you can't fix someone else's story by rewriting it
you are not them and you don't know how their story goes
but you can write your own story about the same thing
and vow to write the parts you didn't like differently
#writing#this is how I'm gonna do things from now on#cause who the fuck am I to judge someone's story and tell them it's wrong#or call it bad writing#if they want a legit critique I'll offer some pointers#but when I read I automatically look for parts I like#as opposed to combing it for perfection and getting all disgruntled when it isn't#DON'T MIND ME#JUST SPOUTING OPINIONS HERE#TW:opinions