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some people think writers are so eloquent and good with words, but the reality is that we can sit there with our fingers on the keyboard going, “what’s the word for non-sunlight lighting? Like, fake lighting?” and for ten minutes, all our brain will supply is “unofficial”, and we know that’s not the right word, but it’s the only word we can come up with…until finally it’s like our face got smashed into a brick wall and we remember the word we want is “artificial”.

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heywriters

I couldn't remember the word "doorknob" ten minutes ago.

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bumblewyn

ok but the onelook thesaurus will save your life, i literally could not live without this website

REBLOG TO SAVE A WRITER'S LIFE

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some people think writers are so eloquent and good with words, but the reality is that we can sit there with our fingers on the keyboard going, “what’s the word for non-sunlight lighting? Like, fake lighting?” and for ten minutes, all our brain will supply is “unofficial”, and we know that’s not the right word, but it’s the only word we can come up with…until finally it’s like our face got smashed into a brick wall and we remember the word we want is “artificial”.

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heywriters

I couldn't remember the word "doorknob" ten minutes ago.

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bumblewyn

ok but the onelook thesaurus will save your life, i literally could not live without this website

REBLOG TO SAVE A WRITER'S LIFE

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inky-duchess
Fantasy Wardrobe: Popular Gowns of History

Fashion is one of my favourite worldbuilding components and choosing which way I want characters to look, is one part of research that is more fun than work. The use of different styles give each culture a defined feel and could act as a symbol of all kinds of lands in your WIP. Since it is your WIP, you can play with different elements of the gowns and pay fast and loose with the styles.

(If you want a more in-depth look at the structure of gowns and the composition of gowns have a look here)

Kirtle

The kirtle was technically an under dress to be worn under a grander gown though some women wore it as a gown itself over their chemise. The kirtle could be made of any material and worn by any woman of any rank. It could be laced at the back, front and even, though rarely, the side.

Sarafan

The sarafan is a traditional Russian dress worn mainly by the peasants (since Peter the Great banned traditional Russian costumes from the nobility in order to drag them toward Westernization). It rather resembles a pinafore and often worm under a lighter gown like a slip. During the reign of Nicholas I, the sarafan was allowed to be worn by the women of the Royal court. They fancied up the sarafan, adding a popular boat-line neckline and long dragging sleeves. It is one of my favourite looks of all time.

Gamurra

This was the most popular gown in Renaissance Italy. The waist was high, usually pleated beneath the bust and had a square neckline. The gown would be worn over the lady's chemise and corset and perhaps another under dress. It was worn by both nobles and commoners.

Burgundian Gowns/Houppelande

These gowns were high-waisted, belted underneath the bust. The neckline was classically shaped in a V, often showing off another fabric underneath. These gowns were worn by highborn women.

The Farthingale

This gown is named after the structure that held it in place. The skirts would be stretched into a dome-like, bell-jar shape, often fitted about the waist over a bum-roll (stop sniggering) a piece of padded fabric hung about the waist to widen the skirt's distance from the bodice. You know what they say, the bigger the Farthingale the bigger the rank. Worn through the 15th & 16th centuries.

Robe à l'Anglaise

This gown is the classic silhouette of the 18th century. The sleeves usually stopped at the elbow. The neckline was usually cut square. The bodice could be done up in front by laces or buttons. The skirts usually were supported by panniers and often reached staggering girth.

Robe à la Française

This French gown was similar to the Robe à l'Anglaise only that the back featured a train made from pleated fabric that draped from the shoulders to the floor. The gown often opened at the front to show another material beneath.

Robe à la Polonaise

The Robe à la Polonaise was similar to the last two gowns excepting a skirt that featured an overskirt which was picked up and pleated to show the under skirt.

Chiton

This dress is often seen in Roman or Greek art. The Doric version was made by draping material over the body and fastened at the shoulder by clasps The Ionic chiton version was draped about the body and pinned at the waist.

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gentil-minou

I really REALLY love your writing (especially “Batter Up, Buttercup”, and I’m wondering… Do you have any tips for more descriptive writing? Any uncommonly used words or expressions? I’m trying to better myself as a writer and could really use some advice!

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Omg thank you because sometimes I worry I am too wordy so it's nice to hear when people like that sort of thing, and honestly I'm so excited to answer this/ My secret is that I picture reading (both my fics and when I read) vividly with as many details as I can and I write down the bits that are important to me, and then I use a ton of references when I need it!

Sometimes I can get in the right mood by playing things out like the would be in a movie, so like for example if in the movie version I want to highlight the way the light coming in from the windows reflects in a character's eyes, I'll describe it that way. Other times, especially high romance or tension scenes I draw it out as long as possible and picture every action and try to explain them precisely. And since dialogue heavy scenes are my weakness i will write the script part first and picture the characters talking, then go back and write in the descriptive bits.

The issue becomes when you are over descriptive, and that's something I'm still trying to navigate. But the general rule I follow is: If the scene is slow and high tension, with emphasis on character emotions -> more descriptive. If the scene is meant to fast paced -> less descriptive and being strategic with it.

Things like body language are really good for conveying a characters mood, and if you like to focus deep in one person's point of view like me it helps to think about how they might be percieving another character's actions (then you can have some real fun, where the reader can easily interpret another character's emotions but the POV character's thoughts say they are totally wrong, like what I did with Adrien in Batter Up, Buttercup fdshdgsd)

I also like using the surroundings as a way to set a scene and also offer a moment of peace, but it depends on what you are trying to convey. (An example: in Soft Like Sunshine I used a lot of sun and weather imagery as metaphors for Mari's anxiety and when she start's to spiral, then moments of light when things become good again). I also like to keep one metaphor throughout the story I keep coming back to (In BUB it's puzzle pieces but as the story gets longer I'm finding alternatives, and in Aftershocks I used earthquakes). But I think this is more a stylistic thing

And this is the big one: REFERENCESSSSSS. I always heard that artists use references and are even encouraged to, so when I found out my writer friends didn't use references I was kinda shocked. I use a bunch especially for descriptive words, so here's a list!

  • Onelook Reverse Dictionary and Thesaurus - this one i use a lot, especially for metaphors. the soft like sunshine fic relies heavily on metaphors of sun and light and darkness and i needed this site sooooo badly otherwise i'd have just written shine a millions times lol
  • Body language cheat sheet - suuuuper important in conveying emotion without having to write it
  • More body language
  • Describing eyes
  • Facial expression
  • Tips for writing about pain - haven't published the chapters yet but I used a lot of this when writing the angsty/panic/nightmare scenes in Soft Like Sunshine (um spoiler alert oop)
  • Alternative words for said: 1 and 2
  • I use this site a lot for just some ideas and advice, especially the articles under Expressions and Vocabulary. Some of my faves were the alternatives for laugh, and walk, and angry, etc
  • Flirting - necessary for my socially awkward ace self
  • How to write a kiss - this helped me go from 0 confidence in kiss scenes to super confident

And finally I think the most important tip is if you want to say something but can't think of how to say it, google it! I think at first I started with like "writing angst" tips or something and there were a lot of useful articles!

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pervocracy

child handling for the childless nurse

My current job has me working with children, which is kind of a weird shock after years in environments where a “young” patient is 40 years old.  Here’s my impressions so far:

Birth - 1 year: Essentially a small cute animal.  Handle accordingly; gently and affectionately, but relying heavily on the caregivers and with no real expectation of cooperation.

Age 1 - 2: Hates you.  Hates you so much.  You can smile, you can coo, you can attempt to soothe; they hate you anyway, because you’re a stranger and you’re scary and you’re touching them.  There’s no winning this so just get it over with as quickly and non-traumatically as possible.

Age 3 - 5: Nervous around medical things, but possible to soothe.  Easily upset, but also easily distracted from the thing that upset them.  Smartphone cartoons and “who wants a sticker?!!?!?” are key management techniques.

Age 6 - 10: Really cool, actually.  I did not realize kids were this cool.  Around this age they tend to be fairly outgoing, and super curious and eager to learn.  Absolutely do not babytalk; instead, flatter them with how grown-up they are, teach them some Fun Gross Medical Facts, and introduce potentially frightening experiences with “hey, you want to see something really cool?”

Age 11 - 14: Extremely variable.  Can be very childish or very mature, or rapidly switch from one mode to the other.  At this point you can almost treat them as an adult, just… a really sensitive and unpredictable adult.  Do not, under any circumstances, offer stickers.  (But they might grab one out of the bin anyway.)

Age 15 - 18: Basically an adult with severely limited life experience.  Treat as an adult who needs a little extra education with their care.  Keep parents out of the room as much as possible, unless the kid wants them there.  At this point you can go ahead and offer stickers again, because they’ll probably think it’s funny.  And they’ll want one.  Deep down, everyone wants a sticker.

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mikkeneko

This is also a pretty excellent guide to writing  kids of various ages

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enjambament

Good guide. It is one of my biggest pet peeves when 6-10 year olds are all written like 3-4 year olds. Positively cringey. If in doubt err on the side of the kid being more mature than you expect.

if in doubt err of the side of the kid being more mature than you expect

I’m 29 and I want a sticker.

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Why are Chinese Swords not as Famous | Video Essay

You probably know what katana is, but do you know the word for sword in Chinese? In this episode, we examine the various depictions of swords in both Chinese and Japanese films. We’ll delve into the cultural significance behind their depiction and see how swords reflect the philosophy of the two nations. And the Chinese word for sword is “Jian”. 

Howard Teo

In Chinese Novel / Cinema Culture there is a stereotype of weapons for different type of roles in the story. Swords / Jian : Usually carried by scholars. Shows refinement. Scholarly skills are swordsmanship, horse riding, chess, poems, music and education. Almost similar to knights and samurais. 

Sabre or Broadsword / Dao : Are carried by imperial troops and especially constables or sheriffs. Law enforcers. Some constables in the later Dynasties like Ming Dynasties carry a pair of Tongfa though. 

Staff / Gun : Carried by Monks. The idea of using staff is because it is perceived to be a less offensive weapon. Under the code of conduct, Monks have the right to defend but no right to kill. 

Spears / Chiang : Default weapon of the Imperial troops. Especially the Infantry and Calvary. There were alot of variations for spear though. Guan Dao was one of them. Staff mounted blades were popular because usually a one on one fight between leaders in a Warfield is usually done on a horseback.

Arrows / Jian : Need no introduce. Long range weapons. The Chinese used stone loaded catapults too. The Yuan Dynasty which was a Mongolian rule over China, the Mongolians conquered China with a superior calvary. Their horses and archers were of better quality. Till the Kamikaze because they had no sailing experience. Flying Guillotine / Xie Di Zi : A weapon that remains as fiction. The idea only appeared in Qing Dynasty, the last dynasty where the rulers are Manchurian. A weapon used by private squad of hitmen hired by the Emperor or the imperial family. The story portrays the hitmen will store the decapitated skulls in their family temple. Their extinction happened because their presence became obselete after the imperial court started buying firearms.

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