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A Garridebs moment isn’t what we need

I know, this sight was painful. Moffat left the three Garridebs hanging, showing us what we wanted and let them fall into the water, drowing them.

Still, we must first admit one thing to understand what happened: why were we so upset?

What is that Garrideb moment we all wanted? What did Moffat steal from us? Why don’t we ask Mosstiff what the three Garridebs stand for?

MOFFAT: “In the whole sixty story canon, Doyle allows one moment of genuine affection between Sherlock Holmes and Dr Watson. You always know it’s there. There’s one moment in ‘The Three Garridebs’-”
GATISS: “You’ve hurt my Watson.”
MOFFAT “-when Holmes for a moment … yeah, ‘You’ve hurt my Watson.’ And that’s it. And I think, arguably – and we would argue quite strongly – that under the surface – you know, the detective stories are merely the surface – is the story of the greatest friendship ever.”

This is what Mofftiss have destroyed, what they have reduced to a tasteless joke. The one moment we all know Holmes cared about Watson, that’s what they took. Sixty stories and if anyone ever asks why Watson is important, you just have to show this moment.

But, let’s be honest, did we really need the three Garridebs to know Sherlock cares about John?

Moffat is right: sixty stories, one moment of pure and unquestionable affection. Can we really say Sherlock has never shown his feelings for John before when he:

  • Jumped from a rooftop to save his life,
  • Brought himself back to life because he was in danger,
  • Killed Magnussen and basically destroyed his life to protect John and Mary,
  • Went straight to hell, not knowing if John was going to save him in hope of helping John?

I’m not saying John understands the depth of Sherlock affection, but we, the audience? We know. We don’t need Sherlock panicking at the thought of John being in danger, we saw Sherlock running to a bonfire and save John with his bare hands.

The Three Garridebs was comforting, we want to think that no matter what, we’ll get it. Sadly, this isn’t ACD Holmes, this is BBC Sherlock and when it comes to following canon, Mofftiss loves turning everything on its head, every time, here are the most obvious:

ASiP: Not Rachel, Rache -> Or course it’s not Rache, it’s her daughter’s name Rachel.
AsiB: Adler didn’t see through my disguise, what she won anyway? -> I know you’re not a priest Mr. Holmes, I knew from the beginning, what? You saw through my plan? Sherlocked.
THoB: Beware the hound -> It wasn’t a hound Henry, it was a man.
HLV: We got the letters and Milverton got killed by a strange woman -> There never was any letters, Sherlock killed Magnussen after being shot by Mary.
TST: And inside the Napoleon was the Borgia Pearl, who would have thought? -> Let me show you, inside this bust the Borgia Pearl… oh shit,
TLD: Don’t do anything. Hide. Quick if you love me! -> Save me, stop him. Quick if you love me!

This isn’t even a complete list. Every single time Mofftiss changed the story, the canon answer is always the wrong one. Of course the Three Garridebs needed to follow the pattern.

They threw the Three Garridebs away because that’s not the right answer, not this time. That’s not what we need.

What do we need then?

We need to counter this.

What is this? This is the anti-Garrideb.

Holmes lost it when Watson got shot. It was rather superficial but it didn’t matter, Holmes was absolutely livid. ” If you had killed Watson, you would not have got out of this room alive.”

John? John forgave her. Sherlock got shot in the chest, he flat-lined, she shot him even though he was trying to help and John forgave Mary for almost killing his friend. He even hugs her.

That is our Garribeds, the plot twist we’ve never wanted, the cross John has to bear.

No, we are past the point where Sherlock needs to fret over John, we know. But over the past years, since S3 in fact, we cannot quite believe John loves Sherlock, we can barely even think he cares about him after forgiving his shooter and beating him in TLD.

The Three Garridebs are not the answer. It’s not Sherlock who has to prove his love, John is the one who needs to show us the depth of his feelings.

We don’t need a Three Garridebs, but we desperatedly need a reverse Garridebs. 

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Chapter 11 – The Importance of Being Earnest [TFP 1/3]

This episode is huge. When I first watched it, I hated it. I still have mixed feelings towards it, but what I do know is that there is a huge amount to unpack in it, and I don’t think there’s a way to do this other than chronologically without missing a bit. So – here we go. This is broken down into readable chunks so that it’s not hellish to read, hence the chapters!

We open with the little girl on the aeroplane – this is a metaphor I’ve gone into in reasonable detail in chapter 2 X, so please refer back if you need to, but TLDR: planes/height symbolise dying, the plane scenario is going round and round in the Eurus/trauma part of Sherlock’s brain that is utterly repressed, he finally breaks through to her and then finally to the childhood heart of his trauma and recognises that it is all in his head. That’s the arc of the aeroplane scenario across the episode – so when we open TFP, we open in full panic mode. This is Sherlock in the middle of his childhood panic, in the Eurus part of his brain that represents trauma and convinced this could kill him – we don’t know yet that it can’t. The only person we can talk to is Jim on the phone, welcoming the girl to the final problem. I’ve talked about MP!Jim representing John being in mortal danger, and here we are at last. Sherlock mentally ended the last episode having recognised that John is in danger – the problem is how to break through the trauma to wake himself up. Jim’s voice is important here, because it’s the link back to John – this episode takes place so deep inside Sherlock’s psyche that we run the risk of forgetting the central problem, that John is in danger, and so the Moriarty link is crucial.

Then we have our opening credits, which always fill me with a Pavlovian excitement, even when it’s for an episode I have such mixed emotions about. Then, we get on to the strange scenario that Sherlock and John set up to prove that Mycroft has been lying about Eurus. In metaphorical terms, this is nice; the first third of the episode is about Sherlock finally integrating his brain (MP!Mycroft) and his heart (MP!John), and after having finally reconnected with his heart at the end of TLD it makes sense for the heart to be finally making demands of the brain, forcing it to compromise for the first time. However, before we look at that…

This scene is another rehearsal. Rehearsals are drawn to our attention in TSoT, but we see them elsewhere – TAB, for example, is a rehearsal for the hardcore EMPing of s4. These rehearsals are performances in miniature, not insignificant in themselves but most important in the guide they provide for the real thing. TFP is a messy and complicated episode, and this rehearsal is foreshadowing the game that’s going to follow.

The first thing that this tells us about Eurus’s game is that it’s not real. This isn’t just that Sherlock can talk her down from her invented aeroplane, or that he can break out of the fake cellar in the Musgrave grounds. What we’re being told here is that the game is actually impossible; it can’t be happening. Look at the blood coming out of the portraits’ eyes that is never explained, for example, or the doors slamming at just the right moments like a horror film. It’s not possible, as the female voice in the scenario literally says, pointing out that nothing is impossible. This isn’t true. This, in fact, goes against the one thing everybody knows about Sherlock Holmes. They draw attention to this by focusing on his crap irrelevant deductions in TLD, but they make it even more obvious here; nothing is impossible. Eliminate everything impossible and whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth. Eliminating TFP would be foolhardy – they’ve chosen to show it to us for a reason – but it’s certainly not the truth.

Next – the use of a child’s silhouette. Admittedly, the little girl in the aeroplane simulation turns out not to be a child, but Sherlock’s choice to use a child to scare Mycroft is odd, because Eurus is no longer a child. What’s even stranger is that Mycroft treats the child like she’s an enemy, rather than trying to help her – it’s like he imagines that the child is Eurus. In the real world, this would be completely bizarre, given that Eurus is a thirty-something year old woman. But this is not the real world. This is a world where different timelines, memories, parts of Sherlock’s brain can all mix and are all equally dangerous – hence the genuine fear of the child. It’s the same panic that the child in the plane is actually crashing, although the plane doesn’t exist, or the children in the memories seeming to ask the adults remembering to come to play with them. There’s an interplay between the agentic parts of Sherlock (Sherlock himself, brain!Mycroft, heart!John, trauma!Eurus) and everything repressed and unreal within his psyche – it’s all equally dangerous.

Now – what is it that actually happens when they play the trick on Mycroft? They’re not just coming after him – they’re infecting the house he lives in, with voices that carry on the wind, attacking his portraits, using the swords against him etc. This is important – the house that MP!Mycroft lives in can be seen as the kind of world that Sherlock’s brain wants to inhabit that is made impossible by the existence of Eurus, and the first thing that’s so striking about that world is its age. Mycroft already dresses like he’s in another era, something that I should have thought about long ago – the house backs up the idea that he’s in the wrong time period somehow. We can see his obsession with the past through the many portraits (probably of ancestors) which hang on the walls – but these are the first things that Sherlock and John attack, having them bleed from the eyes. (As mentioned before, this is fucky and remains completely unexplained.) This is an attack on the past, which is good news for us – finally moving forwards! But it’s also a specific attack on the eyes, which is interesting given how important sight is here – Sherlock needs to wake up, for which he needs Eurus to open her eyes, and more generally the theme of the show since 2010 has been that there’s something ‘hiding in plain sight’. It’s as though heart!John taking his rightful primacy in Sherlock’s psyche is hurting the eyes of the past, which have been previously surrounding and informing brain!Mycroft.

The most screaming question to come out of this section of TFP, though, is how the cliffhanger of the previous episode was resolved. So Eurus shot John with a dart, even though it was the same gun that killed his wife. Even if we accept that, how on earth do we accept that Eurus just left him there? For what – for the person who owns the house to find? What happened when he told Sherlock he had a sister? These are all really valuable questions and important moments which are notably absent from the show – we feel cheated by a cliffhanger without resolution, and rightly so. I want to hypothesise, however, that moving away from surface level, this makes sense. We can’t resolve the cliffhanger situation because it hasn’t been resolved – the cliffhanger, which tells us that John is in mortal danger in the real world, can’t be resolved until Sherlock wakes up. How, then, is John with him? The simple answer is that there are two Johns. That sounds not-so-simple, but when you break down John’s functions within the MP it’s the only way this can work.

Since TSoT, we’ve had a working understanding of Mycroft as the brain and John as the heart, existing as a dichotomy within Sherlock’s psyche, and we shouldn’t abandon that. The John that we see in TFP is heart!John, trying to work with brain!Mycroft for the first time rather than against him, even whilst brain!Mycroft acknowledges his new lack of primacy. However, this series is about Sherlock working out what’s going on with John in the real world, so there’s a kind of hypothesis!John floating around as well. This John isn’t Sherlock’s heart, because the crucial thing about hypothesis!John is that Sherlock spends most of the first two episodes in the series trying to work him out – what’s going on with him? How is he in danger? And we last see him at the end of TLD, being shot by therapist!Eurus – that’s what’s going on with him. (Explained in detail in chapter 7 X). So here, heart!John’s paltry excuses for what happened should feel paltry – they’re just barely covering the hole in surface plot. In EMP terms, it leaves that cliffhanger open – it’s still going, basically. We still don’t know whether John lives or dies, because from that point onwards we only see heart!John. It seems odd on the surface that John is the one who puts forward the idea of a simulation for Mycroft, but within the MP this makes perfect sense – because John and Mycroft are the two entities who primarily make up Sherlock, heart!John has the separation that Sherlock doesn’t to be able to let brain!Mycroft recognise what he’s been hiding from Sherlock.

There are three elements of this scene which bother me in minor ways, and thus far I haven’t managed to get an answer to – if anybody has any thoughts on these bits in particular, I would love to know. First is that Sherlock wears a deerstalker in this scene, which is normally a symbol of enforced heterosexuality. It’s a strange place for this to come up – it doesn’t thematically tie to anything that’s going on in the scene. The second is the film that Mycroft is watching – it’s not a real film, but a random scene in film noir style that they shot just for TFP. Again, I’m certain this must have significance, otherwise they would have just put on Double Indemnity as a nod to Wilder. The age of the film and of the cinema vibe points to the era of Rathbone adaptations, suggesting someone stuck in the past again, but I’m not sure that’s enough motivation to write an entirely new film scene. The final question is why Mycroft seems to have something tied around one elbow but not the other. This shouldn’t bother me as much as it does, but there we go. Food for thought, if anyone wants to attempt those?

In the meantime, let’s turn to look at the next scene – Mycroft in Baker Street. This is one of those scenes that people have picked up on as fucky – there is no way all three of them could have escaped from Baker Street completely unscathed, for starters, let alone the skull and headphones remain completely intact at the end. As well as this, John army-doctor Watson not recognising what a grenade is? And Sherlock can’t either? Bull shit. So we need to read this scene metaphorically.

I’m firmly of the belief that the first third of the episode, culminating in this scene, is about Sherlock finally integrating his heart and mind, and brain!Mycroft finally coming to Baker Street to engage with them in truthful terms feels like a mark of that. Mycroft, the brain, was aware of Sherlock’s trauma and repressed it. In finally telling the truth, he can come together with the heart and try to beat it. This all makes sense – and tonally, it feels right for Mycroft to be there. One of the odd things about TFP is that although Sherlock has always been about our two leads, in TFP they suddenly feel like a golden trio – and it works. I can’t imagine those three working in any situation outside the bizarreness of EMP – imagine the horror of Mycroft coming on a case with them – so again, the tonal shift makes me feel like there’s a subconscious awareness of a different dynamic between brain!Mycroft, heart!John and Sherlock than we might otherwise have.

Of course, it’s the final acknowledgement of the trauma that blows up Baker Street, often seen as a safe haven (and phrased as such by John in the previous scene) and, in true dream logic, seems to create the east wind that blows our boys all the way to Sherrinford. No in-between injuries (which there would definitely be), no questions about Mycroft’s disguise, or where he came from or where Sherlock went, how they got the boat, anything. It’s not enough for Sherlock to want to go and rescue Eurus – the trauma (in the form of the patience grenade) quite literally needs to be the catalyst. This is the place that Sherlock never wants to go, and he’s forced into it.

Of course, the most strikingly queer moment in this scene is the Oscar Wilde conversation, a set up for a joke (or not) about Mycroft dressing up as Lady Bracknell that gets repeated throughout the episode. I pride myself on knowing a little bit about Oscar Wilde, and so we’re going to take a detour – it’s important, I promise.

The Importance of Being Earnest is probably the most successful play by Oscar Wilde. It was first performed in 1895, the same year as TAB, the same year as the poem It is always 1895 which is so important in this show, the same year that Oscar Wilde himself went on trial for gross indecency. The play is about a man called Jack who has two lives, one in the town where he’s called Ernest (and can do immoral things with his even more immoral male best friend and go after the woman he loves) and in the countryside, where he lives a respectable life under the name of Jack. Unsurprisingly, this play has been read very queerly over the years, particularly with regard to the double-life ideas and the dandyish immorality of Jack’s “best friend”, Algy. The quote used in the show is ‘truth is rarely pure and never simple’ – here’s the full quote.

 The truth is rarely pure and never simple. Modern life would be very tedious if it were either, and modern literature a complete impossibility!

This line is given by Algy, just when Jack has explained to him the double life situation and describes it as ‘pure and simple’. Two bros discussing their double lives in 1895 written by the most famous gay in history. I don’t know, I’m just extrapolating from the data…

So, an interesting choice of line given that TFP is about Sherlock having two lives – Sherlock Holmes, who has previously always lived within established canon, and Sherrinford Holmes, the metafictional outsider who Sherlock is trying to block out. Now, how do these lines feature in the narrative of TFP?

The most shocking thing, on a surface level, is that the Holmes brothers wouldn’t recognise this line. Wilde is possibly the most quotable man in history, and this is one of his famous ones – it’s even up in Dublin Aeroport (my local aeroport, so perhaps I’m biased here – but rest assured I knew the line the second they said it, and I know plenty of other viewers knew it long before the Holmeses did). Mycroft had even been in the play. The most intelligent man in England? It doesn’t make sense. So, once again, down we go to the metaphorical level.

[best picture I could find of the Oscar Wilde quote in Dublin Aeroport – sorry!]

Heart!John being the only person who recognises Oscar Wilde has an obvious connotation – Wilde represents queer love, but he also represents through TAB the queer love that has always been there. The green carnations in TAB, Heimish the Ideal Husband? That’s all Oscar Wilde, but it’s all in the background, and heart!John only voices it at what he thinks is the final moment – and I do believe that in this moment, the trinity of Sherlock here really do believe they are going to be enveloped by the trauma. Mortal danger leads to that confession, if only in oblique terms – an oblique Garridebs moment, then.

Just as interesting is that Mycroft played Lady Bracknell in school. Lady Bracknell is the old aunt who is the obstacle to love in the play, objecting that Jack’s not good enough for Gwendolen and Cecily’s not good enough for Algy. Brain!Mycroft, who has been dominating heart!John for a long time in the MP, has indeed been an obstacle to love. Mentioning this once might have been a throwaway gag – it’s mentioned at least three times, which points to it being a pretty significant point of comparison. The three times that it is mentioned, two are Sherlock complimenting Mycroft on his Lady Bracknell at the point. Both times Sherlock compliments Mycroft on his Lady Bracknell have been standout moments for me because they’ve been notably peaceful – these two brothers are always bickering and even fighting, and although I’ve made the claim that this is the moment and the episode where Sherlock’s brain stops giving Sherlock a hard time and starts being kind to him, the reverse has to be true as well, right? Sherlock accepts that his brain has held him back before, and the key thing is that he no longer resents brain!Mycroft - because this episode is about being kind to himself and coming to terms with himself. Accepting that Mycroft has been a good Lady Bracknell means accepting that Mycroft had his reasons for behaving like this – socio-cultural, presumably, like Lady Bracknell’s own, right? - and that like Jack in Ernest, he doesn’t resent her/him for it, but neither do those restrictions continue. It’s a lovely metaphorical way to reintegrate Sherlock’s brain comfortably into his psyche whilst acknowledging that the big problem between them has been a queer one – Oscar Wilde, 1895.

It’s also part of a running motif since the start of the EMP, which is declarations of love at the point of death – the dialogue between Sherlock and Mycroft is of course meaningful and important, but heart!John saying ‘Oscar Wilde’ at the point of death is one of the clearest of these moments, and definitely the queerest. I teach English to kids, and this is something that we call a ‘holistic motif’, where you pick a consistent motif and have it run through a story, and eventually the audience starts thinking – I’ve seen this before, it must be important. The classic one in Sherlock is ‘hiding in plain sight’, which has an important purpose for tjlc, but this one starts to dominate in EMP (although it does exist in The Empty Hearse as well). It’s as though this idea is going round and round in Sherlock’s head, in various forms, until his psyche can finally process it (once he’s dealt with his trauma).

The next bit of analysis will take us to Sherrinford, so this feels like a good place to stop this chapter. The next chapter will go through the Sherrinford section of TFP, as this feels like a reasonable way to segment the episode. See you then!

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sarahthecoat

oh, it’s SO GOOD to have time to read this next chapter!

I also barely made it through TFP once, only by using knitting did I manage. But at the very same time that I knew you couldn’t pay me to watch it again, i could tell it was just BURSTING with subtext. I didn’t know how to parse it yet, but I knew it was there. I finally went from lurker to blogger here because I wanted to keep up with the lovely meta writers who began to tease it apart, and are still doing so!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE that this episode really gets into the nitty-gritty of the personal integration Sherlock is doing. It’s hard, messy work, it does “go round and round” until he’s ready to do it.

I wonder if the deerstalker in the scene in “Mycroft’s house” is part of the suggestion that we are looking into the past? dealing with the limitations of the many adaptations that didn’t try to look below the surface of the canon. Maybe that’s also to do with why the “scare mycroft” plan was heart!John’s rather than Sherlock’s own?

I DO remember reading meta about the little film noir clip that Mycroft was watching. I will try to track that down, but one of the disadvantages of going from lurking via browser, to blogging via app, was not making and filing bookmarks so much any more. It had to do with the romantic banter between the detective character and the woman who is maybe a suspect? she’s kind of teasing him about interrogating her?

and again I really only watched this once, and I don’t have the DVD, but is Mycroft wearing a sleeve garter on one arm but not the other? those were to keep your sleeve cuff from getting messed up in your ink, back when you wrote everything by hand with a fountain pen and didn’t want to smear the ink before it dried. If so, then maybe another suggestion that this is looking into the past?

The “grenade” in 221B: I’ve always been given to understand that bombs in this show represent the idea of a #confirmed gay relationship between John and Sherlock, ie “dropping that bombshell” on the audience. So the bomb vest John has in TGG doesn’t go off, and the heart shaped train car bomb in TEH doesn’t go off, and in TFP when it finally does, of course they aren’t harmed by it, because there’s really nothing wrong with being gay and in love!

The only thought I can toss out about why Mycroft is suddenly “disguised” as a fisherman, is that “going fishing” means looking for something you know is there? especially, trying to hook something that’s underwater (water=emotions, subconscious) and bring it up to the surface? So Brain!Mycroft is fully on-team with bringing up the old trauma to finally heal it.

I love what you said about Sherlock being nice to Brain!Mycroft about his Lady Bracknell, meaning that he’s acknowledging that the brain has reasons to repress trauma until one is ready to process it. That’s my understanding of trauma work, that it’s ok for the person to only bring to awareness as much of it as they feel ready to deal with. There’s nothing to be gained by forcing it too soon. This is making me review John’s meeting with Mycroft back in ASIP, as Brain!Mycroft encountering Heart!John, and gently checking him out, how much is he ready to take on yet? Can we work together?

Thank you again for this whole series!

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The Final Problem Is Staying Alive

I’ve never written any sort of meta before, but after rewatching Reichenbach, I’ve got to write this down, just in case anyone can make some sort of sense out of it. 

In The Reichenbach Fall, Moriarty keeps on talking about ‘The Final Problem,’ I as paying attention, just in case there’s any sort of clue there to figure out the s4 fuckiness. 

And, when they’re on the roof of Bart’s, Moriarty says that the final problem is staying alive, and it brought to mind the ending of The Lying Detective. 

John was shot, supposedly with a tranquiliser gun, which I don’t believe for a second, in front of a mat that looks a LOT like a pool of blood. 

What if this is the Final Problem - John’s bleeding out, and he’s trying to stay alive? What if this is actually Garriebs, and John is actually bleeding out, waiting for someone (Sherlock) to save him? 

I don’t have any textual evidence, or if anyone has come up with this before, they probably have and I’m just incredibly slow on the uptake, but I thought I’d put it out there, just in case. 

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This is indeed an older idea that’s been floating around in fandom. It was even what sparked my very first fic. That’s okay, just because other fans thought of it before, that doesn’t make your thoughts any less legit!

Personally - not that I hold the Only Truth or whatever - I’ve stepped down from this idea. Because to me, the fuckiness of s4 started long before John gets shot (Mary’s super odd death scene for example). And I have a hard time accepting Eurus as an actual character that they actually meant seriously. ;)

A certain branch in fandom does think John Watson is in danger. Which is supported by believable evidence. Others have other good theories. Time will tell, I suppose.

I’m a believer in the TD12 theory - that the fuckiness started at the beginning of s4 because Mary is dosing them both with TD12, hence the plot holes/weird Mary death scene. Then, I reckon that it was actually Mary who shot John, I’m not entirely sure why yet, but it’s just a faint idea in my head at the moment. 

I’m in agreement that Eurus isn’t real though, she can’t possibly be! 

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That's certainly a possibility, and i agree with @fellshish , the more fans that pick up on something independently, the more likely it is to be something the writers WANT us to see. "Staying alive" and what the "final problem" are, do get repeated so as to catch our attention! WELCOME to the wonderful world of meta, it's so engaging to me, how many different interpretations all work!

There is the theme of drugs and poison running through the whole show, and loads of meta about it, from the cabbie and "drugs bust" in ASIP, to irene injecting sherlock in ASIB, the fear-gas in THOB, sherlock's comment on poisoning john in TSOT (and john being doctorly in his office), the flophouse and xmas in HLV, all of TAB, etc. On a metaphorical level, it looks like drugs might stand for "the chemistry of love", which sherlock finds at first frightening and disorienting, "a more vicious motivator", some thing he's trying to avoid. If "mary" is non-con drugging them, that suggests fake love, forced, manipulation.

It's also nifty that you picked up on the gun/tranquilizer thing. There was a lot of close examination of the various guns right after s4 aired, and determining which ones matched john's, or matched mary's, or neither, if you can get search to work, try #gun meta in my archive. Isn't it interesting that the drugs metaphor got crossed with the guns metaphor? (Guns are often a metaphor for dicks, and @sagestreet has written recently about WHY these writers might be using murder as a metaphor for falling in love)

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i’m on the fence about how the self-inflicted garridebs could occur to john (especially how with a gunshot wound the chances of survival are quite minuscule unless the bullet manages to either ricochet or pass through without damaging major part of the face/brain) but we have to recognize that the amount of suicide attempts done with a gun are following a very distinct pattern through the show, especially in s4 and tfp.

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soooo there’s a pretty neat workaround to your realities-of-a-gunshot-to-the-face problem in the valley of fear, where the case starts with a dead guy whose whole face has been blown off by a sawed-off shotgun, and ends with the realization that the dead guy isn’t the guy they thought it was

Isn’t the guy from TFP also named David? The one pictured in this photo set holding a gun to his head? (I can’t find the answer with a cursory google, and I haven’t re-watched in a while, but it makes for a nice symmetry.)

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sarahthecoat

hmm, yes. I like any reference to VALL. It reminds me of @finalproblem 's metas on it.

also, thats how irene faked her death in ASIB.

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gosherlocked

Walls - ASiP/TFP

Ohhhhhhh …..

Soooo…

Each episode in S4 foreshadows the next. John saved Sherlock in ASIP…Sherlock saves John in S5, Garridebs moment.

Yes, @shadow3214 one wonders if such a thing could come to pass if the story continues. TFP contained just the names - Garrideb and Evens - but nothing from the original storyline. Also - it’s good to keep in mind that this particular story is one of ten, still under copyright protection. Would the creators split the story up for two separate series? Doing first the names without the plot and later the plot without the names? I don’t konw. But while writing up my last post ‘Another sign of three’ some thoughts came to mind … about Sherlock casting three main-characters, to act as different facettes of himself, on his Mind-Stage: Sherlock, Mary and John. Maybe one representing his past, one his present and one his future? The thing is - each of the three characters is hated by several other people, each of them shot another person at some point in the story. John shot the Hope, Mary shot Sherlock, Sherlock shot Magnusson. But only two of them - Sherlock and Mary - got shot themselves…… yet.

If there is a ‘rule of three’ … a 'sign of three’ ….  and if indeed these three characters are one and the same on Sherlock's Mind-Stage ….  then John is the one who hasn’t yet been shot in a similar way. Sure, there is his war injury. But this happened outside of the story told on screen. Therefore I think it isn’t that far fetched to assume such a scenario - John getting seriously wounded - could indeed play out if there is a fifth series.

Yeah. I’m certain that John is Redbeard, and he is either hurt or going to be, and Sherlock’s mind is trying to blocking it with metaphors, but it’s corrupted with real memories. There’s a line in TFP that made me think of the copyright issue, but I can’t remember what it was. Maybe it’s the line: “This is all we get.” The whole scene is sarcastic, much like TFP. Hanging them is definitely a cliffhanger. And no I don’t think we need the names to have the moment. What is important, and why this show isn’t over…is John must acknowledge the love and loyalty behind the mask. TFP was all about breaking Sherlock free from that mask. Isn’t John’s last line in the series: “You better get over here.” ?? Sherlock better get to John. Save him from the facade/darkness that had taken over Sherlock’s own life. Save John from dying or hurting himself. We really are back at the beginning. Sherlock can save John with love instead of taking him to a crime scene. This time it could be their own crime scene. JW parallels. Ugh. Sad stuff, sorry. @ebaeschnbliah

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The (Non-Existent) Garridebs Moment...

You guys know that I belong to the rare kind of johnlock shipper who actually loved series four. I loved the depth of emotion of it all, I loved the imagery (I still can’t get over that “touch the glass”-scene) and I loved, loved, loved the relationship growth between John and Sherlock. 

(And yes, I will use that gif until I die.)

But there were moments that were harder to love than others. Above all: The scene with the three Garridebs. However,  there was a really good reason why the writers did what they did. And this is what the rest of this post is about.

First Of All: Why Is That Scene Such A Big Deal?

The Adventure Of The Three Garridebs by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle is often described as “the gayest adventure in ACD canon, ever”, because of the compassionate moment which Holmes and Watson share after Watson is injured:

“You’re not hurt, Watson? For God’s sake, say that you are not hurt!”
It was worth a wound – it was worth many wounds – to know the depth of loyalty and love which lay behind that cold mask. The clear, hard eyes were dimmed for a moment, and the firm lips were shaking. For the one and only time I caught a glimpse of a great heart as well as of a great brain.“ (source)

Even those who don’t see a gay subtext in the original series still recognise the milestone that this moment poses in their relationship. Holmes comes completely undone in the face of losing Watson. In other words: Whether romance or bromance - this canon adventure is a big deal within the fandom and must be a huge moment in any modern adaptation, too. 

False Promises In The Modern Adaptation

But the Garridebs scene in The Final Problem was strikingly not that. In fact, it was anything but. The scene goes by super quickly, it is anticlimactic between all those high-stake challenges, and Sherlock is more composed than he has been in the entire series. There seems to be no emotional or story telling value to this scene whatsoever.  

Why would the writers give us such a scene in the first place, let alone have it include one of the most expectation-loaded references to ACD canon? True, we have had quite a few “Garridebs moments” in the past (the swimming pool scene in The Great Game comes to mind), so perhaps the writers felt we didn’t need any more of such moments. But then why bring it up at all? Why get everybody’s hopes up and then not act on it? Why not reference any other adventure? No, this was deliberate. Mofftiss are up to something. And it is time for some tin hatting (or, as it was called in my day, literary analysis). 

Chekhov’s Gun

Many of you will have heard of the principle of Chekhov’s gun by now: 

Chekhov’s gun is a dramatic principle that states that every element in a story must be necessary, and irrelevant elements should be removed; elements should not appear to make “false promises” by never coming into play. [..]
“Remove everything that has no relevance to the story. If you say in the first chapter that there is a rifle hanging on the wall, in the second or third chapter it absolutely must go off. If it’s not going to be fired, it shouldn’t be hanging there”
(source: Wikipedia, emphasis added by me)

Chekhov’s gun has been a recent discussion point in the fandom, after Louise Brealey brought it up in a *slightly* pissed off tweet of hers. 

Yes, read some fucking Chekhov. Every scene is there for a reason. As is the Garridebs reference. And indeed, just in case we wouldn’t get it, Mofftiss put an actual rifle on the wall in the Garridebs scene, basically to confirm, if we had doubts, that they know what they are doing. Subtlety be damned. 

A seemingly pointless scene, a promising reference that remains unfulfilled, and a reminder that there shall never be pointlessness or broken promises in drama - either, Mofftiss have gone completely bananas or the message is: We wouldn’t give you all these gay references, if we weren’t planning on following through eventually. 

And Then There Are The Red Walls

If you are having doubts about which of the above two options it is, let me draw your attention to another seemingly pointless detail in this scene: The red walls. 

Mofftiss, I think, are referring to H.G.Wells’s “The Red Room” here, a short story published in 1896 (x). In short, after having slept one night in a supposedly haunted room, the narrator comes to the conclusion that the room is indeed haunted, but not by ghosts, but by fear itself.

In Eurus’s experiment, the red walls have no apparent function. Perhaps they make the atmosphere slightly more creepy, but they do not have any impact on the challenge, Eurus isn’t really concerned with them at all, and it just all seems a bit odd. And yet, Mofftiss are wasting valuable screen time by having Sherlock comment on the red walls. So they are important. 

Additionally, only this one room has red walls. If this is supposed to make things creepier, why not paint all of the rooms? The answer is: Because the read walls are relevant to this room and this scene only: to the unfulfilled promise of the Garridebs moment.

Mofftiss would not give us all this relationship development between John and Sherlock if they weren’t planning on going somewhere with them. All that is haunting the johnlock fandom is fear itself. 

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Oh, thank you, this is interesting! it's no secret that i didn't enjoy s4, but i so appreciate this articulation of what's hopeful in it.

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The First Meeting and The Three Garridebs are the first versions to EVER be adapted on screen.=“Tells us all we need to know.”

I was chatting with @waitedforgarridebs who pointed out another reason why the three Garrideb brothers scene in The Final Problem stung so much (you know apart from it being the total opposite of canon and John seeing Sherlock’s heart but I digress ;) )

This was the first time a ‘the three Garridebs scene’ was adapted for the screen- our first chance to see it for real. And, of course, we didn’t get a genuine Garridebs moment. 

But this has happened before. Steven and Mark have waxed lyrical before about how they were the first to adapt John and Sherlock’s first meeting scene- including Sherlock whipping the corpse from A Study in Scarlet. 

And, they loved doing it so much that they did it twice.  We have the first one, the modern version in A Study in Pink- the magic “Afghanistan or Iraq?” exchange, the flirtatious wink.

And then, we have The Abominable Bride- they clearly rejoiced in revisiting it! Except now we have John viewing the rather suggestive Sherlock whipping the corpse scene- see: The Abominable Bride is A Study In Pink inverted

Two scenes that have never been adapted for screen before.

One that was enthralling, done twice, and done very well.

One that was, to put it mildly, butchered. 

One is consistent.

The other isn’t.

Compared to the two first meeting scenes. it sticks out like a sore thumb. This wasn’t our beloved Garridebs moment. It wouldn’t be wasted like that, without any follow-up. This second scene is coming. 

Okay so I was going to reply to this post, but it sucked me into a deep, dark black hole of meta writing and I ended up creating multiple posts:

One: Here is the actual reply to your complaints about the Garridebs moment.

Two: It also made me realise that every one of Eurus’s challenges was designed for one of our three heroes. The first on is morality and thereby a challenge for Mycroft (who practically lives on the moral high ground). The second one is about justice - the absence of which severely rattles John. The third one is about love and that is for Sherlock. Here is my meta on the latter.

Three: I felt there were so many little Garridebs moments over the entire episode that it led me to create this post

Thanks for the inspiration! :-)

Oh, but The Three Garridebs have been done before but on both occassions the ‘special’ event has been cut from the story:

Granada did it with 'The Mazarin Stone’ which was a mix with Garridebs. Jeremy Brett was very ill at the time and not able to work. So Charles Gray (Mycroft) became the main investigator in this episode. Needless to say that without Sherlock Holmes himself the famous 3G moment was missing too.

The new russian Holmes by Andrey Kavun used a big part of the 'Garrideb’ story as well. The episode 'Halifax’ is a mix of 'Red-headed League’ and 'Study in Scarlet’ but there is also a main theme of Garridebs in it because this story isn’t about an ordinary bank robbery like 'Red-headed' - it’s all about forgery like in 'Garridebs’. Moriarty’s people want to replace the royal mint press with a forged one - stealing the original - which would ruin the british economy.

Holmes, Watson and Lestrade are hiding in the vaults of the bank, waiting for the people who want to replace the press. It comes to heavy shooting which even encreases when the police force also enters the vaults. It’s a real show down with a lot of dead people but despite of it all the 3G Moment is missing as well.

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Interesting discussion, some links to follow up on.

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Anonymous asked:

Hello! I was just wondering if you have any ideas on """dale pike's""" Within the Narrative? I don't know what to think of it, because the writing style doesn't seem like fanfic to me and there's enough levels of meta-y things to drown me in. if mofftiss wrote us fanfiction I am going to explode

oh god ‘Within the narrative’ killed me. Oh God. Okay, deep breath. I’ll do the same as I did for ‘The One Word Test’ here, just go through and pick out the most relevant quotes for me as I go along. 

THIS JUST ANALYSES THE INTRODUCTION ‘CAUSE IT GOT LONG. If folk are interested, I could try and pick apart the whole fic if I don’t die from the attempt sos adhflslhgsjlf.

Hope this helps! From the beginning, then?

Okay, so first we have the weird tagging system- why is the fic tagged as both a Tragedy and a Comedy? Well, because of this opening quote from The Three Garridebs: It may have been a comedy, or it may have been a tragedy. It cost one man his reason, it cost me a blood-letting, and it cost yet another man the penalties of the law. Yet there was certainly an element of comedy. Well, you shall judge for yourselves.” See this post by @teaandqueerbaiting!

^I take this to mean we’ve got our ‘comedy’ Garridebs in The Final Problem, the cheap dangling Garridebs brothers gag. We’re still waiting for our truly emotional, true Garridebs scene between John and Sherlock.

Then, we come to the summary and opening notes to chapter 1:

Right, who on earth is Proper Dave? See this and this post by @may-shepard  @laughing-at-the-darkness and @221bloodnun. Proper Dave is a character from the Doctor Who episode Silence in the Library, written by Steven Moffat and directed by Euros Lyn, who also directed The Blind Banker.

Proper Dave is a PILOT (ooh little on the plane in TFP: ‘the driver’s asleep!’) He’s called ‘Proper Dave’ in contrast with another crew member named ‘Other Dave’ because ‘Proper Dave’ was there before him. It’s never twins, Watson. 

I’ve not watched this episode but basically for some reason Proper Dave “acquires an extra shadow”- this means the villains of the episode are attacking him. The Doctor tries to save him but fails, leaving Proper Dave’s “data ghost” to echo his last thoughts: “Hey, who turned out the lights?” Side-note: if this is the 4th favourite fic, I wonder where Proper Dave’s 3rd and other fave fics are… ;)

Now, what about the “A boring story” bit? I cannot for the life of me find the quote, but I remember Steven once describing The Three Garridebs as “a very boring story”- clearly tongue in cheek as it’s one of the most iconic moments of ACD canon, even saying in his own foreward to the stories that “you’ll be blinking back tears when the moment comes.” (x) Tagging @waitedforgarridebs in case she knows where the quote is, the resident Garridebs expert. ;)

“about the stuff between the lines.”- well, we’re all very good at finding that.

And the notes. Of course, nothing is certain, but to me these only become worthwhile and genuinely funny if you see them as written by someone who’s…well… very much an insider on the show. “Series 4 and 5 spoiler alerts”- that’s very presumptuous of you. ;) Saying they’ve deduced things correctly, including what they’re “probably” going to call the Watson baby– this is so funny if at this point they genuinely hadn’t decided what the baby was going to be called lmao.

Then we get one of the most bizarre meta introductions I’ve had the pleasure of reading:

“Most people think they know what’s going to happen. Perhaps you’ll dismiss this narrative early, thinking it is boring and banal and not worth the distance to that innermost cave. Or perhaps you’ll be too easily impressed and think this is a great story.Perhaps you’re just looking for a cheap thrill. Well, this one has thrills, but they don’t come cheaply. The Powers-That-Be never gave me any trigger warnings, so I’ll give none to you, save this: Here there be dragons.In any case, we’re going to follow the rules. Stories have rules, of course, just like chemistry, like biology. Like gravity. Perhaps—if you are an omnivorous reader yourself—you know that there are certain rules that a good story must never break.It turns out that we’ve been wrong… and right… all along. That’s the beauty of it. That’s what makes this a good mystery.Back up a bit. Ready the players. Set the stage.”

Why, why why is this so meta. Why does it read like a set of instructions. It’s so out of place for a fic. Why is either “dismissing the narrative early” or “being too easily impressed” such an apt summary for some reactions to The Final Problem? The stage is set, the curtain rises. Here be dragons. 

We know “the rules” of this story- and we know that The Final Problem broke all of them. Steven and Mark themselves have said the episode was deliberately full of “transgressions.”

They’ve been wrong….(The Final Problem)…and right (every other episode) all along. The mixture makes it the mystery. We need to- and have solved- that mystery: why it was wrong. Because it didn’t end with John and Sherlock together. The rest of the true love story is yet to be told.

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It’s my opinion that TFP was the “tragedy” Garridebs, since it did not end happily the way it’s meant to, and that the “comedy” Garridebs will end satisfyingly with the relationship that we always wanted and John and Sherlock always deserved.

ohhhh NICE, I love it this way round, too <3

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hmm, interesting. Not sure when I’ll get around to reading these, since I have so many fic tabs open already, but that “innermost cave” bit is what twigged me. It’s a term for a stage in the classic hero journey story structure, where “the Hero endures the Ordeal, the central crisis in which the Hero confronts his greatest fear and tastes death.” (that wording quoted from Myth and the Movies by Stuart Voytilla, which is a super-enjoyable/readable approach to more or less the same ideas that are in Hero with 1000 faces by Joseph Campbell, also recommended) In other words, if this fic is correctly related to S4, then it makes sense that S4 is super dark, because it is The Ordeal, that darkest-before-dawn nadir of the cycle. Still to come are the Reward and the Return, which to me it makes sense if that includes a proper 3GAR moment along with whatever other culmination the writers see as their ultimate fix-it. (yeah, I’m still hoping for johnlock, but I have trust issues to 11.) That little blink and you miss it epilogue with voiceover does not count as a return. You don’t spend over 19 hours on 3/4 of your story and five minutes on the last 1/4, not if you want to be taken seriously as a writer.

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