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A collection of analyses on my current fixations. I go by Nes.
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Thank You for your Story Prompts

Before the weekend, I asked all of you for some story prompts and I really wasn’t expecting to get more than a handful of responses. But the prompts I’ve received are much more than what I thought I’d get. Thank you to all who submitted. As promised, I’ll be writing short stories on the first 5 prompts I’ve received. 

For all the prompts after the 5th, worry not, I will get to them too, just not with the first batch. 

Also, a quick blog update, tomorrow I’m posting Part 2 of the Spinel Character Analysis. You can read it for more context as the Part 2 will be about her relationship with Rose and how Rose’s abandonment affected her and got her to where she was in the SU Movie. 

Also, the Midnight Gospel is definitely one of those shows worth several rewatches, and I have plans for how I’m going to tackle the analyses of the episodes, because the themes are so dense. Stay tuned :D

All the best to everyone in these times!

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Anonymous asked:

Are you planning to write more on The Story of Steven?

I am! And I do apologise for not getting to update it. That series in particular is close to my heart, but it does take a bit of time to do because it’s largely speculative science (but that’s why it’s so close to my heart). 

I think I’ll be able to write more on it during the winter break. But yes, that series has not ended! :D

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Theory of Corruption

So, to avoid the leaks going around, I’m just going to make my usual posts for a while. And this one is something I’ve been working on for a while, but I wanted to keep it as evidence-based as possible.

My idea of corruption stems from my Light Bomb theory, and so far it’s been supported from what we’ve seen in the show. In summary, the theory states that the large explosion at the end of Lapis’ flashback in Same Old World was part of the Homeworld effort to annihilate all the gems left on Earth. The process bombarded light and radiation, and aside from physically destroying everything in its proximity (chunks of Earth are missing from the map in When It Rains), it would also irradiate the more distant gems. The side-effect was corruption. With that, let’s get started.

1. Corruption involves tampering with the physical form

What I imagine from the Light Bomb, is that similar to any other bomb, the centre of the explosion would have intense heat and pressure in order to propel its reach. But what exactly is being propelled? If humans are subject to shrapnel or sound waves, then they die. Our bodies can’t sustain the impact. But Gems can just poof if their physical form is injured on the macro level. 

The reason I considered the cause a Light Bomb, was that gems are themselves, made of light. And light is not only a wave that travels, but also a particle. The photons that make up gems are packed densely enough to have mass and volume, and this is the light that is released by the Light Bomb.

So the light is travelling at incredibly fast speeds; it has mass and volume. These photons are incredibly small. And they’re being dispersed away from the site of impact with enough force such that they can reach the entirety of the world.

[Insert LIGHTBOMB PICture]

At the speeds they’re going, the photons actually do deal a significant amount of damage to gems. They’re approaching them at speeds that can embed themselves in the matrix of their physical forms. This is similar to the idea that anything, with enough speed and force towards you, could be fatal. And it’s immensely painful. It’s like something is coming in-between each of your molecules. These gems are being torn apart on a molecular level. But the catch is that they don’t get torn apart. Their matrixes struggle to retain the integrity of their forms, struggle to survive.

When the pain is too much for them to function, because again, pain is a great indicator to survive, they poof, and attempt to reform. But there are a lot of natural laws about this. Living organisms tend to be closed systems. That’s how they retain order in order to survive, as open systems tend towards greater entropy and disorder. But living things have so many complicated systems that all have to work together to make life possible. Two of the most fundamental laws are the conservation of mass and energy. When the gems poof and reform, the light energy that was their physical form remains constant. This is why Amethyst is Reformed tried to make herself bigger, but could succeed only in augmenting some parts of her body. It’s why shapeshifting for long periods is dangerous. Because the material that makes up their forms is in constant amount. When they shape shift, the density gets manipulated, but the number of photons, their mass, their light energy, remains constant. It weakens the structure of their physical form for them to shift.

In fact, when Amethyst continues to stretch her system to unsustainable lengths in Reformed, we can visibly see the physical stretching of her body resources. Even if she wanted her upper arm as big as her forearm, it just wasn’t possible anymore. And that’s what the corrupted gems began to realise. New matter was forced into their systems. Their old forms were unsustainable, and this new matter isn’t their own, so they can’t manipulate it. They have to work around it.

So the gems have to start incorporating these photons into their forms. And they have to do it in a way that minimises the pain. They just want to survive, and lessen the pain. This would mean forgoing the humanoid form that gems seem to take by default. Their forms would depend on which parts got hit worst by the Light Bomb. Not all photons would hit them uniformly thought their bodies, though the gross effect is the same.

Gems that are hit hard at the torso for instance, would elongate that torso, and that means that they have to let go of walking on two legs. By extension, that would mean the  eyes have to migrate to somewhere that would still allow visibility, since they’d be closer to the ground. Crawling on the ground would mean less lung space, which was what allowed us to vocalise, so speaking would be forgone. But the appendages may not have as much additional mass as the torso, and they would be shorter, probably cutting off the extremities. The example I’m referring to is Centipeetle.

This would also explain why corrupted gems tend to be much larger. The other possibility when bombarded by photons, is for some of the original light mass to be displaced, which would lead to smaller corrupted forms.

The thing is, these forms aren’t immediately conceived. The gems are in a lot of pain. The process of settling on a form involves a lot of trial and error. And that thought is incredibly unbearable: Reforming in the hopes that this is the form that becomes stable and then having that form backfire and just hurt.

Even in their “most stable” forms, these gems are still in a lot of pain. Because their formerly closed systems were interfered with. Natural laws have been violated and there’s just something not right about how they feel and the physical matrix. It leads to these gems feeling threatened and vulnerable. It makes them hostile and cranky, more willing to attack things. Notice that the other reason these gems become big is that they’re afraid and they want to be strong and fend off the perceived danger. But as mentioned before, that’s not stable either. Because these gems weren’t meant to be that big. And that contributes to their fatigue and physical stress, making them feel even more vulnerable and hostile.

This is why Centipeetle gets much smaller in Monster Buddies, and can make it through most of the mission without feeling threatened. She’s threatened by the specific trigger of gem weapons being summoned, not “everything that appears.”

It’s because the form is more stable, less exerting and taxing on their systems. It leads the gem to be much calmer, and able to at the very least respond to very specific stimuli, rather than just lashing out at everything. I think this is because of the following reason.

2. The “software” in gemstones is spared

The way I’ve always understood gems was to have their main data stored in their gems. This would contain the blueprints of how they should reform. The gemstone, much like our physical matter, isn’t made of light. It’s really a stone. The Light Bomb may irradiate it, but that light can’t affect the data inside, because it’s not propelled with enough mass to penetrate the gemstone. And this is why Lapis wasn’t affected even though she seemed very exposed to the Light Bomb. The Galaxy Warp was clearly not the impact zone, because it’s still intact, and again, to propel that much matter to all over the planet, you’d need a lot of combustion. That means she would have at least been exposed to the light rays. But she comes out fine. It’s not because she’s cracked, because it’s been pointed out that we’ve seen simultaneously cracked and corrupted gems.

In the same way, Amethyst was spared, because she was “overcooked.” Homeworld would have been aware that the quartz soldiers would have emerged at that stage in the war. But Amethyst hadn’t yet. She was still a gemstone incubating without her stable physical form. There was no matrix to speak of, and she was able to make it out long after the rays had dissipated, most likely back into space. She emerged without corrupting.

But the reason I say the software is safe is found in Centipeetle’s reformation sequence in Monster Buddies:

The very first thing she tries to do is regain her humanoid form. And many people have pointed out that as she does this, she has a noticeably longer torso than do most gems. And again, I think it’s because of the way the light rays irradiated her body.

As she does this, she screeches in a way that supports the idea she experienced great pain trying to reconstitute this form. She then reverts to a form similar to a myriapod.

The thing is, this form still has a very humanoid torso. It’s not segmented and she still has legs.

Only later does she segment her body. And amid Steven’s assurances that she’s in a safe place (and his look of fear), she stabilises in a much smaller form. This to me shows that the programming in her gem is still there, but it’s very, very difficult to retrieve it. Storage without retrieval. And the result is a corrupted form, because not everything can be retrieved without compromising the stability of the output.

3. Existing gem abilities are retained, and at times amplified

The other thing about Centipeetle is that she can spit acid in both her forms.

I’ve answered an ask regarding this question before, but to answer it more comprehensively, I would attribute this to again, the software being intact. I mention rather often that gem abilities are preprogrammed at creation, and harnessed by Homeworld to suit specific purposes. This means that it’s inherent to the gem, unlike unique weapons which would be summoned as the individual self-actualises.

This means that Centipeetle is a gem who had acid control even uncorrupted. And her being able to create “babies” would be an amplification of many gems’ ability to form holograms. Because  these babies have no gem of their own and are significantly less crystalline in structure. They’re also weaker than Centpeetle herself.

Because she’s lost a lot of abilities in the process. Speech is definitely one of them, and one eye is cause for bad depth perception. But having smaller, more manoeuvrable clone scouts? That would be a plus. Her presented abilities are compensating for the ones she’s lost.

And this is why, I think, corrupted gems seem to be headed for the Gem Temple, or other gems. Their sense for other gems, similar to our feelings of being watched or that we’re not alone, is amplified exponentially. They’re asking for help, but they can’t vocalise how. And again, they can’t really think of a lot of things. Even at her second regeneration, Centipeetle is still responsive to very short, almost Pavlovian stimuli, as well as general sentiments and feelings. So corrupted gems in their first stable corrupted regeneration would be capable of processing even less. Again, not because the gems are lost, but because they’re in a lot of fear and pain, and they’re not stable. A lot of energy is spent holding that form together.

Aside from that, notice that corrupted gems appear to be doing a singular thing, such as the gem guarding the Shooting Star, the Giant Bird from Giant Woman bubbling gems on its own after eating them, and Centipeetle herself, a very protective gem.

Because these gems are locked in their last objective before corruption. They can’t process new stimuli very well, but they do have an inkling of who they used to be. The data is there, the “last saved file” of what they were doing is there. For instance, I feel Giant Bird would have been looking for other corrupted gems, bubbling them, right before corruption hit her. Or Centipeetle, who might have been caring for other gems; hence her scout babies, and then later looking after Steven. It shows that they are still trying to retrieve the stored data, and this leads me to my final point.

4. Healing is possible, but very difficult

The reason Rose’s healing tears, or Steven’s healing saliva don’t work as a cure-all for corruption, is exactly because of the nature of corruption. It’s not that something is “broken” and needs to be mended. Steven and Rose are able to heal cracks on gems, because the gems just need to be put back together. It’s not like that with corruption. From again, a technical view, everything is intact. There’s actually an excess of something in the system. 

That requires a “fixing” at a different level. It would mean slowly easing the gems into stable forms, just as Steven was doing with Centipeetle. The shock of that much physical pain can overload a gem into rash and extreme behaviour, so calming them down is a good first step. Because the scale of the damage is so small, and at such a basic level (the building blocks of their form), there needs to be a slow re-regeneration into a viable form.

And that might require some data editing to accommodate the workable photons. I think this would be a process akin to Steven’s entering the fusion spaces. But whoever enters would have to be armed with a lot of technical information about how gemstones store data and how that data is retrieved. We need a technician for the micro-gemological level. Someone like Peridot.

This is why I have a lot of hope for gems like Centipeetle. Because she wouldn’t factor in as much of the show, and have a possible episode up ahead for her (Monster Spelunking) if there weren’t any possibility of development. That’s something I’m definitely looking forward to.

oh no now i wanna spend 10 hours next friday making a comic about a gem getting corrupted based on this

If you did, that would be INCREDIBLE

Update on this post. I’ll be making it one of several in a Corruption Series to talk about the different aspects of corruption. This, I feel, covers only the physical in depth but there are obviously mental and emotional effects as well. :)

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I was reading through your homeworld trio examinations, and realized that some of the lapis stuff (i.e. The crystal gems probably trapped her), will that be updated in the future, after your current stuff is done?

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Hello there! I don’t retroactively update old posts because my posts are lengthy. Instead I release new posts as “updates” based on the new information from the show.

About Lapis, I did an update right after Same Old World aired and you might be interested in it here: http://poetofthepiano.tumblr.com/post/144655298421/the-implications-of-lapis-backstory

As for Peridot and Lapis, I have an update for their interactions post-Barn Mates here: http://poetofthepiano.tumblr.com/post/146258927961/interaction-update-peridot-and-lapis

In these posts, I integrate the new information but nuance back to my older posts because I think some of my analyses points are still relevant. :)

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I’m really clueless. Does anyone know the amount of time that needs to pass before something is no longer a spoiler? 

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This is what frustrates me about the word “spoiler” because anyone can twist it.

If new episodes that hasn’t been revealed no one is called a spoiler, then why is you simply not having the ability to see it day one within a week to a year stoll considered a spoiler?

If you yourself choose not to continue, it’s your fault. Those aren’t called spoilers but they still call em.

To answer your question is difficult, it’s different completely with everyone because they twist it.

That’s a good point. Thanks for that response!

So I guess I’ll be on the safe side and untag spoiler posts when the next episode in the series comes in the week after. I realise that this is one long arc and it’s better understood watching the episodes sequentially. It’s a bit safe to assume that for instance, watching Barn Mates, you would have wanted to see Super Watermelon Island and Gem Drill already.

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The Cool Kids as CG Parallels (Part 1 of 3- Buck)

Source: SU Wiki

My original plan was to fit it in one post, but since the first one got pretty lengthy, link to the other posts here: 

Part 1 of 3- Buck

So today I want to talk about the Cool Kids. A lot of people have talked about how they’re pretty strong parallels to the Crystal Gems, but I actually have another theory as to why they look so similar to the CGs. For me, the CKs are the lives the CGs would have been living had the Rebellion never happened.

To get this part out of the way and not dwell on it: Appearance-wise, it’s rather difficult to dispute how each corresponds to a Crystal Gem. 

(Note: the matching poses really help)

Source: SU Wiki

But kidding aside, we know SU really does a lot of things with colour schemes and shapes. So for those who can’t load the images, we have Garnet corresponding to Buck; Pearl, Sour Cream; and Amethyst; Jenny. 

Buck Dewey

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Source: SU Wiki

Off the bat, the similarities between Buck and Garnet are pretty evident. They have predominantly square-angular shapes; they tend to be inscrutable because of the shades; and the colour palette stays in the reddish region (but if you want to step that comparison up further, Buck is technically red and blue).

What’s been at the centre of most of his character development thus far, is his relationship with his father, Mayor Dewey. The latter is someone is a position of power who is scrutinised heavily by his constituents. He is responsible for a lot of people in a city where there are constant threats to their safety and well-being. He’s not the best at his job, and may have some misconceptions as to what leadership is, but he really does mean well for his people. At the same time though, putting up a front is pretty important to Mayor Dewey, as seen in Political Power. He’d rather hide things from his people and hope that that keeps them safe.

Before I start with the Buck-as-alternate-timeline-Garnet theory, I want to let the sink in. Because we’ve already met someone in canon who behaves the way Bill Dewey does.

Source: SU Wiki

I’m talking about Blue Diamond. And I know for a lot of people it’s not easy to associate someone who flusters easily, like Bill Dewey, with someone as stoic as BD. (Goodness, I just realised both of their initials were BD; there goes short- handing it) But from what we’ve seen of her, BD is looking out for her people. The entire reason her court was sent to Earth in the first place, was to quash the rebellion before it got anywhere big enough to actually harm people on Homeworld. Additionally, that moment of vindictiveness:

Source: SU Wiki

When she ordered Ruby to be shattered, she said “How dare you fuse with a member of my court.” Sapphire is not only one of her greatest assets, but also one of the closest people she has in court. Like Bill, she keeps a lot of secrets about the actual dangers her people are in, and there are few people she can actually confide in. When Sapphire told her the outcome of the Rebellion, that it would have been crushed in that one encounter, BD was relieved. And yes, that exchange took place in a secret palanquin meeting that others weren’t allowed to hear.

Source: SU Wiki

And that moment of vindictiveness, when her first instinct was to shatter Ruby, do we not see that same level of vindictiveness with Bill when he’s put under a lot of pressure? In Political Power, when the electricity went out, Bill immediately bangs on the Gem’s door and orders them to fix everything. He didn’t ask what happened or why; in fact, I doubt he cared for any explanation at the moment. He needed things back in order again, before it severely affected people enough that they would be discontent. Because Beach City is always watching him; that’s the pain of leadership. When everything goes right, you’re owed no credit, and when things go wrong, you’re always the person they look for.

BD was put under that same pressure too. Because of Ruby and Sapphire’s fusion, Rose and Pearl got away. Everyone is watching her; everyone is expecting her to do something about it, because a lot was riding on that encounter. Steven Universe is a show that talks about the greys of morality, and I’m pretty certain one huge grey area is how sometimes, we want to do what’s best for people but we’re actually hurting them. BD may have thought it best not to pursue inter-caste fusion. For one, it’s highly frowned upon in gem society. Perhaps BD could have asked for an explanation, but I believe that Ruby would have been punished either way, perhaps with a less-harsh solution. Because how could she not? All the people in her court saw it, and frowned upon it, and even if somehow BD didn’t want to punish Ruby after understanding what happened, there was no way she couldn’t conform to Homeworld’s social mores. (Though I do feel those strict social codes were put in by the Diamonds in the first place, but more on that in the future).

So now we got to the heart of the theory, and assume that the Rebellion never happened. That after Ruby and Sapphire fused, somehow, the Crystal Gems were defeated. What would become of Garnet?

In my mind, the most reasonable way Pearl and Rose could have been stopped in The Answer, would have been to take advantage of their confusion when Garnet first fused. Their main advantage at the time was their speed and accuracy. At that moment, though, they were sitting ducks. If anyone had the presence of mind to attack them then (instead of shaming Garnet in the middle of a battle), they might have stood a chance and won.

It’s a stretch, I know. But the point here is, given that circumstance, Garnet would have been less “the reason the Rebellion succeeded and Homeworld now had to engage in a millennias-long war” and more “tangentially instrumental in helping Homeworld win.”

She didn’t have to even form at The Answer. This could have been any other diplomatic case long after the Crystal Gems were defeated, and Ruby was protecting Sapphire from something else that turned out okay in the end.

Perhaps then it would have been more socially acceptable for BD to look into the fusion and hear their side of the story. Given Sapphire’s innate importance to BD, having her abilities amplified through fusion wouldn’t be as big a deal. And perhaps, seeing how high Sapphire is on the social ladder, it would be the beginning of making inter-caste fusions more acceptable. The only caveat here is that fusions are a well-known war tactic to them.

This means that as Homeworld continues going around the universe conquering worlds, Ruby and Sapphire would be seen as Homeworld’s favourite, as Peridot used to put it, “war machine.” Her importance in gem society would be something like BD’s right hand man and a figurehead general for inter-caste fusions as weapons.

Given the strict social codes of Homeworld, Garnet would have to always put up a front, remain stoic, do as she’s told. And this is exactly what Buck has to do every single day

Buck has a lot of creative tendencies. He’s into post-modernism, and it’s a very new way to see the world, in the same way Ruby and Sapphire started seeing things differently when they first fused. And he’s very independent. Having a father like Bill means having a father who isn’t around a lot. It’s having a father you have to share with the rest of the city, because of how much time goes into being a political figure.

And being the son of that political figure is stifling, especially because in politics, appearances are important.

Buck Dewey: At least he only bugs you about one thing. My dad’s gotta say something about everything I do, ‘cause I’m the mayor’s son. And I’m like, you can’t tell me what to do, I’m the mayor’s… wait.

Source: SU Wiki

In our theoretical Homeworld Wins situation, BD would look better if she didn’t shatter Ruby because of Garnet’s contribution to ending the Rebellion. But Garnet would have to play a part too, because her entire existence becomes political. She was spared because she’s a fusion, but she’s also bound to so many other rules because she’s a fusion. Especially because they’re viewed as war machines, she’d have to be extra cautious about everything she does, because it could be interpreted as an act of aggression. It’s like if a diplomat walked around with two AK-47′s strapped on her at all times. It’s terrifying for civilian gems.

And Buck lives on Earth. This is a world in which it’s more or less encouraged that you question your political leaders. Since Bill relies on votes, we can tell it’s democratic in their world so unlike the Imperial Homeworld, where Diamonds are queens/gods, politicians like Bill are subject to more scrutiny and are demanded a lot of accountability.

Think of it this way, people weren’t afraid to run out to Bill’s van and tip it over while he was inside because the power may be out for a while. That’s pretty terrifying, being in Buck’s shoes. A lot of his self-expression ridicules the things society finds important. He’s very into irony.

If someone got wind of the things he believed in, things like in Shirt Club (and he went out of his way to go incognito about it), then that would reflect badly on Bill. We take for granted sometimes how relaxed Beach City residents can be about the crazy phenomena around them, but when it comes to conventional concerns like the power going out, and probably some other acts of vandalism and petty crimes, it’s a big deal.

So Buck is now experiencing what someone in Garnet’s theoretical position would have experienced if Homeworld managed to end the Rebellion early on. It’s a hard life. If you think about it, politicians like Bill and BD want to be in their position and they stick through the hardships because it’s part of the job they asked for, but people like Buck and theoretical Garnet certainly don’t.

Update: The complete series has been published and all links are working.

If you liked this one, you can check out the others here (Sour Cream) and here (Jenny Pizza). Thank you! :)

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