“Whatever you two are doing over there, keep me out of it.”
summertime writers' asks!
🦋 tell us about your current wip
🌿 who is your favourite character you've ever written?
🌞 favourite character from current wip
🍦 what is your current word count?
🌻 least favourite character / hardest to write
🍉 favourite wip
☁️ wip you want to write but haven't started yet
🌸 wip you've been working on the longest
✨ newest wip
🦩 wip you hate working on but are too far gone to turn back
🍸 character who inspired your mc
🌱 book that inspired your wip
🍃 what is your genre?
🌼 least favourite writing genre
🥥 least favourite reading genre
🐠 author who inspires you
🍯 author you know
🌷 writing achievement you want to brag about
🍄 name a song that represents your mc
🍬 a song for your favourite character
🌤 name the hardest thing you've had to do for writing
🍰 where you like to write
🍧 weirdest place you've written
🕊 mc's MBTI
🍀 character you would kill off if they were not vital to the plot
🍓 worst thing you've done to your characters
👒 nicest thing you've done to your characters
🌾 book you would / have writ(t)e(n) fanfic for
🌨️ book you hate
🐥 here's some writing motivation!
rb for an ask!
Word Dieting Your First Draft
Here are two phrases you can cut without loss:
- begin to (begins to, beginning to, began to, begun to)
- start to (starts to, starting to, started to)
She began to run -> She ran. Rain began to fall -> Rain fell.
Should you avoid "begin to" altogether?
Well, no. Sometimes, when an action starts and is abandoned immediately, they clarify what's going on:
She began to walk home, but changed her mind after a few steps. He started to paint the fence, but thought better of it.
Cut "Look"
More often than not, your story will work just as well without telling the reader that the character is looking at something.
Looking at him, she nodded. -> She nodded. He looked at her and poured her a drink. -> He poured her a drink. She looked at the mountain which towered over the valley. -> The mountain towered over the valley.
Cut "See"
If you describe something, it is implied that the POV character sees it.
When she took another galnce at the book in his hand, she saw he was
Cut "Turn"
Do your characters turn towards one another before saying something? Turn before they move? People turn all the time - it's implied without having to describe it.
She changed her mind, turned, and hurried home. -> She changed her mind and hurried home. She turned to him and clasped his hand -> She clasped his hand.
Where turn + look are used:
He turned to look at her and nodded. "I agree that's true." -> He nodded. "That's true." -> "True" [even better!]
When to use "look", "turn" and "see":
- when a dialogue scene involves several people
- when two of these words are used, try cutting one.
Anyway, I had a really cool idea last night for a writing challenge, and it goes like this:
Set a timer for 15 minutes, sit down, and write something for your favourite character. It doesn’t have to have plot or be cohesive, the spelling doesn’t matter, it could just be a stream of consciousness. Stop when the timer is up, and post. No editing, no worrying about quality or quantity. See what comes up!
Tag whoever you want and get those creative juices flowing 🥰
Tagging: @latenightsimping @thornsnvultures @bewilderedbunny @hellfirehottie420 @dadsbongos @pinkrelish @aphrogeneias @br0ck-eddie @boomhauer @edsforehead @jo-harrington @justsheerfilth1 @lunatictardis @nightonblogmountain @pollenallergie @quinnkeerys @roanniom @songforeddiemunson @usedtobecooler @vigilanteshit and whoever else wishes to!
Am gonna personally work on this later today when I’m not sitting at the car dealership.
But wanted to tag my writer friends. @geralts-yenn @adulting-sucks @sarahdonald87 @ellethespaceunicorn @raccoon-eyed-rebel @ronearoundblindly @sweetandgentlecreature @jvanilly @joannaliceevans-fanficblog
Prompt #1006
“You never seem like you’re afraid.”
Sleepy Dialogue
Waking up in the morning
- "Good morning, my love."
- "Do we really have to get up?"
- "I've just had the best dream."
- "Did you know that you talk in your sleep?"
- "Sorry, I didn't want to wake you."
- "Love the hair."
- "Did you dream about me."
- "Go back to sleep, I'll fight off the monsters."
- "No, don't let the light in."
- "Just five more minutes..."
- "You were much nicer in my dreams."
- "Come back, the bed's cold without you."
- "Good morning, sleepyhead."
- "I had a really bed dream. And it seemed so real."
- "You definitely needed the sleep."
- "No, don't get up."
- "I didn't know you were such a cuddler."
- "You're adorable like this."
- "Can we stay like this just for a minute longer?"
- "It was nice... not sleeping alone."
Going to bed at night
- "No, I'm not even tired yet!"
- "You're not making much sense anymore."
- "We should probably get you in bed."
- "You're definitely yawning too much to not be tired."
- "Can you carry me to the bed?"
- "Will you dream of me?"
- "Just put your head on my shoulder."
- "You're allowed to cuddle me like a teddy bear."
- "Come on, let's go to bed."
- "You're about to fall asleep on your feet."
- "But I need your smell to fall asleep."
- "Ok, it's time for bed."
- "Will you stay with me?"
- "I'll see you in my dreams."
- "Your eyes are barely open anymore."
- "The monsters can't get you when I'm here."
- "Hey, I'm not your pillow."
- "Do you want to keep the light on?"
- "You're voice is so calming."
- "Good night, my love."
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Word prompts to use for doodling or writing
- starry night
- baking
- hot chocolate
- scarf
- music
- snowflakes
- joy
- sweets
- fuzzy socks
- sleigh ride
- stars
- mulled wine
- candles
- books
- ornaments
- snowball fight
- miracle
- christmas market
- apron
- coming home
- wrapping paper
- christmas tree
- fairy lights
- secrets
- family
- cookies
- reunions
- snowman
- wishes
- silence
- fireworks
Gonna try to work each of these into drabbles for either Blinded By The Fog or Stick Handling . Need to write more.