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Peregrine Vision

@perevision / perevision.tumblr.com

Hoping to see farther every day. Illustration, books, comics and general nerdiness. You can go directly to my art tag here.
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hi! i need help. i've got an idea for a fic i've been sitting on for a while now, but it's a bit of an ambitious au that requires research and an actual plot that makes sense. i don't know where to start, and i'm the type of person who bases their worth on their productivity (something i need to work on, i know). i've had lots of free time, but even then i haven't written anything. any tips on where/how to start? or not feel shitty about this? thanks ✨✨

Bear with me for a moment while I talk about something that might seem totally unrelated: project management methodology.

There are two major ways that I've encountered for managing a project. One way is called Waterfall and the other way is called Agile. In Waterfall project management, you basically build the whole thing and then release a finished product. This is useful in a situation like baking a cake. Giving people the uncooked batter probably won't go over well.

In Agile project management, you build something that's referred to as the minimum viable product. This is a sort of stripped down version of the final product. It still does whatever it's meant to do, but it doesn't have all of the bells and whistles on it. If you play video games, you'll be familiar with this. They release the base game and then add more functionalities and levels over time, but meanwhile people are buying and playing the game and those sales help to finance further development.

So what does this have to do with writing a big fic? Well, writing longfic is its own kind of project management. Depending on your own personality, either a Waterfall or an Agile approach could work for you.

Based on this ask, I think you might want to take an Agile approach. Look at the overall story and think: what's the core story I'm trying to tell? That's the minimum viable product. You can add in all of the world building and the subplots etc. after you've got the main thread figured out, but that main thread is what you should focus on first. Any research on the main thread gets priority. Any research on the side stuff can wait for later.

And this can also be a way for you to get feedback as you write. That's another core of Agile development - getting feedback from the stakeholders (in this case your audience) throughout the development process so that the final product fits the need. You can do this with a beta reader or by participating in things like Six Sentence Sunday.

You can also break your huge story down into a series of smaller stories that can be posted separately and grouped together in a series on ao3.

Decide what the most important part of the story is that you really want to tell and start there. Once you've got that part, you can build on it.

How do the rest of you figure out a huge story like this one? Can you offer anon any advice?

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For a long project, so that I’m sure that I’m gonna finish it, I need to have it all written down before I start posting, otherwise the pressure of having to write it down combined with the pressure of having readers waiting for an update will scare me into never looking at that project again. I will certainly still edit it and maybe even add some scenes as I proof pread for posting day, but most of it needs to be written down.

Long fics scare the hell out of me, so what I do is focus on it one scene at a time, cause I will get overwhelmed if I know I have 5, 10, 20, 40 more scenes to write.

Just write the scene you have on your mind now - or do it chronologically, whatever works best for you - as if it is your only worry.

I, particularly, go back and forth a lot, though I leave all the scenes in their respective “space”, leaving little notes to myself so that I know that I need to add another scene in a certain place, a transition paragraph, anything like that.

I know a lot of people make a plan for the fic, and that sounds really smart, but it doesn’t really work for me. I go with the flow, always rereading what is already written so that I can have a feel for what needs to come next. This approach also makes me end up with quite a few discarded scenes, but it is what it is 🤷‍♀️

While pantsing is valid, I think that it's worth giving a shot at planning in Anon's case. I too am writing a super ambitious au, and it took me 9 months to thought-dump on-and-off, and another three to plan out the plot, characters, and world in detail. Yes, I am on the extreme side of things, but here's some wisdom I can share.

First of all, I feel like planning gets a bad rap for being "homework". Like I've heard "Oh, it stifles creativity" or "It feels like the story has already been told so why write it?" and I just... don't get that at all?

Sometimes planning doesn't work for you, and that's okay, but planning is an intensely creative process! This is where you lay the skeleton of your story down, and then actually writing it is where you lay on the flesh. Along the way, you may have to rearrange a few bones here and there, but you see a finishing point ahead.

Having a general path to follow is what gets be through longfics. I can't stand to run in blind. I need to see the gist of what's ahead of me. To some people, they feel outlining the story means there's no point in telling it because it's "already been told" but to me it's like inhaling a binge-worthy book at lightning speed and then writing the fic is like rereading the story to pick up on countless details, clues, and foreshadowing that flew over my head the first time. Even with my meticulous planning, the drafting process continues to delight and surprise all the time. It just comes from the details rather than the trajectory of the story.

When it comes to planning a large fic, though, it helps to get visual. Go beyond the typical Word or notes document. I am once again quite extreme because I pay like $12 a month for Milanote, but I use it because it allows me to easily navigate between my notes, colour code them, add visuals, as well as put in a ton of detail while also being able to see the bigger picture. Look into using a free program that allows you to do the same thing, or spice up your document with bookmark links, coloured text, and pictures.

When it comes to the actual content, these are the three places to focus on:

  • Plot
  • Characters
  • Worldbuilding

Plotting is about ensuring that you have a strong throughline. You don't want to get side-tracked and you want to keep the pace. Where does the tension peak and rest? Planning will help you find that balance early on without having to do a ton of deleting or rewriting.

Character profiles will help you nail down how they've been shaped by this world, as well as consistency. The thing to focus on here are goals, motivations, values, and development. That's the real meat and potatoes. If you know that deeply, then it'll be easy to keep your characters in-character.

Worldbuilding isn't my favourite thing (and I like that fanfic lets me gloss over it most of the time) but this is where you focus on plot-relevant regions, magic systems, cultures, and political systems. This is also where pictures come in handy. Instead of writing tons of notes, just get some inspo pics, add a few sentences below it for context, and vola! Worldbuilding!

After you've finished your planning, read through all your notes again. See if there are any changes, big or small, that you want to make before you start. It'll save you a ton of hassle.

And after all that planning, your longfic should hopefully look a lot less intimidating because you know exactly what you're getting into. There's no running in blind because the path is clear and now you only have to pave it.

Hope that helped!

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perevision

Wow, lots of amazing advice in here for comics creators too 🥰

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astolat

Fool's Hope by Astolat

Fool's Hope (38490 words) by astolat Chapters: 1/1 Fandom: Transformers Generation One Rating: Mature Warnings: Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings Relationships: Megatron/Optimus Prime, Elita One/Optimus Prime Characters: Optimus Prime, Megatron, Starscream (Transformers), Elita One (Transformers), Ultra Magnus, Thundercracker Additional Tags: End of the war, Protector of Cybertron, Quintessons - Freeform Series: Part 17 of Transformers works Summary:

There was very little hope to be found within the Darkmount cell. What there was, Optimus clung to, for as long as he could.

Here's my story from this year's Chocolate Box exchange! The first fic I've managed to post in the time of Covid, sob sob. But I got a great prompt and it helped me get things moving, yay. \o/

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perevision

*finds sketchbook in hand with no memory of how it got there*

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mari-writes

“The Moment” (rewrite)

Summary: Two days before moving away to start training as a professional volleyball player, Bokuto visits Akaashi at his family’s house for one last hangout. They reminisce about their time together. Akaashi tells Bokuto a secret. Bokuto takes a leap of faith.

Rating: Teen and Up Audiences

Words: 2,882

Hey guys! Here’s my rewrite of “The Moment,” the final part of my “Slowly But Surely” series. If you enjoy this story please help me out with a reblog/comment! It’d be much appreciated. 😊

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perevision

Mari’s Bokuaka series is super sweet! Not one but several fluffy blankets for a dreary day. 

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I was at the Louvre and just had to take a picture of this statue of Poetry just because it made me think of @amarguerite and her Comedy of Manners ‘verse. 

Although I think if anyone tried to sculpt a naked statue of Lizzy, it would definitely be the 18th century equivalent of pasting actresses’ heads onto porn star screenshots and she’d be very justified in walloping the sculptor.

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Sorry guys, between winter flu, work and being shitty at digital art, I haven’t posted much. But I’m reading a lot of Sheith to heal me! Here’s something inspired by @neyasochi’s Cake and Kisses, where Keith gets Shiro a very gory birthday gift and there’s a Wolf-Rayet star instead of a sunset. I also come from a culture where one of the best dishes is animal head, so I’m really feeling Keith’s eager but embarrassed face right now. And craving sisig.

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copperbadge

How do you do it? How do you write fan fiction? I think my issue may be I don’t see my fandoms as needing my voice.

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Well, the beauty of fandom is that nobody’s voice is needed. Fandom doesn’t need my voice, if I stopped writing tomorrow there would be plenty of people to say anything I could have thought of saying, and then some. The nice thing about fandom is that we’re all here because we want to be here, and when we talk it’s because we want to say things. 

So I think look at it this way instead: is there a story you need to tell? Is there something you need to say? Or even just want to say? Fandom can be as much about us as it is about the canon we’re writing for. What has always driven me in terms of fandom is that there’s a story in me that wants out, or I have something I want to say about the canon, and there’s no reason not to say it. That’s how I write – out of compulsion and desire. Those aren’t things anyone outside of me can inspire or control. 

So I guess I write by making it about me, and not giving a crap whether the canon needs what I have to say. :D It takes a healthy ego sometimes, I admit. But that’s how I do it. 

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perevision

I’ve never thought of myself as a writer, I’ve always been an illustrator. I don’t think I’m very good tbh, I had no training or practice outside my journal (I’ve read a lot of books by my favourite writers about how they write, but never did the exercises). But I’ve been sporadically writing fanfic since childhood because once in a while I desperately needed to read a particular story and no one had written it...so I did. The need to read and make that story was greater than my self-doubt.

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Last Sentence meme

Thanks for the tag @a-different-equation! Put the last sentence you wrote and tag as many authors as it has words.

The last sentence I wrote was a couple words long, but right before that:

“He had taken my name: he wrote as my husband.”

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random-nexus

Having been tagged a little while back by @a-candle-for-sherlock​, I just remembered tonight to actually follow through on doing it!  I suck, so sorry.

The last sentence I wrote is from an ACD Sherlock Holmes AU in my ‘The Furred And The Fae’ series:

“You have special knowledge in magical healing, then, I take it?”

Eleven people to tag!  I’mma just tag wildly at random (apologies if any of you have already been tagged in this):  @twelvebrightducks @88thparallel @mottlemoth @sarahthecoat @rsfcommonplace @let-bijohns-be-bi-johns @Tysolna @iwantthatbelstaffanditsoccupant @simpleanddestructivechemistry @undun-duz @green-violin-bow  and anyone else who wants to join in. ;D

Thank you so much @random-nexus @alexaprilgarden and @mottlemoth for the tag!

My last sentence written is:

When he leans back against the edge of the counter, his shoulders have drawn up a little: cautious, guarded.

Tagging @lmirandas @agent-elaine @out-there-tmblr (also if I tag @alexaprilgarden again…will we get more Yoga AU…?)

@green-violin-bow and @immaplane tagged me, so the last sentence I wrote was:

He’ll clean them tonight, scrub at them with soap until the marks are gone.

(I never claimed it was an interesting sentence!)

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perevision

I haven’t written anything for longer than I’d like, but here’s the last sentence I wrote in my fic (which is still coming, I swear):

It’s not helping the tension in Shiro’s shoulders.

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‘Champion, I can take a beating I’ll rise again...’

I really have some deep heart feelings about @astolat‘s Champion, and Rumble’s feelings about Megatron’s feelings about the war, how loyalty and faith can be just enough like love it makes no difference from the outside, and how art plus action can be enough to at least put a war on hold long enough for communication to happen. But mostly I just drew robots singing and dancing and getting drunk.

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Fanart for @astolat​‘s Transformers fic Champion.

He was pals with some weirdo rich humans, and when he told them about it they showed up at the hangar and they got all these lights set up and opened up this old fuel line...and Powerglide stood behind this big metal bar pouring drinks and smirking and showing off

I had totally forgotten about The Girl Who Loved Powerglide episode until I was googling him! Astoria is wearing a Gareth Pugh dress and metallic Kurt Geiger platforms because that was the most robot cosplay thing I could think of her wearing. I will colour this at some point when I finish the Blitzwing-Jazz-Thundercracker drawing.

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perevision

Chapter 2 is up! There are some OCs in there; I like them a lot, I hope you do too.

There’s a lot of talking in this chapter! Some things happen? More will happen soon, I promise. Also, I deleted about 4K words and had to rewrite it practically at the last minute because it was so clunky. How do people do this regularly?

Reblogging for daytime! There’s a lot of Galra stuff in here; maybe @thegalranetwork might be interested in OCs and some BoM culture building.

Ps. Did I forget to mention this chapter’s title is ‘you had me at hello’ and is Kolivan POV ;)

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Chapter 2 is up! There are some OCs in there; I like them a lot, I hope you do too.

There's a lot of talking in this chapter! Some things happen? More will happen soon, I promise. Also, I deleted about 4K words and had to rewrite it practically at the last minute because it was so clunky. How do people do this regularly?

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Chapters: 1/6 Fandom: Voltron: Legendary Defender Rating: General (will change) Warnings: Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings Relationships: Kolivan/Allura, Shiro/Keith Characters: Kolivan, Allura, Keith, Shiro, Lance, Pidge, Hunk, Coran, Galra OCs, Alien OCs Additional Tags: Slow Burn, Friends to Lovers, Pining, Political Alliance, Space Opera, Interspecies Romance, crazy romcom tropes Summary:

Privately Keith is of the opinion that he’s pretty good at feelings. He has lots of them. He just doesn’t like them very much. They should stay inside where no one else has to be bothered with them, instead of being spread around and getting in the way of everyone else’s business, LANCE.
He was sure that if anyone shared his feelings on Feelings, it would be Kolivan.

Chapter 1 is done!

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I haven’t felt this fired up to write a longfic in years, but the same thing is happening as last time, when I start writing with a PLAN and then it spirals out of control.

So I started writing Allurivan romcom but in the interest of getting them there, I accidentally Sheith space opera? And in the process wrote the Voltron ending I didn’t know I wanted?

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