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Myst * Italian * obsessing over blond fictional characters
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c3po

oh u can have this post i don’t want it

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coughloop

Gee, thanks mista! Oi Avent had a post to me own since and mum n pop died of influenza! I'll be certain to cherish it as if it were me little brutha who died from influenza also

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gogglor

Woss-all this then? You cheeky li’uhl buggah, wheh’d you get that post? Didn’t I tell you wha’ ‘appens to li’uhl boys that steal posts, hm? If your dear old mum knew she’d catch influenza with shame.

Oh no, Officer! I know ‘im, and ‘e’s a good lad; ‘e ‘elped me find daddy when I was lost in th market! I’m sure my father would be happy to let me pay for th’ post! Father is just around the corner getting influenza

'Ere offisah, dahn't truss that littuw giwl, orrite? She's the one wot stole foive bob from me larse week she did, when i was recovering in St. Urchin's 'Ome For Those With Influenza. And I sorer shewwin 'er ankles to some poor gent dahn the pub yesserday arfernoon while 'er ol' dad stole the poor bugger's influenza roight aht the man's pokkit. She's a baddun orrite. Fling 'er dahn the nick.

if i knew they were gonna make my post british i never would’ve gave it away

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There were no fucking postcards

There was an obsession with fucking

What is this big Fucking joke?

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evilsoup

hold on the japanese want what

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One of the big differences I've noticed from getting into Chinese dramas is how spoiled you get from gifsets of shows you've never watched. You see a gifset from an American show of one person cradled in another person's arms, pierced with multiple arrows and spitting blood, and suddenly you've been spoiled for a major character death. You see the same thing in a Chinese drama and you've gained a net zero information wise.

Don't leave the best part in the tags, Fox!

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possessable

Time Travel Fix-It-Fic idea where a Bad Ending happens, but then one of the characters is magically sent to the beginning of the story. it seems like they're the only one who's been sent back in time and they're like "Huh, is this my second chance? I have to try my best to fix everything! I have to do it on my own though, if I tell anyone else that I've lived a future with [Bad Ending], they would never believe me" so they try to push things toward a better outcome while staying secretive about the time travel thing. but it turns out that every character was sent back in time and everyone is trying on their own to fix the situation, but all of them think they're the only one who was sent back in time and that they have to hide it from the others, so they're all being secretive from each other and trying to act normal while fixing everything and they all have different ideas of what "fixing everything" even means and all of them are stupid and it just devolves into everything being worse

like this

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Questions to ask beta readers

General:

  1. Were you confused at any point of the story?
  2. What genre would you say this book is?
  3. When did you put the story down?
  4. Is the ending satisfying?
  5. If you had to cut 3 scenes what would they be?
  6. When did you feel like the story really began?
  7. What was the last book you read before this story?

Characters:

  1. Do you get any of the characters names confused?
  2. Which character is your favorite?
  3. If you had to remove a character who would you and why? (you don't have to remove the character, just make sure their role is meaningful)
  4. Which character do you relate to the most?
  5. Which character do you relate to the least?
  6. Do the characters feel real?
  7. Are character relationships believable?
  8. Are the goals clear and influence the plot?
  9. Are the characters distinct (voice, motivations, etc)

Setting:

  1. Which setting was clearest to you?
  2. Which setting was the most memorable?
  3. Am including enough/too much detail?

Plot and conflict:

  1. Are the internal and external conflicts well defined for the main characters?
  2. Are the internal conflicts and the external conflicts organic and believable?
  3. Are there enough stakes?
  4. Are the plot twists believable but still unexpected?
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datasbride

I'm suddenly very worried about what happened to Jin Guangyao’s hand. The one Lan Wangji cut off. Did they remember to toss it in the coffin with the rest of him? Did they suppress it separately? Under the same mountain? Somwhere else? Is there a random very tiny coffin covered in runes out there? Did Nie Huaisang collect it and stuffed it in one of the walls of the sabers hall? Does it count as an adequate replacement for Nie Mingjue's leg? Or is it just a bit too small? Did it escape in the commotion, and they had to send the juniors to deal with a Mo village type of situation once again? And Lan Sizhui is like "ok, we know what to do, all we need is a couple of walking corpses to fight it, oh-oh, wwx and lwj just eloped, quinquin it is"

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qiu-yan

imagine one single slender jiggy hand, scuttling away from the wreckage of the yunping guanyin temple....

Wonderful post and even more wonderful tags

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