#dialogue – @she5los on Tumblr

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seladorie

Stiles, hearing a noise outside: ...Derek?

Derek, popping in through the window: What Stiles.

Stiles: I knew it! Keeping tabs on me or just leisurely creeping?

Derek, unimpressed: Neither. I'm actually here to talk to you about our lord & savior Jesus....

Stiles, slamming head on desk: Christ!

Derek, wolfish grin: Exactly.

Stiles, throwing pillow at Derek: Argh! Go away.

Derek: That's not what you said last night. Or this morning. I distinctly remember you telling me to come.

Stiles: *shoving face in pillow & screaming* I'm in love with an asshole.

Derek, happily sighing: Ditto.

#This is the funniest and best writing I've read in a While #Teen Wolf #Sterek #Funny #Drabbles #Dialogue

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bethwoodvilles

“He is the bluntest wooer in Christendom.”

she5los

WHOAHHHHHHH note that switch to “thy” at the end, which is informal, as opposed to “you” at the beginning, which is formal. What a subtle and fantastic addition to a beautiful “fuck you!”

Source: bethwoodvilles

#Dialogue #Badassery #Medieval dialogue

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spleen9000

theclonewriter-blog

“This is your daily, friendly reminder to use commas instead of periods during the dialogue of your story,” she said with a smile.

onewordtest

“Unless you are following the dialogue with an action and not a dialogue tag.” He took a deep breath and sat back down after making the clarifying statement.

“However,” she added, shifting in her seat, “it’s appropriate to use a comma if there’s action in the middle of a sentence.”

tenoko1

“True.” She glanced at the others. “You can also end with a period if you include an action between two separate statements.”

cj-amused

Things I didn’t know

#Writing #Dialogue #Reference #Good to note that ''added'' is a dialogue tag though #You can add actions and things after that #but it transitions you from dialogue into non-dialogue