Jayce gently helping Mel to her feet, caressing her face asking if she's okay, Jayce carrying Viktor bridal style to the hexcore, Mel saying "he'll come back to us" and reaching her hand out toward Viktor's lifeless body, Jayce laying his giant head on Mel's comfy lap and letting her stroke his hair, Jayce and Viktor's gay ass pre breakup hug>>>>>>>>>
Jayce you better go get your damn wife from wherever the hell she is then take your ass to the undercity and pick up your damn husband, he is naked and becoming jesus. Thank you..
something about the very first shot being mel, alive, and her featured multiple times in the credits as much of a main character as the rest. feels Good
STOP... STOP! I'm dead, I'm dead, I can't-
I find it hilarious how people are ready to jump down Mel's throat for "manipulating" Jayce but Ambessa is literally manipulating Caitlyn by taking advantage of her grief and fragile emotional state and suddenly no one is saying anything about that
Mel Medarda — Arcane 2.01 "Heavy Is The Crown"
she... oh I love women :')
Hiya sugar! I had a question and am not sure how to message! Is your story you’re gonna go far on hold? I’m trying to figure out which note i’m going to put it in so I can go back to it later on!
1 Stop… Carry on! - Books on hold
or
2 Eat. Read. Sleep. - Ongoing books
right now it is on hold as I have not found the time to sit and write it
Whole-heartedly BEGGING writers to unlearn everything schools taught you about how long a paragraph is. If theres a new subject, INCLUDING ACTIONS, theres a new paragraph. A paragraph can be a single word too btw stop making things unreadable
Ok So I’m getting more notes than I thought quicker than I expected! So I’m gonna elaborate bc I want to.
I get it, when you’re someone who writes a lot and talks a lot, it’s hard to keep things readable, but it’s not as much about cutting out the fat(that can be a problem) so much as a formatting issue.
You are also actively NERFING yourself by not formatting it correctly, it can make impactful scenes feel so, so much better. Compare this,
To THIS.
Easier to read, and hits harder.
No more over-saturated paragraphs. Space things out.
@s1ld3n4f1l WAIT WAIT WAIT SO TRUE LITERALLY LITERALLY
One of the funniest things about enemies-to-lovers ships is how they’re almost always obsessed with each other. Like if a character actively chooses to interact with another character over and over again instead of simply ignoring them? Throw darts at it all you want, but you still printed out a picture of them to hang on your wall
"Throw darts at it all you want, but you still printed out a picture of them to hang on your wall." - This is a raw line.
heyy! I hope you're doing well <3 I was just wondering if you'd continue writing "You're Gonna Go Far" it really is a great story, I can't wait to keep reading your writing!!
thank you so much!
hey lovely!! I just binge read all of “you’re gonna go far” and i am literally speechless, this is exactly what i’ve been looking for in an avatar fic. I hope you’re doing well!! i’m so sad that i just found you but i can’t wait to see where you go! <3
thank you so much! so glad you've enjoyed it so far!
Hii, I just came from AO3 from the story you have you’re gonna go far. I was just curious to when you’d be updating it again and if you were alright? And I just wanted to let you know I absolutely adore your writing! Have a great day!
awww wow! thank you so much! i'm glad you like it!
You are being used, Thief in the Shadows. You were only ever a means to an end. The coward Oakenshield has weighed the value of your life and found it worth nothing. What did he promise you? A share of the treasure? As if it was his to give!
Richard Armitage as THORIN II OAKENSHIELD THE HOBBIT: The Desolation of Smaug (2013)