So, this musical is made of crazy...

I'm trying to figure out something with my musical. If the target audience is meant to be 14-25 yr olds, because in the main opening scene, within the first few lines of dialogue, the word "ass" is used instead of "donkey", is this okay? It is later used as a joke...for the Once-ler...so I want to keep the joke in there... But I also don't want to offend anyone...

Here, I'll post a little bit of the scene, and you tell me if it's offensive or not, okay?

So...the Once-ler musical is coming along. I added a new part about him and Melvin. Their relationship goes from... like how Katniss and Buttercup are in The Hunger Games...but reversed, to...well, Melvin more tolerates him and Oncie considers him one of his best friends. It's weird. Just go with it.

Okay, so I was writing some notes today while I had some free time between classes...

I just figured I'd scan them and put them up here. I'll start doing these more specifically on my laptop, but for now, they're just gonna be drawn on notebook paper. Whee.

Sorry if it's hard to read, but it's not all that important. And don't make fun of the way I write my As! I hate it when people say they look stupid. THEY LOOK THE SAME WAY THAT YOU TYPE THEM. Jerks.

Anyway, I just sketched some backdrops, getting ideas of how I want the scene portrayed. In my theatre class, we're going to be doing a lot of work about Designing, so hopefully, I'll pick something useful up from there. ;)

But, if you have any ideas, let me know, guys! Okay?