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M. R. Bex Writes

@mrbexwrites / mrbexwrites.tumblr.com

Writer of sci fi & fantasy stories. Come in and say hi! Always happy to make new friends, and ramble to other people. Will participate in tag games! Writblr blog of @islanded-in-a-stream-of-stars
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Jeric went on his way and left the graves behind, but felt as though he still carried the weight of them in his pack. This was what it felt like, now, to truly be alone. He tried to summon the raven back to him. Then, at least, he might feel like there was something else but emptiness inside of him. But no matter how hard he focused, he couldn’t bring it to him. He thought he might sprout a few feathers, turn his foot to a claw, but nothing came of it. Perhaps it had been a one-time curse after all. Only he could be so lucky that his entire life should be ruined by a one-time miracle. Well, that wasn’t true. In a way, his life had already been ruined once. And it had turned into something new, something worth cherishing. Maybe it would again. “That’s the spirit,” Vesper called from the road ahead, waving along with the grasses and the wildflowers, beckoning him to the great, wild world.

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Silas Chrissie at the start of the novel - a put together dandy who doesn't want to get stains on his cream suit:

Silas at the end of the novel - dishevelled, covered in blood, wet:

That's a character arc, babey!

(feat. my art! I've been wanting to be able to draw the boy for about a million years!)

tw: blood below the cut, Silas' final form:

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Unusual Associations
Rules: answer what you associate with your OC in each category!

This took a while because I'm not that good at these things but I try!

Ash Hathaway

Seasoning - sumac maybe?

Weather - a storm forming in the distance

Color - red, purple, black

Sky - foreboding

Magical power - telepathy duh

Plant - a tree (sycamore?)

Weapon - herself?

Social media - I feel like she's just scrolling through Tiktok or YouTube all day looking up tutorials for various things

Makeup - lipstick or eyeliner

Candy - pickle flavored candy cane

Fear - she hates feeling confined or trapped, physically or otherwise

Method of long distance travel - I feel like an RV for a road trip idk why

Art style - I'm feeling "doodle on science homework"

Mythological creature - I'm feeling, like, gorgon

Stationary - black gel pen

Celestial object - black hole

Ash intro

Other UA: Lexi, Maddie

+ ANYONE ELSE

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Find the Word Tag

Tagged by @mrbexwrites

leave

Smiling, but not sure how to continue the bit, I gathered up the cards and started to absentmindedly shuffle them. I’d shuffled the deck three times before Mika said anything. “I tried to leave once.”

risk

“I didn’t tell her our plan. She’s already afraid of him, I showed it to her and asked if she was interested in learning if he had any weaknesses. She was. She doesn’t have to know what we’re planning to want to know what could take him down, and I don’t think there’s any harm in her knowing it. Mika hates Alexander as much as we do.” I was talking more than I needed to, but it was on purpose. There was a risk in saying too much, but it served another purpose, too— it kept the other person in the room from thinking too hard, split up their attention. Zachary had taught me that, but it didn’t mean he was immune to it.

effect

I looked at Raymond, ready for him to correct her. When he hesitated, I said, “You did, right? Because if you didn’t and they found out—“ “You just want to keep everyone in the dark, don’t you? You don’t care if it effects them.” Mika snapped at me.

elaborate

She sees me staring and sighed. “You know. Come on. Zachary was obsessed with [Raymond]— he’s go good at Nyp stuff, so likable, so good at school and making friends and getting people to like him. You hated the attention he got, I know you did, but there you are, risking your life for him. And even now, does Alexander even think to make use of my talents? No, but he’ll set up elaborate schemes to get Raymond’s.” I must’ve given her some judgmental look, because she waved me away. “I shouldn’t’ve said anything. I’m not jealous, it’s put him in so much danger and attracted so much bad attention. And if he wasn’t like that, he wouldn’t be alive.” She shook her head. “Forget I said that. It was stupid.”

Tagging: @writingamongther0ses @betweenthetimeandsound @late-to-the-fandom @surroundedbypearls @cljordan-imperium & @junypr-camus with the words: continue, split, correct, attention

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WIP Acrostic
Rules: post sentences from your WIP that each start with the letter of the given word!

Using The Secret Portal Part Two! But only Hye-Jin chapters because I want to give her more love.

WEIRD

W - Worry overwhelmed me on several occassions, especially when the cake was brought out.

E - Even though we were sitting, I had to tilt my head up to see her.

I - I then reached over and flushed the toilet.

R - “Remember what you said about weird things happening?”

D - Dinner has some sort of connotation to it, so that was why she probably asked about breakfast.

+ ANYONE ELSE

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mrbexwrites

Write 2 Lines Tag

@museandquill tagged me. Passing it onto @sarahlizziewrites @queen-tashie @cowboybrunch @spideronthesun @clearcloudlesssky @surroundedbypearls and anyone else who needs some (no pressure) gentle encouragement to write more of their WIP. Two lines written this afternoon:

He stood up and took a step towards me; I hefted the crowbar onto my good shoulder, ready to swing it if I needed to. The back of his head was missing from where Arnauld’s bullet had exited; the crowbar would finish the rest off.

Here, you can have my writing journal entry for today (the only thing I've written since I'm out of town):

[Alt text: Saturday, 28/9. I awoke to Raj entering my room, bare feet padding across the tiles. He came to sit on the edge of the bed, and set a tray across my lap as soon as I sat up. "Aren't I supposed to be the one looking after you?" "In the end, I had only had two drinks. Turns out I'm a bit of a lush." "Well, thank you." He stole a slice of bacon from my plate, munching on it thoughtfully. I found myself suddenly overcome by a strong desire to wake up with him every day and have him eat from my plate.]

Tagging anyone who would like to share today's writing!

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Silas and Loretta - the Chrissies

Then, her face breaks into a smile. “And what would you know about romance? Real romance. You, with your ha’penny pick-up lines?”

Thank you thank you THANK YOU to @elfroot-and-laurels for this GORGEOUS art! I keep looking at it and grinning because they're too perfect. This is a snapshot of Silas and Loretta between books 1 and 2, when they're newly married.

This commission was part of a raffle prize to raise money for families trying to escape Gaza. I wanted to highlight a few more fundraisers as a part of this post:

Eman - $28,000 CAD/$80,000

Ashraf - €24,371/€25,000

Hussain - $37,578 USD/$40,000

Haya - €89,794/€100,000 

Please consider donating if you can.

Chrissie’s, Strand tag list (+/-): @novel-emma, @tabswrites, @mrbexwrites, @hippiewrites, @vacantgodling, @imsoveryveryconfusedatlife, @harleyacoincidence, @thescatteredscribbles

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Hi Tashie!

Please ramble to me about Runicka's favourite meal to eat, and the best recipe she knows.

I'm hungry and need inspiration for what to make for dinner tonight! Your own personal suggestions very welcome! From, @mrbexwrites (in disguise!)

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Hi! First of all thanks for trusting me with your secret identity lol

Throughout The Quiet Forest, you'll see Runnicka does like a variety of foods, but her go-to meal is a hearty soup/stew, something with poultry (quail and turkey are the usual for her), thick cut root vegetables like potatoes, carrots, radishes, etc., maybe a creamy or thick tomato broth.

She also gets to try dwarven foods later on in the book for the first time (hehehe I was just formatting and doing some work on that part last night ;) ) and learns she REALLY likes them. In the world, dwarves invented, perfected, and brought over a huge variety of foods to Avrin (the continent Runnicka's story takes place on) from their own various cultures as well as the other races they live with across the ocean, so Runnicka gets to try everything from deep fried pickles to curry.

My personal suggestion because I've got it on the brain and am making it tonight is chicken pot pie. I'm making a huge batch today to freeze and pull out for easy dinners later this month. :)

Now here's how I would make the soup/stew Runnicka likes, if you'd like a genuine recipe for tonight or another night (some portions may need to be adjusted as I'm bad at making smaller batches, and my heart always says "MOAR!!!!" when I'm cooking):

Hearty "Quail" soup:

Ingredients:

  • 2 chicken breasts (or equivalent amount of other poultry meat)
  • 1 TSP oil (butter, vegetable, or olive)
  • Half a white or yellow onion
  • 4-6 cloves of garlic
  • 1 TSP oil (butter, vegetable, or olive) (not a typo, you'll just need it twice)
  • 6 cups of chicken broth (veggie broth works too)
  • 2-3 potatoes
  • 2-3 carrots
  • 4-5 radishes OR 2-3 stalks of celery (or other veggie of your choice)
  • 1 TSP Rosemary
  • 1 TSP Thyme
  • 1 bay leaf
  • salt and pepper to your desired levels
  • Optional: 1 cup of heavy cream (can substitute with 1 cup of milk mixed with 1 TBSP corn starch)
  • Optional: sourdough bread to serve and dip

Method:

  1. In a large pot, melt 1 TSP of oil and cook poultry meat on medium heat. Turn halfway through cooking time so both sides brown evenly. When internal temperature reaches 165 F (74 C) in the thickest part of the meat, remove from heat, cut into desired bite-sized pieces and set aside.
  2. Dice onion and garlic, add another 1 TSP of oil to the pot and set to medium heat. Add onions first, stir occasionally and cook until slightly translucent, then add garlic, stir and cook for another few minutes.
  3. Leave on medium heat and add the chicken broth.
  4. Peel and cut potatoes, carrots, and other vegetables into desired size (bite sized cubes of about 1/2 inch (1.5cm) thick work well)
  5. When the broth is at a boil, add vegetables, rosemary, thyme, bay leaf, salt and pepper. Partially cover pot and boil until vegetables are soft enough for a fork to poke through all the way.
  6. Optional step: reduce heat to low and add cream or cream substitute and mix until fully incorporated
  7. Optional step: Serve alongside a slice or two of sourdough bread (I recommend spreading some butter on it before you dip)
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OC First and Last Line

Rules: post the first line of dialogue and the last/most recent line of dialogue for your OCs!

Cassius

First: “What do you want?”

Last: “Where is he?”

Eve

First: “I’m Eve, I was at the welcoming thing with everyone else. Apparently I’m the kid of Hecate, but I don’t fully buy it. But, it’s better than living with my brother and his stupid girlfriend and his screaming baby. I hate that kid. All she does is scream and scream and scream. So yeah this place is so much better. So why did you not have a roommate?”

Last: “Celia!”

Tagging @mrbexwrites

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cowboybrunch

friday kiss tag!

hopping on @the-golden-comet's tag. happy friday everyone!!!

a first kiss, a memory! from chapter 5 of botrd (Rosalie POV)

Right outside the counselor's office. It must've been a few weeks after my fifteenth birthday. He had a black eye from fighting with some older boys and wouldn't tell me why. "Don't be mad at me," he said. "Stop doing mad things." He frowned so slightly that nobody else would've noticed. "Keep me in temper." I poked his chest. "Trying to sway me with Shakespeare?" "Is it working?" "Hm. A little." He took my face in his hands and lowered his lips to mine, gentle despite his bruised knuckles. It was chaste, over as soon as it started. When he pulled away, he was shaking so hard that I threw my head back and laughed until he joined in. I didn't have a name for the flood in my chest. I didn't know anything except that I wanted him to kiss me again.

tagging the taglist + an open tag <3 got a smooch to share?

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cowboybrunch

im resisting the urge to just infodump about Theodore's birth and death and rebirth so. here's an excerpt instead:

She's usually short-tempered, but it's odd for her to pick a fight so blatantly. Trouble with the rebellion perhaps, or an ill-fated Mortae orientation, or a slight eastward breeze… Anything could've sparked the irritation shimmering behind her eyes. I know better than to bite. A hook in my gills, fileted and grilled over a campfire. I've learned a thousand lessons in this room— No, I've learned the same lesson a thousand times. "When I placed you in that woman's womb, I didn't expect you to grow so attached. The hands that caught you when you entered this world were not mine, but do you think I wasn't watching?" Errant energy surges in my chest, turning the air in my lungs to fire, then smoke. "When you moved through the market, swiping rolls and meat, who darkened the shadows around you? Who spun the wind at your back? Who softened your footsteps?" My mouth moves before I can swallow the words. "You let me die." She slams her fist on the desk. The ashtray clatters against the wood. "I gave you eternity. Do not tempt me to take it away."
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Thanks for the tag, @cljordan-imperium! And sorry it's taken me half a lifetime to get to it :) I'll do this for Antonio from the Invisible GIrl!

rules: go search "name + core" on pinterest, post the first six photos, and tag people!!

This is all very interesting. The chess and the Atlas statue and the globe...all very in character for him! The other three, less so, but they still kinda fit. Very intriguing!

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Proud of Tag

Thanks for tagging me, @oh-no-another-idea! :D

Rules: Post a snippet you’ve written that you’re pleased by/proud of and tag some friends. Here's an excerpt from Mine Eyes Dazzle:

After the weeks of uncertainty and conflicting theories associated with one case, Zhan was relieved to find this new case looked straightforward. Dr. Luo's findings were clear and to the point. "He's been dead at least twelve hours. Cause of death—" Here the doctor became very technical, before summarising with, "A fall that caused a fractured skull and internal bleeding." "The body was found beneath a flight of stairs," Zhan said. "That's simple enough. He was drunk?" The doctor said, "Yes," in a tone that warned Zhan the case wouldn't be as simple as he hoped. Dr. Luo frowned at his notes. "A fall down a flight of stairs would cause bruising all over the body. The state of this body looks like he fell out of a window: a sheer drop, with all of the injuries on one side. The left side, in this case. His left arm and several ribs are broken. His right side is uninjured." Zhan looked at him, then at the body covered by a sheet. He got up and climbed the stairs. When he was half-way up he stopped. He looked down at the stairs and imagined falling down them. Then he looked over the banister and imagined falling straight down. "It would depend on how he fell," he said. "If he tripped and went headlong down the stairs, he might not have hit enough of them to be bruised." "Possibly not," the doctor agreed. He still didn't sound convinced. "It's odd that there are no bruises on his hands at all. When someone falls down the stairs — no matter how many stairs they land on — they put their hands out to save themselves." "Do you think he was murdered?" Zhan asked him bluntly. "No, but I'm not convinced he fell down the stairs."

Tagging @memento-morri-writes, @aziz-reads, @winterandwords, and anyone else who wants to do this! :D

Adding Dazzle's taglist and the general Case-files taglist:

@mrbexwrites (Let me know if you want to be added/removed!)

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posted some Rosalie and Andrew yesterday, let's dive into Rosalie and Emily

childhood besties turned polar opposites

Andrew knows her best, but Emily was here first

The swell and dip of her voice fills the air like a familiar song on a new playlist. I can almost pretend that we’re eight years old again, waiting for my dad to drive us to softball practice. We’ll sit in the outfield and pull up grass. A ladybug will crawl on her thigh, and she’ll scream until I nudge it to crawl onto my finger. It’ll fly away. We’ll watch it go. “Em,” I say, interrupting her prattling. She looks up, lashes fluttering around ice-blue eyes. “Did you win?” “Hm?” “Homecoming queen. I didn’t hear the announcement.” “Oh.” She fusses with the worn hem of her shirt. “Yeah. I did.”
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Character Voice tag

Tagged by @somethingclevermahogony whose post is here, thanks for the tag!

Characters from 'To Catch the Sea':

Adam:  “My dad wanted to be a dragon too, but he never showed signs of the spark. All I heard growing up was how I would become one. They never said I had to, it’s not something you can force, but that was what they meant. They were trying to, like, manifest it or something. They wanted it so badly that I accepted it had to happen to me."

Shay: “I don’t know a lot about, you know…all that stuff.” He gave a dismissive wave of his hand. “But if you want to talk more about it, I could try and listen. I’m a good listener. So I’ve been told.”

Caleb: "She called to remind you to come over tomorrow. And that your dad’s ankle’s all healed up and he needs help with the shed, or the bed, I don’t remember. I wasn’t really listening.”

Sara: “Well, if I get it right, I think Della might move me up to helping with the students in the infirmary.” She clutched her notebook to her chest with a grin. “That’s a step closer to Aedridge, when I finish my studies.”

Olena: “You’re not like me. Dragons are supposed to be warriors. So it’s natural to want to fight your way out of every corner, to bite and kick and scratch, or even to run, if fighting isn’t the way. But what if running won’t save you, either? What then?”

Tagging @mrbexwrites, @celestialbunnistories, @vesper-roux and an open tag for anyone else who's interested!

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