Obviously my first magical girl sallys were made pretty fast and I had been mostly focusing on doing patterns and colors without as much regard for the shape of the outfit so I've been working on some additional sketches as seen above.
design details under cut
OK so I reevaluated some things from before
1- I didn't like how symmetrical the spider one was in some places. I removed the back bow (without a ribbon around the waist it looks weird) and changed the hair to be more asymmetrical (side ponytail)
2- The basic dress of the spider one is the same as before with changes to the accessories
3- I'm not certain about the socks/gloves rn
4- I put a little skull in her bow and I was thinking it would be cute to give her a little magical-girl-cat-familiar. Basically zero the dog but a little cat. Not sure if people will like it or hate it.
5- obviously in this sketch I included the patterns on the colors. They won't be 1-1 with the movie, they'll just be the color with a slightly darker overlay. The warm/light colors have patterns and the dark/cool colors are solid blocks. It honestly looks way less bad than I thought it would.