TOP 30 STORIES, DAY 6 // ETHICS COMMITTEE
I’m sharing a bit of my creative process via 30 of my favourite stories as the shorteststory.com/engine campaign runs!
This story makes the list because it combines two of my favourite types of Shortest Story with ruthless efficiency.
Some of my stories are more like observations or inner monologues that are funny, or rhetorical, or revelatory, but don’t actually have a plot. And some of my stories have a very interesting plot, but there’s no… hook, or punchline. They conclude in the way a traditional story does.
“Ethics Committee” does both, and with barely a wasted word. It’s phrased as a series of rhetorical questions that one by one, reveal a story that you come to realize took place before you got here. The questions come full circle by the end, with a punchline that makes you read back up toward the beginning to put everything together.
I’m proud of how efficiently it does that, and how it brings together a dose of science fiction, horror and comedy in such a tight package.