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Peyton Warren

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18 + She/her, Gen X, ISTP, Pan/Queer, & Gemini. I write and fangirl. Walter Marshall is current fandom bf. (Don't tell Sy). Asks and DMs are always open to readers,writers, RP, etc My fandoms are far too many to mention here.
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How to write smut ?

(@urfriendlywriter | req by @rbsstuff @yourlocalmerchgirl anyone under the appropriate age, please proceed with caution :') hope this helps guys! )

writing smut depends on each person's writing style but i think there's something so gut-wrenchingly beautiful about smut when it's not very graphic and vivid. like., would this turn on a reader more?

"he kissed her, pulling her body closer to him."

or this?

"His lips felt so familiar it hurt her heart. His breathing had become more strained; his muscles tensed. She let herself sink into his embrace as his hands flattened against her spine. He drew her closer."

(Before proceeding further, these are all "in my opinion" what I think would make it better. Apply parts of the advice you like and neglect the aspects you do not agree with it. Once again I'm not saying you have to follow a certain type of style to write smut! Creative freedom exists for a reason!)

One may like either the top or the bottom one better, but it totally depends on your writing to make it work. Neither is bad, but the second example is more flattering, talking literally.

express one's sensory feelings, and the readers will automatically know what's happening.

writing, "her walls clenched against him, her breath hitching with his every thrust" is better than writing, "she was about to cum".

here are some vocabulary you can introduce in your writing:

  • whimpered, whispered, breathed lightly, stuttered, groaned, grunted, yearned, whined, ached, clenched, coaxed, cried out, heaved, hissed
  • shivering, shuddering, curling up against one's body, squirming, squirting, touching, teasing, taunting, guiding, kneeling, begging, pining, pinching, grinding,
  • swallowing, panting, sucking in a sharp breath, thrusting, moving gently, gripped, biting, quivering,
  • nibbling, tugging, pressing, licking, flicking, sucking, panting, gritting, exhaling in short breaths,
  • wet kisses, brushing soft kisses across their body (yk where), licking, sucking, teasing, tracing, tickling, bucking hips, forcing one on their knees
  • holding hips, guiding the one on top, moving aimlessly, mindlessly, sounds they make turn insanely beautiful, sinful to listen to
  • some adverbs to use: desperately, hurriedly, knowingly, teasingly, tauntingly, aimlessly, shamelessly, breathlessly, passionately, delicately, hungrily
  • he sighed with pleasure
  • her skin flushed
  • he shuddered when her body moved against his
  • he planted kisses along her jawline
  • her lips turned red, messy, kissed and flushed.
  • his hands were on his hair, pulling him.
  • light touches traveled down his back
  • words were coiled at his throat, coming out as broken sobs, wanting more
  • he arched his back, his breath quivering
  • her legs parted, sinking into the other's body, encircling around their waist.

+ mention the position, how they're being moved around---are they face down, kneeling, or standing, or on top or on bottom--it's really helpful to give a clear picture.

+ use lustful talk, slow seduction, teasing touches, erratic breathing, give the readers all while also giving them nothing. make them yearn but DO NOT PROLONG IT.

sources to refer to for more: (will be updated soon!)

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List of sharing a bed prompts
  1. “This line mustn’t be crossed or I’m going to kick you off the fucking bed.”
  2. “Why must I share a bed with them out of all people?!” 
  3. “It’s cold, get under the covers.”
  4. “C’mere… Want snuggles.” (Featuring grabby hands!!!)
  5. Character A waking up to Character B, their faces inches apart and them wondering how the fuck someone could look so beautiful while sleeping. (Bonus: them freaking out when Character B wakes up and catches them staring.) 
  6. “Why’d you push me off the bed?!” “B-Because you’ve crossed the line!” 
  7. “…You’re staring.” “I was not.” “I could feel the intensity of it, even with my eyes closed.” 
  8. Character B being a blanket hogger and Character A letting them hog the blanket. 
  9. “Why are you curled up like a prawn?” “Because you stole my side of the blanket!”  
  10. Character B, being someone who likes to hug something in their sleep, ends up using Character A as their makeshift pillow. Character A isn’t too keen on it at first but they end up accepting their fate. (It’s the best night of sleep they’ve probably ever had since they were a kid.) 
  11. “You were snoring the whole fucking night and I couldn’t get a wink of sleep because of that!”
  12. “You were sleep talking last night.” “…What did I say?”
  13. “Why the fuck is the bed wet?” “…I just happen to sweat a lot.” 
  14. Character A begrudgingly letting Character B snuggle up to them but secretly enjoying it.
  15. Character B spooning Character A even though Character A is usually the big spoon. 
  16. “You’re so warm…”  “Fuck do you think I am, a reptile? Of course I’m warm.” 
  17. “You’re so nice to hug.” 
  18. “I like how soft you feel in my arms.” “…Thanks?” 
  19. “How did we end up with your feet in my face?!” 
  20. Their limbs getting all tangled up while they’re sleeping and then them waking up and literally falling off the bed when trying to disentangle themselves from each other while fully freaking out about it.
  21. Character B hugging Character A immediately, sobs racking through their body after being shaken awake from their nightmare and Character A not knowing what the hell to do with their arms so they awkwardly pat their back, saying, “There, there…” 
  22. “Hey! Hey! Are you okay? Come over here, it’s okay. Whatever it is, it’s okay.”
  23. “It’s okay, I’m here.” “You’re not going to leave, are you?” “I won’t.” “Promise?” “Promise.”
  24. Character A enjoying sharing a bed with Character B but would never admit to it.
  25. “We should do this more often.” “No fucking way, once is enough.” (They do it often after that.)
  26. “Oi! Wake up!” “What? What happened?” “Why did you just moan in your sleep?” “…What, were you turned on by it?” “What?! No, of course not! Disturbed, but definitely not turned on.” 
  27. “Your feet are so cold. What the hell?”
  28. “Stop sticking your feet down my pants!” “It’s not my fault your asscheeks are hella warm.”
  29. “Just… Please hold me for tonight. Just tonight, that’s all I’m asking for,” Character B whispers, arms tightening around Character A.
  30. Character A sharing their bed with Character B so often the sheets and pillows are starting to smell like Character B. (Bonus: Character A missing their presence whenever they don’t wake up next to them.)
  31. Character A waking up to Character B clinging onto them. Instead of waking them up to tell them to get off of them, they decide to let them be. 
  32. Character A wakes up to Character B’s face right near theirs. They’re leaning in, still drowsy and not thinking straight, ready to risk it all, when Character B opens their eyes and Character A’s first instinct is to smack their face away. “That fucking hurt, you imbecile!” Character B cries out, glaring at them as they rub their nose.
  33. “Do you remember us spooning last night?” “We did what?”
  34. “Why am I naked, and most importantly, why are you naked?” “…I’m hurt. Do you really not remember what happened last night? Did I not give it to you good enough?” “Fucking excuse me?!” 
  35. “I wanna be big spoon this time.” “But you’re tiny.”
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