second, I no longer want to respond to drama involving Jack or the situation involving the group, I've done enough already and I'm tired of being pressured into responding to this drama and being dragged into it. I know that me saying not to put me in videos isn't going to stop ppl from talking abt me in videos but I'm still gonna say it otherwise... don't bring me into your videos or try to drag me into this drama again. It's stressful and anxiety enducing to see ppl talk about me as a victim and ignoring my response entirely because it causes ppl to assume that I'm being hurt... I don't want to be involved anymore and I ask of you to respect that, don't drag me down into this nonsense and leave me alone, I've already said that I'm striving to improve and get better...

I should also apologize for causing anger and outrage in other communities and harassing ppl who've criticized Jack, I don't want to talk to you but know that I wasn't in the right headspace, it's not an excuse but know that I'm sorry for lashing out.

I'm a bit excited to be taking a break and excited for what improvements are to come, I'll still be drawing and writing (workingnon my creepypasta) etc... I don't want to be associated with Jack or birdie drama and I wanna come back to a platform where I won't be harassed into oblivion... ty for reading, I hope u have a nice day <333

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Anonymous asked:

Oh sorry I misundertood your comment, my bad 😓

Ah it's fine, sorry, I'm bad at wording stuff in some cases😓😓!!

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Anonymous asked:

Hey same anon about the slime comment! (This is gonna be the last times I talk about this)

I agree 100% with you but I didn't like that you say that birdie can't be a groomer just because they are both minors. First of all, grooming is a type of manipulation where the abuser is older and the victim is younger, it is normally used by pedophiles BUT NOT ALL GROOMERS ARE PEDOPHILES (example: the groomer is 15 and the victim is 12 or the groomer is 24 and the victim is 21). Grooming is manipulation/power where the abuser forces things on someone young because it is easier to manipulate them. (This is from someone who got groomed by 3 times)

Wait. Where did I say that Birdie can't be a groomer? /genq /nbr

It could be my bad wording or you are mistaking because I don't think I ever said he can't be a groomer, i said he couldn't be a child predator /nbr

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Anonymous asked:

By the way I am the same anon that talked about slime deleting your comment.

first of all I don't think birdie is innocent, well what he did was in the past but he doesn't want to apologize and that's a problem. BUT HIM BEING ABUSIVE TO FONTIK, JULIAN AND DRAGY HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH SYNNI. neither has anything to do with Jack's parents nor kittydog. I don't like people saying their parents were right WHICH IS VERY NASTY TO SAY THAT KNOWING THEY ARE ABUSIVE, yes I know birdie is also abusive like them but it's not an excuse defending his parents, nor is it an excuse defending synni (synni is worse than birdie as a grooming victim). I don't think birdie is a groomer but that doesn't take away the excuse that he was abusive to dragy and that he doesn't want to apologize to dragy is horrible. but it will NEVER be an excuse to mock birdie's traumas.

I agree with everything you said anon, I also don't think Birdie is a child groomer since both Jack and Draggy were still minors like yeah Jack is older because he was 16 at the time and Draggy is 13 but it's more like cocsa as well as grooming not pedophilla. But Jack should still be held responsible just like Kittydog when Jack revealed that Kittydog had groomed him

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Anonymous asked:

Slime deleted your comment wich is odd... I'm not whit birdie side but I find it weird that slime deleted your comment, it does not makes sense to me.

It's very sus considering I wasn't even being rude and I was ALSO not on Birdie's side either, all I did was criticize Slime and correcting things which apparently according to them counts as me "sympathizing an abuser". Which.... no?????? How does be explaining that Jack didn't guilit anyone into giving him 10k+ so he could move out of Synni (his abuser's) apartment, needing extra money for bills, food as well as a plane ticket (just incase) is him guilting or begging, it sound really victim blamey to me which I find REALLY fucking ick considering how (almost) everyone who quote on quote "criticize" Jack has the habit of being ableist as well as victim blaming him and lastly, accuse Jack of suicide baiting (not using the right term btw, because as I said it so many times, suicide baiting means to maliciously try to convince someone to die NOT faking suicide). The suicide baiting accusation heavily reminds me of when Prisonmate Luke accused Hopeless Peaches of Suicide baiting all because she made a post on twitter that reads "I think I'm just about done, goodbye." and then popping back to apologize about her twitter post. And when she corrected him, he'd backtrack by making another video accusing her of "sympathy baiting". My suggestion is to maybe steer clear of Slime, like I'm not invalidating their criticisms towards Birdie/Jack since they are valid but mostly because of the fact they deleted my comments (and probably other comments of people calmly explaining what they got wrong as well as NOT defending with Jack just pointing out the issues) but then again, maybe Slime isn't deleting my comments and it's just youtube eating my comment up, but maybe Slime is considering I can see my comment but just like you said anon, you can't find mine. I do agree with some of Slime's points in the video, I just do not like how they in the comments claim that Jack is guilting people for money as well as them talking about Jack's suicide just as saying that Jack is "threatening" suicide which... if you see him threatening suicide then maybe get in contact with the authorities of Jack's area and alert them about it but that's just my thoughts.

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The first 2 episodes of Hazbin leaked in their entirety and ohhhhh my god they traced from the pilot

They did this on multiple occasions actually, tracing or outright copying shots from the pilot

I don't see a problem, Vivziepop can trace from her own pilot or scenes if she wants but I still think it's really fucking lazy for her team to do

To be honest, seeing as how her team is treated and underpaid, they are allowed to do so, Viv however, should (and have the ways to) pay her team more and let enough time for her team to produce something that doesn't copy what was already done

Tracing is also not that bad IF it's tracing from material they made, many animation studios do it, the problem is that, in each screenshot, the pilot screenshots look better, why ? Because more effort, love, care and money was put into the pilot

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cancatsdraw

yeah i'm mad

Is this what you were talking about? /genq I randomly found this video (didn't watch it cos... ya know just cos), I do wanna give Elan the benefit of a doubt and assume that the guy didn't really thought things through and thought it would be funny while not realizing the issue.

I never played mouthwashing or part of the fandom btw, also don't go harass Elan, just calmly explain to them the problem.

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The first 2 episodes of Hazbin leaked in their entirety and ohhhhh my god they traced from the pilot

They did this on multiple occasions actually, tracing or outright copying shots from the pilot

I don't see a problem, Vivziepop can trace from her own pilot or scenes if she wants but I still think it's really fucking lazy for her team to do

To be honest, seeing as how her team is treated and underpaid, they are allowed to do so, Viv however, should (and have the ways to) pay her team more and let enough time for her team to produce something that doesn't copy what was already done

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flower-boi16

Can we talk about the fact that TOH, a kid's show that aired on the Disney channel, has an unironically a better gay/sapphic relationship with Lumity than either of these "adult shows"?

Lumity is an incredibly well-developed ship; Its gradually built up throughout season 1 and season 2A and they don't drag the shit out of it, they are just incredibly cute together. The ship isn't abusive and toxic...

...unlike Stolitz, which is a very toxic ship where the victim is portrayed as the abuser and the abuser is framed as just an UwU soft boy. Another thing about Lumity that makes it a good relationship is the fact that Amity is her own character; she isn't solely defined by Luz, her relationship with Luz is an important part of her character, sure, but she still has a lot of development in the series that makes her a well-developed, three-dimensional character.

Compare that to Chaggie, which while not nearly as bad as Stolitz, still has issues, that being how Vaggie's character entirely revolves around Charlie, she doesn't have any real development outside of that. There is the stuff about her being a fallen angel but we'll have to see what the show does with it to make a full judgment, but the reveal that she is a fallen angel feels too rushed to give her depth.

Vaggie doesn't feel like her own character, she feels like she's completely defined by her relationship with Charlie, and she doesn't have that much of a character outside of that. Amity meanwhile, is her own character beyond her relationship with Luz, even in Season 2 where people say that supposedly Amity became just "Luz's girlfriend", she still had that whole conflict with her parents.

Lumity is infinitely superior to both of these ships guys.

Then again TOH blows HH/HB out of the water in every single aspect so...

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Watching Hazbin Hotel or Helluva Boss initially kinda feels like comfortably walking up a set of stairs until you stub your toe on a step and violently fall all the way down again.

Because these shows are perfect to watch if you turn your mind off and just watch colours flash before your eyes, but as soon as you start to ask one simple question or just think critically about it, it all falls apart.

  • How do businesses even work in hell when a monetary system is never established and it's said that no one (not even the leaders or royalty) cares about rules and a working system?
  • If no one does care then why are classism and these relationship issues in HB even a problem?
  • What even happens after sinners or imps die?
  • If we don't know what happens why should we care about whenever they're in danger?
  • Why should we care about the exterminations?
  • Why are there prisons and therapy centers in hell when it would be more efficient for the Sins if they'd just kill demons that piss them off?
  • Why aren't these demons just killed when apparently no one would care?
  • If Stolas would be in trouble for giving the grimoire to an imp, how can the I.M.P's just advertise their services out to the public like that?
  • And why has their business model even worked for them so far, when the people they kill can just get to them in hell?
  • Can every sinner make a contract with everyone?
  • If so, then why can't Charlie just make a new contract with Angel Dust that makes the one he has with Valentino useless?
  • Why does Charlie genuinely never do anything to actually help her people out?
  • Why does she desperately want to stop the exterminations but never does anything when Alastor kills so many demons?
  • Why should we give a shit about demons being murdered when so far only a few demons actually tried to be better and the ones that don't try to change are shown to be the worst people ever?
  • How did Vaggie not know angels could be harmed when she literally lost her eye and her wings to an angelic weapon?

(I'm not counting explanations that weren't in the show, one shouldn't have to look up additional material to understand whats going on)

A show having a plothole doesn't necessarily make it bad. But Helluva Boss and Hazbin Hotel have so many inconsistencies not only regarding worldbuilding but also characters. These may seem like small issues but they all pile up to create shows with terrible logic. It's not good writing when a show can't withstand one point of criticism without opening up to a ton of other, even more destructive issues.

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