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Hi, I'm Hans (they/them). Spoonie. Demi-bi & polyam. Waves from the UK. I write fanfic, create moodboards, other graphics, fanmixes and on occasion fanvids. I like a good rec, tend to multiship and love decent character/case/team/gen stuffs too. Fannish about so many fandoms.
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27. Do you agree that one shouldn’t start a story with a piece of dialogue?

I'd never heard of that writing rule before and I don't agree with it. I think starting with dialogue could be confusing when you don't yet know the characters for original fic, or just if it's not immediately clear who is talking in fanfic, but there are ways to make it work. I've definitely done it more recently. Seems there's so many things people get told to never do in writing and I think really the advice there is not that you can't do X, just that you should know why you want to and make sure it does work in that instance.

31. What was the most difficult fic for you to write (but in the end you made it)?

In the last few years, I'd say my Snowest fic "Love isn't a science". It was my first time doing anything more than a snippet for the pairing, which intimidated me to start with, and it also was time limited writing it for an exchange with a lockdown theme in May 2020. Figuring how to incorporate the quarantine to that scenario and also to balance those with more lighthearted elements was tricky. And I ended up working in Caitlin's mom in which possibly made it harder than it could be. But I thought added some interest since it was meant to be 'quarantined with family' and I didn't just want to do the team as family, or simply Iris with her family as part of that, but also Caitlin with some of hers too and there's limited choices there, thanks canon. I think that fic also ran long initially and I struggled with how to finish it in the timeframe but did eventually round it off in time with the help of a couple of betas giving me their notes on it.

35. Thoughts on writing challenges/contests.

I love writing challenges and events with prompts, I often find them good inspiration although I don't ever really lack inspiration. However, I'm bad at finishing things off for them, which is why I tend to prefer open ended ones, though making things for a set week/month is still quite fun when I can. I just always have more I want to do and only ever manage to create a small percentage of my intended stuff. I want to give nanowrimo a go at some point but anytime I resolved to try that life or ill health got in the way so it maybe is better if I don't push myself that hard.

I tend to see contests as being a bit different, like they are more about competition with other people versus challenging oneself. I'm not sure I'd be keen on that, I think I would feel more pressure than I'd generally be comfortable with. I've never really done stuff like that for fic, more for graphics with icontests back in the LJ days. I miss those a little but then I don't think I'd feel so fussed about whether my icons would win or not, I'd still consider the process fun whereas for fic I think I'd feel differently for reasons unknown to me.

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Question 10 I already answered over here.

2. Anything that you’d like to write but feel like you’re unable to?

Comedy! I don't have a good feel for it and my own sense of humour is usually different to most people I know so I'm not sure what I'd write would go down well if I seriously tried, not that I ever have. Sometimes I luck into writing a bit of humour people enjoy in my fics but I can't ever imagine it being my strong suit.

Also, I feel wary of writing things like casefic or murder mysteries because that usually involves characters smarter than I am or a lot of plotty detail that can be hard to do without lots of research and that's certainly a challenge. But I think out of that and comedy, I'm more likely to try casefic or a murder mystery.

6. What’s your ratio for rating your works?

I'm actually uncertain what this question means - is it meant to be kudos:comments ratio, kudos:hits ratio, or something else entirely?

I honestly don't pay much attention to statistics because I am usually creating content for more niche stuff - polyam, rarepairs, femslash, gen - so never expect much engagement, though it is nice to get some. Occasionally I create for a more popular pairing (usually something m/m slash or a big het pairing) and get surprised at how much attention some things draw.

Based on my ao3 all years statistics, if I've done the maths right, it's 11:1 ratio of kudos to comment threads (9.1% of the time a kudos is left a comment thread is also started) and 1:28 ratio of kudos to hits (3.6% of the time a kudos is left - if each hit is unique). I think that means there's overall a 0.33% chance of a comment being left on my stuff for every hit on one of my fanworks.

EDIT: having thought about it more I realized this might have meant what % of fics are each rating like G/T/M/E etc, so adding that in here. Out of my 429 ao3 fanworks (which also includes fanart etc though):

34% General 56% Teen 7% Mature 3% Explicit

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7 and 10 for the fanfic asks!

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7. Your favourite ao3 tag.

Hmm, I'm not sure what for an overall favourite.

For The Flash fandom I'm fond of Inappropriate Use of the Speed Force.

I know they can end up overdone in some cases but I quite enjoy people's freeform commentary style tags tbh; it can be nice to get a sense of personality for the writer from them.

10. Top three favourite fic tropes.

  1. Fix Fic - Especially character death fix-its, not just because yay they live but also those fics tend to get pretty creative for the how. And so many canons leave gaping plot holes or inconsistencies in characterization and I just love seeing plausible in-universe explanations for them.
  2. Mutual Pining - chef's kiss at the angst of both parties thinking surely all hope is lost, pining away and missing all the signs that it's requited.
  3. Canon Divergence - I love what if's so I eat up all manner of things going differently, whether that's tiny changes that possibly also snowball over time or big things like the same canon events but with role reversals.
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4. Do you have any OCs? Do you have a story for them?

I do for original fic, not so much for fanfic since I usually just stick to canon characters, even if some of those recurring/smaller character are Free Real Estate for filling in details. I do have a fondness for expanding characters we know so little of. For original fics, I have an OC who's a petite thief with parental issues who ends up with an assorted group on a heist that turns into a magical quest. She ends up travelling with a flirty fellow rogue, a barmaid who gets embroiled in it because she's just found out she's the half-sister of the flirty rogue, and a gay wizard who owes the thief a favour and does slightly too experimental magic that becomes a plot point. For that universe, I've also got an ally to them who crops up a bit, a flirty woods witch who's an allosexual aromantic.

Another OC I have is a chronically ill woman who gets offered immortality by another chronically ill friend who turns out to be a vampire.

17. Past or present tense? Why?

Definitely present tense. For the longest time, I've had big problems with switching tenses in my writing without realising and probably driving betareaders a bit nutty with how many corrections my writing used to need. I'm good at spotting it in other people's writing but bad at spotting it in my own, though I've improved over the years I think. I find that writing in present tense is a lot easier for me, I'm less likely to switch with that for some reason and can tell more easily when I stray from it, so I tend to stick to that unless there's a good reason to write in another tense.

32. Do you have a word/expression that you always use in your writing?

Probably. Sometimes I realise when writing that a word is more my pick than appropriate for the character. I try to write even the prose, not just dialogue, in a style that fits the characters if I can but I doubt I always succeed there. I also spend a fair bit of time, at least on longer fic, trying to vary vocabulary and make sure I don't repeat anything too much within one chapter at least. I can't think of a particular word, but I think my writing can come across quite formal, too formal in some cases. I suspect a lot of my Britishisms I don't realise are very British sneak through into fic for American characters even though I'd like to limit that.

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1. What’s your personal favourite thing you wrote this year?

I think my favourite thing is actually a poem I wrote but didn’t post publicly, because I was worried about the person it’s about finding it as it’s not so flattering to them. Much as I want to share it, I’m not sure I will post it anywhere while they’re still alive. It’s probably good exactly because it’s so personal. As far as fanfic goes though, there’s a few I’m especially fond of (mostly fluff - I actually wrote a decent amount of fluff this year somehow?) but my absolute fave would be my first proper Westhallen fic “it’s the little things.”

6. What’s your favourite piece of dialogue you wrote this year?

My fics are usually fairly dialogue light so there’s not loads to choose from, but I think this pun is my fav:

“This isn't the kind of heatwave I enjoy,” Len says with a semi-serious huff.  (which is from a Coldwestallen oneshot here) Questions here.

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End Of Year Fic-Writer ask meme:

This has been a long, weird year, and if you’re like me, you wrote a whole whack of fic over the course of it. So here’s a bunch of questions to ask about that:

  1. What’s your personal favourite thing you wrote this year?
  2. What’s your least favourite thing you wrote this year?
  3. Which of your fics was most different from what you usually write?
  4. Which of your fics this year was most successful?
  5. Which of your fics do you wish was more successful?
  6. What’s your favourite piece of dialogue you wrote this year?
  7. What’s your favourite piece of description or narration?
  8. Which fic this year was most fun to write?
  9. If you could go back and change something about one of the fics you wrote this year, what would it be?
  10. What, if anything, are you going to try to do differently in your writing in the new year?
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If you are curious, feel free!

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8 and 25 I already answered with other asks, but for the rest...

14. At what point in writing do you come up with a title?

Because I am a plotter, and tend to know what’s happening far in advance, a lot of the time I have one from the start and it usually doesn’t change. Occasionally I have a working title and change when it’s mostly complete. Often I use song lyrics because I like the phrasing. It’s rare, but sometimes I don’t have a title until posting and then get stumped on what to call a fic (summaries are usually what I struggle with).

20. Tell us the meta about your writing that you really want to ramble to people about (symbolism you’ve included, character or relationship development that you love, hidden references, callbacks or clues for future scenes?)

Ahh, my mind goes blank... Um, if I write AU’s I love writing in canon details as easter eggs or canon details with a twist if possible, but I can’t think of specifics right now. As far as symbolism goes, mine usually crops up fairly organically when I work on a theme in a fic, related to my poetry background where that is important. I think I generally love to be able to rework and make larger the themes from canon, callbacks to small mentions for a character that canon might forget. Characterisation is very important to me, so if there’s something in canon that seems weird for a character I would tend to try to find the Watsonian/in-universe explanation and explore that through fic and make it part of their character development even if the show handwaves it away. I feel a special kind of satisfaction at figuring out that kind of thing, making it make sense to me at least but hopefully also to any readers.

As far as leaving clues for future, that’s not been relevant so far in any fics but I do have 1 fic in progress (One Way Or Another) that’s more plotty where certain things will work like that (comments early on work into the setup of several later plot points) and that does excite me to be able to do, though I may worry what if I am making it too obvious. But I totally look forward to seeing with that WIP whether anyone sees any of it coming. Also have a plan there for a fortune cookie phrase for each chapter, for an in fic reason, and I want each of those to hint at a coming event and I’ll be interested to see if that entertains or annoys people. Questions here.

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8. Is what you like to write the same as what you like to read?

Yes and no! Yes, because I do like to read things similar to what I write, but also no, because I definitely like to read much more widely, including things I know I could never write.

9. Are you more of a drabble or a longfic kind of writer? Pantser or plotter? Do you wish you were the other?

I used to be more of drabble writer about a decade ago but thesedays I struggle to keep things short enough. I still try drabbles from time to time but usually end up double drabbles or triple drabbles instead lol.

I’m definitely a longfic kind of writer now, but more one-shots. I love the idea of multichaptered, have a few on the go, but I struggle with update schedules as sometimes I won’t be able to write for ages. So, if I have any say in the matter I tend to aim for 5-20k oneshots.

I am definitely a plotter. By the time I start writing a fic in earnest (as opposed to recording any odd scenes that come to me out of order) I will always have a general idea of what will happen and where the fic starts, the loose idea of a middle and an overarching end. Often I’ll have a lot of the intervening plot points/scenes worked out too and then it becomes the task of how do I join it all up/pace it well.

10. How would you describe your writing process?

This ended up being a long-ass answer I don’t know if anyone wants, but here it is. I have 3 basic stages. 

1) Brainstorming: Writing down notes, ideas, maybe a little dialogue if a particular scene is better formed in my head already. Maybe making a moodboard or fanmix too - something about picking out images or needing a theme for a song’s focus helps solidify the idea better in my head. It’s usually here where I hash out the themes I want to grapple with for the story and what I consider the emotional beats, how the characters will feel at different stages of the story.

2) Bulk writing: Actually fleshing out all those notes, kinda like connect the dots with words once I get the ideas all in order. This is the hard slog I tend to find, even when I am enthused for the story, because you have to put the hard time into it. I write at about 1k/hour on a good day but most writing days aren’t as good as that, more like 500 words/hour. Random tidbit, for every 1k of notes, I find that translates to actual prose around 3-5k which is handy for my predicting word counts. Even if I don’t get a scene to exactly where I want yet here, I’ll have a barebones version and give myself permission to not have it be perfect yet, to be finished later. For the ones I already had barebones, with dialogue, then I’d figure out where to add in extra stuff for movement, body language, or sensory details.

3) Rewrites/editing: I probably spend the most time on this stage because, a) I prefer to let my writing sit for a while, to get a fresh perspective from myself, and b) it takes time to find a beta/get it betaread. I really do prefer to get something betaread if I can, though I often find it hard to sit with the criticism, however constructive. I tend to reread a lot, trying to look out for any way to add to details that make it more grounded/more emotive, ensuring my vocabulary is varied and minimising unintentional repetition. I try to do a few passes to shorten my sentences too. Between my rereads and looking over again with new beta comments, I probably go over a typical fic up to a dozen times.

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1. Tell us about your current project(s) – what’s it about, how’s progress, what do you love most about it?

I’ve actually not written for ages because the muses are fickle, but the last substantial fic idea I wrote down was a Snowbarrisco AU where Barry was working with Thawne, not realising how awful he was. The real Barry dies as part of one of Thawne’s experiments, but most of his consciousness ends up downloaded into a very realistic (and totally illegal) android, BARI. Gideon (who is a lot more independent than either Barry or Thawne realise) eventually sends BARI away - to the little known STAR Labs - to protect him from Thawne’s machinations/abuse. I’ve got the main plot mostly figured out but not all the emotional beats to it or the ending. What I love most about it is the idea of Barry’s humanity shining through, that BARI could be more than what a cold analysis of his programming would suggest. 25. What part of writing is the most fun? I think for me, it’s when you find just the right turn of phrase. My writing tends towards poetic at times (because I started out writing poetry). I know more poetic phrasing isn’t everyone’s cup of tea, but it really pleases me to find a description that flows a certain way, even if that’s not gonna ring true with every reader. Questions here.

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Fun meta asks for writers

  1. Tell us about your current project(s)  – what’s it about, how’s progress, what do you love most about it?
  2. Tell us about what you’re most looking forward to writing – in your current project, or a future project
  3. What is that one scene that you’ve always wanted to write but can’t be arsed to write all of the set-up and context it would need? (consider this permission to write it and/or share it anyway)
  4. Share a sentence or paragraph from your writing that you’re really proud of (explain why, if you like)
  5. What character that you’re writing do you most identify with?
  6. What character do you have the most fun writing?
  7. What do you think are the characteristics of your personal writing style? Would others agree?
  8. Is what you like to write the same as what you like to read?
  9. Are you more of a drabble or a longfic kind of writer? Pantser or plotter? Do you wish you were the other?
  10. How would you describe your writing process?
  11. What do you envy in other writers?
  12. Do you want your writing to be famous?
  13. Do you share your writing online? (Drop a link!) Do you have projects you’ve kept just for yourself?
  14. At what point in writing do you come up with a title?
  15. Which is harder: titles or summaries (or tags)?
  16. Tried anything new with your writing lately? (style, POV, genre, fandom?)
  17. Do you think readers perceive your work - or you - differently to you? What do you think would surprise your readers about your writing or your motivations?
  18. Do any of your stories have alternative versions? (plotlines that you abandoned, AUs of your own work, different characterisations?) Tell us about them.
  19. Is there something you always find yourself repeating in your writing? (favourite verb, something you describe ‘too often’, trope you can’t get enough of?)
  20. Tell us the meta about your writing that you really want to ramble to people about (symbolism you’ve included, character or relationship development that you love, hidden references, callbacks or clues for future scenes?)
  21. What other medium do you think your story would work well as? (film, webcomic, animated series?)
  22. Do you reread your old works? How do you feel about them?
  23. What’s the story idea you’ve had in your head for the longest?
  24. Would you say your writing has changed over time?
  25. What part of writing is the most fun?
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