so now that my laptop is working again, i can check my grades on my creative writing portfolio...
i don't understand half of what he's trying to tell me in this
"why crawled?" What do you mean "why?" IT'S MY STORY! WHY ARE YOU CRITICIZING MY USE OF PAST-TENSED VERBS??
"why does dipper not comment on norman saying seemingly random things anymore?" I honestly don't know. It was more of a "oh, he's talking to a ghost. okay" Dipper would be the one to just kinda go with it by now, right?
And then he decided to "look up" fanfiction
wow, so fanfiction.net (assuming that's the one he found? that's the only one i use anyway) is for people who don't want to win a pulitzer, but just share and enjoy their story ideas
that is the definition of fanfiction.