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but still the cake was eaten;

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Rils, she/her, bi meatball; lover of Stucky first and human being second; dumbass extraordinaire; please be my guest~ my scribbles ~ I'm ryoorisuru on ao3
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lyralit

anything but just "I love you"

  • I want to love you.
  • I think I can love you?
  • Let me love you.
  • I loved you.
  • I would love you.
  • I can try to love you.
  • I used to know how to love you (I don't anymore)
  • I still love you.
  • Do you love me?
  • Can you try to love me?
  • I can't stop loving you.
  • Let me try to love you.
  • I think I can love you.
  • I think I can try (to love you).
  • Do you still love me?
  • Did you ever love me?
  • I don't think I could ever love you.
  • Don't let me love you.
  • I gave up (loving you).
  • You made me love you.
  • I've always loved you (but I can't anymore).
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abiteofhoney

edit as you write. use adverbs. use said. outline. or don’t. plot it. pants it. make a mary sue. who cares! just write whatever makes you happy. that’s all this is about. be happy in what you make.

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Reactions to… being stuck somewhere

  • "I don't care if no one hears us, screaming for help makes me feel like I'm at least doing something."
  • "Just sit down. This is probably going to take a while."
  • "Any more of your clever ideas?"
  • "If you get us out of here, I will be forever grateful."
  • "Come on, this can't happen right now!"
  • "Well, this is not how I wanted to spend my day."
  • "If there is one person I'd like to be stuck with it's you."
  • "There is an entire fire brigade on their way to us and I look like this."
  • "Get us out of here! I don't like small rooms!"
  • "And it had to be with you."
  • "I told you not to push that button!"
  • "What if no one ever finds us?"
  • "At least we're not stuck alone."
  • "If our friends did this on purpose, I'm going to kill them."

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frownyalfred

Alcohol tips for newbie writers (or non drinkers!):

  • At bars, people who order “chasers” after their shots are ordering something to wash down the taste of their shot with. This can be juice, soda, more alcohol, or even pickle juice
  • Hard liquor is generally sold in stores as shots (tiny bottles), fifths, liters, and handles or in ml (50, 100, 200 etc)
  • Most people can’t finish an entire fifth of hard liquor (vodka, etc) on their own without being very ill
  • Conversely, many people can finish an entire bottle of wine on their own without being ill
  • Liquor can be “bottom shelf” or “rail” or “well” – all synonyms for the cheapest version of alcohol a bartender has. Bars generally keep several “levels” of alcohol stocked
  • You order a drink with the alcohol first, then the mix – e.g., a “vodka soda” or a “Tito’s and tonic”
  • When you “close out a tab”, you pay for all of the drinks you’ve had that night. Either the bartender already has your card (you “opened a tab” earlier) or it was quiet enough that they just kept an eye on you and tallied your bill up at the end
  • “Doubles” are drinks or shots with double the standard pour of alcohol
  • In the US, most shots (pours) are 1.5 oz by default. 
  • Mixed drinks (gin and tonic, vodka lemonade, cosmos, etc) are generally made up of 1-2 shots and a mixer 
  • If you don’t specify which type of alcohol you’d like in a mixed drink (vodka cranberry, for example) the bartender will put whatever the “house” liquor is – and this depends entirely on the establishment. A dive bar will pour rail by default, whereas a nicer tavern might make all vodka cranberries with Tito’s
  • PLEASE TIP YOUR BARTENDERS THEY WILL REMEMBER YOU I PROMISE
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Some additions from a recovering alcoholic:

  • Not everyone gets happy when drunk. Some people will get angry, weepy or depressed.
  • Different amounts of alcohol can bring about different moods (example from when I was drinking: The first few drinks and I’m depressed. A few more and I’m Social and happy and chill. More after that and I started getting angry and weepy)
  • Most hard liquor burns as you drink it. Vodka, Rum and whiskey all feel warm as you drink and do burn in the back of your throat, especially if you’re not used to drinking it! That tends not to happen if you have a mixer where there’s more mixer than there is alcohol.
  • People have very different tolerances. My friend has always been a lightweight. Two shots and she’s out. My tolerance grew the more I drank and it was taking more and more and more to get me to the happy and social stage of my drinking. Think about people’s tolerance, which is effected mostly by their experiences with drinking (first timers are highly likely to be lightweights)
  • Riding on that last point, Alcoholics are VERY GOOD at hiding their addiction. I know TV paints a certain picture, but a lot of people use alcohol to self medicate. If you’re writing someone who drinks like that, they probably would not appear drunk in the day to day, even if they are.
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"you're the writer, you control how the story goes" no not really. i wrote the first sentence and then my characters said "WE WILL TAKE IT FROM HERE" and promptly swerved into an electrical fence.

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musicalhell

I wrote a scene and the characters said "nah, that's dumb" and did whatever the hell they liked.

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Victoria Schwab Tweets:

“This just in: you can love writing and also find it hard.

“I was once on a panel and another author essentially said, ‘if you don't enjoy every moment, then why are you here?’ and I was...exasperated. Creativity is a complicated beast. You don't have to love every second to be a valid participant.

“I love the ideas. I love brainstorming, and problem-solving, and I love making this better, fine-tuning language.

“I also hate drafting, claw my way through self-doubt, crawl on my hands and knees through the frustration of the unrealized.

“I'm not here because I love every second.

“I'm here because the parts I love are worth the rest.”

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If you're a writer you're supposed to write a lot of bullshit. It's part of the gig. You have to write a lot of absolute garbage in order to get to the good bits. Every once in a while you'll be like "Oh, I wish I hadn't wasted all that time writing bullshit," but that's dumb. That's exactly the same as an Olympic runner being like "Oh, I wish I hadn't wasted all that time running all those practice laps"

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When reading fanfic keep in mind that for professional literature: 

  • Short story: under 7,500
  • Novelette: between 7,500 and 17,500
  • Novella: between 17,500 and 40,000
  • Novel: over 40,000

Fics over 40k are literally a novel written and shared for free.  If you have written a 40k+ fic, you have literally written a novel.

Yep. In addition, chapters in published novels are generally around 3,000 words in length.

Fanfic writers go hard.

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Cuddling Dialogue

  1. "Have you always been this cuddly?"
  2. "Come here, I'll warm you up."
  3. "You're so warm and soft."
  4. "Let's just stay in bed and cuddle some more."
  5. "Nothing feels better than your body."
  6. "You actually do give amazing hugs."
  7. "I think someone needs a good cuddle."
  8. "Hmm, you fit so well in my arms."
  9. "You're like my personal teddy bear."
  10. "Need a cuddle?"
  11. "Come on, bring it in."
  12. "You can't escape my cuddles."
  13. "I'm not letting go, so you can stop fighting it."
  14. "Today is one of those stay in bed and cuddle days."
  15. "I want to stay in your arms forever."

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"why do I want to be a writer" I say, as though I am not compelled by otherworldly forces at all hours of the day to put together the messiest sentences known to mankind just to feel alive

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Physical One-Liners Part III

  1. "Can I take your hand?"
  2. "I fit perfectly in your arms."
  3. "I want to hold you like this forever."
  4. "Can I fall asleep on your shoulder?"
  5. "I want to wrap you up in my arms and make you feel safe."
  6. "Put your head on my lap and sleep a little."
  7. "You're being very needy today with your touches."
  8. "Please tell me I can touch you."
  9. "Sleeping next to you is my personal heaven."
  10. "You hugged me like your personal pillow."
  11. "Maybe I want to use any excuse to be close to you..."
  12. "Have your eyes always been that dark?"
  13. "I feel like you're obsessed with touching me."
  14. "Are you sniffing my hair?"
  15. "Your body feels like home to me."

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Drunken Love Confessions

  1. "I like your stupid face. It’s so stupid. It’s so… I like it. Can I touch it?"
  2. "You're all I ever wanted. I'm sorry I can't say it sober."
  3. "I can't wait for the room to stop spinning, so I can focus on your face again."
  4. "I would love to hear those words in any other place than this bathroom, holding your hair back."
  5. "You're cute. And a bit blurry. But definitely always so cute."
  6. "I think I love you." "And I would love to answer you accordingly, but I think I would appreciate it more when you’re actually able to understand my answer."
  7. "Don't tell my sober me that I told you I love you. It was a secret."
  8. "I…I want to give you my heart. It belongs to… to you. How… how can I give it to you? I don’t want it anymore." "Let’s wait until tomorrow with the surgery."
  9. "Oh I'm dreaming of you again. If I wouldn't be dreaming and if you would be really here, then I would tell you I love you."
  10. "I love you. But that's a secret. So I won't tell you about it."
  11. "You're drunk." "Yes. And hopelessly in love with you."
  12. "I'm seeing you twice. Oh, now I can give all my love to even more of you."
  13. "Say that again after two coffees at least and I will be yours."
  14. "You're so adorable. I want to pick you up and never let you down."
  15. "I've always loved you. But I will never tell you."
  16. "This is not a dream, I think. In my dreams we're usually kissing."
  17. "I’m not drunk. Can a drunk person do this?" "You’re not doing anything." "But… I sent you my love. Did you… did you not get it?"
  18. "Can you keep a secret? I am madly in love with you. But psshh."
  19. "I fell in love with you." "No, you fell down the stairs. You should really learn to hold your liquor."
  20. "You're so perfect. How can anyone be so perfect? Maybe you're just a dream."

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vinceaddams

People who try to copy historical writing styles don't say enough weird stuff in them. I'm listening to a 1909 story about a ghost car right now, and the narrator just said he honked the car horn a bunch of times, but the way he phrased it was "I wrought a wild concerto on the hooter".

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Reblog to wreak a wild concerto on a hooter

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smut prompt list no. 3

  • 1) mirror sex
  • 2) sex in front of a big window where anyone could glance up and spot them
  • 3) fully clothed x stark naked
  • 4) slow sex while one or both are injured (bonus points if it’s after a battle or after they’ve patched up each other’s wounds)
  • 5) body worshipping 
  • 6) marathon session (they just fucking keep going, babyyyy)
  • 7) finding a somewhat private area at a fancy party to fuck (coat closet, empty office, secluded corner on the big balcony, hedge maze if we wanna get dramatic, etc) 
  • 8) oops, we were just hiding in this closet, but then the close proximity get us too turned on not to fuck
  • 9) revenge sex
  • 10) finding their partner’s sex toy/toys and making them play with it in front of them
  • 11) quickie where you don’t take any clothes off, just tug and pull and expose the essentials 
  • 12) fucking, but one is still trying to keep all of their attention on the game they are playing
  • 13) getting a little too handsy on the dancefloor
  • 14) library sex for those dark academia vibes
  • 15) jealous sex in the alleyway behind the bar
  • 16) accidental i love you’s during sex 
  • 17) seeing the love marks they left on their partner later and getting turned on all over again remember how it got there in the first place
  • 18) a/b/o
  • 19) getting turned on by their partner’s new uniform for work and then roleplaying a bit
  • 20) sleepy domestic sex
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