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drchenquill

Big ol' tag game bundle~

@willtheweaver for the tags!

Since this is a mix of "seven sentence" + "writing share" + "Wip Wednesday", I've taken the liberty to give you a bit more than usual from "Him and Me - Bound by Fate". Enjoy~

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I sit behind my desk and watch the last child leave my class after they have all said their sweet goodbyes. A deep sigh escapes my lips as I tilt my head back and allow myself to close my eyes for a moment. I need to calm down again, I need to learn to just swallow the things that happen so they don't send me into a complete panic every time.

It wasn't an attack with Midas, he was just asking a question.

He interferes so that he can then put him out of the picture.

Maybe he's just curious.

Curious about the best way to slit his throat.

He knows Kilian has been hiding it from me, so he probably wants to know if his friend has finally come out into the open.

It's all a conspiracy. They want to drive him into a corner.

My head tilts forward again. There's no point in all this. It would be best if I allowed myself to forget it and put it behind me.

I pull myself to my feet, gather everything together and step out. In the corridor, I can hear the laughter and chatter of the children in the other classes.

How nice it is to be a child, untouched by the problems of the world.

He was a child too and the world was merciless to him.

Unfortunately, that's true, but it was my own fault. If I hadn't brought my parents to their deaths, none of this would have happened. I would have been loved like those children, I would have gone to school without any problems, I could have had friends. But I have myself to blame, so I grit my teeth and keep going.

My lesson is over, so I step out of school and breathe in the fresh breeze that tickles my skin. The sun is shining, the sky is blue, the birds are chirping. Even Kilian, who is leaning against one of the walls, is smiling happily.

Kilian.

My heart is racing and I almost choke on my spit. What the hell is he doing here? Alone at that? He's not supposed to be out alone, what if Dr. Steffens or his Fera sees him?

He catches sight of me and his smile widens.

I ignore my heated cheeks and pounding heart and take quick steps towards him. Despite the sun, he's wearing a dark hoodie with his hands tucked into his pockets. His jeans fit tightly on his well-toned legs.

I swallow hard and stand in front of him with a furrowed brow. He pulls a hand out of his pocket and places it on my lower back. A shudder runs through my body, but I ignore it.

I shouldn't like it, his tenderness shouldn't send warmth through me. I want to move away from him, but my body won't listen to me. So instead of moving away, I whisper accusingly, “What are you doing here?”

He looks confused, but whispers as he says, “Picking you up. What else?”

“You're technically a panther in a human body, since Steffens can't know you've regained your humanity. You can't just walk around the city!”

I surprise myself with the stern tone I've taken, just as I've surprised Kilian with it. He blinks slightly, but quickly plasters a smile on his lips.

“I'm sorry, this is the first and last time I'll do something like this. I promise.”

He's not angry that I snapped at him? He even apologizes? He lightly pushes my frozen body and leads me towards the street. “Come on, I promised you a trip.”

I wonder if I've misheard and look up at him. A trip? Promised? Him to me? Have I missed something? Sometimes I feel like I've landed in the wrong movie.

“You look confused, Leon.”

“I am.”

He laughs.

“When did you promise me a trip?” I ask skeptically, trying not to listen to my dark thoughts of a planned murder.

Kilian doesn't think twice and says, “Right now.”

His hand, which has been resting on my back, creeps up to mine to wrap around it. I feel my hand tense slightly, but Kilian doesn't seem to give it a second thought and starts stroking the back of it with his thumb. I suppress the creeping feeling that I don't want to name and take a deep breath.

Apparently we're going on a trip.

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Tagging with no pressure @the-golden-comet , @inseasofgreen , @novel-nook-blog , and open tag~

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✍🏼 WIP Wednesday

Thanks to @aalinaaaaaa and @kaylinalexanderbooks for the tags!

📝 Share some recent lines from your WIP

I can't believe I'm doing one of these on the right day, but here we are. Lines are from Name From Nowhere...

Rafe goes to touch my arm, to slow me down maybe, to make it easier to talk, but I grab his wrist and twist it away from me before I have a chance to think about what I’m doing. I’m already two steps back with my arms crossed over my chest when he realises what’s happening. “Shit, I’m sorry,” he says. “You OK?” “No. Yeah. I…” “I get it. Not great with the physical contact?” “No. And it’s not you. It’s anyone. It’s me. I don’t want to talk about it.”

Tagging @talesfromaurea, @talesofsorrowandofruin, @theeccentricraven and @the-scaredy-crow if you'd like to do it, with an open tag for anyone else who wants to share some lines 🩷

Reblogs, replies etc on my tag posts are always welcome, but if you're doing this tag yourself, please make your own post instead of using mine to start a reblog chain.

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WIP Wednesday
Rules: post something about your WIP on a Wednesday!

+ ANYONE ELSE

Didn't really have anything to share so thought I'd do something new.

Started to learn how to do ambigrams (same word upside down) with no artistic talent and unstable hands! But I thought I'd practice on my OCs' names. So here's some TSP folks. Some of these are absolutely hideous but some of them are pretty cool. Then there's CJ in a different category of his own.

Under the cut cause honestly slightly embarrassed but again I'M NEW TO THIS AND HAVE BAD HANDS AND NO ART SKILLS be kind

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aalinaaaaaa
WIP Wednesday

Thanks to @jev-urisk for the tag!

As an aside, today's a phenomenal day to be Wednesday, I got to the bit I was looking forward to 😆 (Shockingly, it's only Chapter Two!)

Gasps erupted overhead, as she emerged into the temple’s atrium. Some people stood from their pews, reacting, gesturing, her gaze turning to the altar. There, a girl in a flowing orange gown stood with the Chalice in hand, taking a step back from yet another meshai. The ground reverberated with her heartbeat, each beat stronger than the last. Eshani took a few steps forward. White, elongated bones broke through stained glass. A section rained down from the top corner, followed by another, where a murder of crows bled in and settled on the beams. The meshai turned to face it, reciting words and gestures. Noise from the crowd got louder, some of the front seated guests leaving. Eshani had the girl in her sights, rushing towards her. A girl in a purple dress pipped her, catching the other and teleporting away. “Cheyoria, no!” She swivelled her head, jaw dropping as she met the gaze of her former flame. The pair stood paralysed, staring into each other’s eyes with nary a word between them. “I- How?” The glass stopped raining. The arches of the temple echoed with caws, clashing with the chatter of the ground. Bones fell to the floor, some collapsing near the altar. The meshaika and acolytes emerged from downstairs, making her heart race. They coalesced into a group, where one of them narrowly avoided a white dropping from above. “What’s going on?” Her love looked up to her, his polar eyes wide and pleading for an answer. “Get down.” She clicked her fingers as the central doors burst open, sending all the flames out bar the torch behind the altar. A figure with straight crimson hair strode down the aisle, a cloak of crow feathers draped from her shoulders. Eshani held her breath as the crowd’s chatter wavered and wondered. “Explain the meaning of this, who are you?” The lead meshai stepped forward, stopped only by Eshani putting an arm in front of him. “Relax, I’ll handle this.” The other lady approached, standing slightly to the left. “What happened?” She whispered the events of the past while, putting extra emphasis on the actions of the meshaika. Behind her, the other group gasped as some of the bones started twitching and clicking back together. “Stop your tricks at once!” She moved a step in front of her, wincing at the meshai’s shot of magic. “This is not of our doing.” She said, while her fellow High Councillor moved to a central position at the altar, facing the crowd. The skeleton continued reassembling itself. “To the people gathered here tonight,” Claudia said, causing the crowd to hush. A raven perched on her shoulder. “I do not anticipate that any of you expected the events that transpired. Some of you may be worried, scared, shocked. I do not blame you, for you have been left in the dark regarding the matter.”
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WIP Wednesday/Writing Share
WIP Wednesday Rules: post something (anything!) about your WIP on a Wednesday
Writing Share Rules: share some writing!

Since I just posted an intro post for IWAJAD, why not post something about it?

I wrote an early draft in high school, so here's the opening! I'll refine it later....

“And the next award will be for the most influential person in our school,” said Ms. Dakota from the top of the stage. I was in the front row seat, waiting in anticipation. Ms. Dakota opened the envelope, pulling out a card. “Kyla Tran!” I gasped as the room applauded around me. I heard the football team cheering, the artists hollering. Noemi beside me patted me on the back, encouraging me to my feet. On the stage, Ms. Dakota gave me a hug. “We are all so happy that you’re at our school, Kyla. Whatever would we do without you?” “I don’t know, Ms. Dakota,” I said. “Well, we’ve decided to give you all of these awards!” Ms. Dakota gestured behind her, and a man with long, dark hair in all black pulled out a wagon stacked high with awards. “Wow,” I said. “Thank you, Keanu Reeves.” Keanu smiled at me and handed me one of the awards. I gazed out into the audience. There had to be a few hundred people here. “Thank you. Thank you everyone. I’m so glad to be your most influential person. I’ve had the speech prepared, but I am so overwhelmed, that I couldn’t speak. The lights were now off. No, my eyes were just closed. The stage was soft. Wait, I was lying down. The audience was still there. I felt them. I wanted to speak. Thank them for the award. Then I realized my head was on a pillow. The audience wasn't there. I didn’t have an award in my hand. What was happening? Wait, didn’t--hold on, Keanu Reeves was there. I was now aware that I was awake, but I refused to open my eyes. Maybe I could finish the dream so I could finish my acceptance speech. My alarm wasn't going off. Great. I’d woken up before my alarm. I promise that you'll never find another like me…. I know that I’m a handful, baby, uh…. Oh, there it is. I reached for my phone, blindly swiping the alarm left to stop the Taylor Swift song. It was Friday. No, wait, Thursday. Right? Wait, what happened yesterday? I stayed after school for volleyball. Yes, that happens on Wednesdays. Not Thursdays. Therefore, because that was yesterday, that means it was Thursday. Unless it was Tuesday or Saturday. Practices were three times a week. Was it only Tuesday? Was I waking up this early on a Saturday? No, yesterday was Thursday. No, wait, today was Thursday. Yes.

I feel like when I start the next draft I'll have a similar opening. Not exactly, but similar. It's gonna be in present tense though.

+ ANYONE ELSE

IWAJAD tag list (ask to be +/-): @thepeculiarbird @mrbexwrites @drchenquill

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WIP Wednesday

Thanks to @jev-urisk for the tag!

This Wednesday's snippet is coming from an updated part of one of Obsidian Sapphires' early chapters. Now featuring new characters, yay!

“I see you’re still here.” She went up to him, beckoning him to stand. He shook his head, eyes narrowed and simmering. “Like I’d stand for you. You’re going to burn me again, aren’t you?” “Hmm, viable.” She shrugged in non-disagreement. “But don’t you want to get out of here? I doubt festering at the foot of a Morilesian temple is at the top of your life goals, is it?” The man grumbled beneath his breath, in a language she couldn’t understand. His silk robes covered him from head to toe, with hints of a rune on the underside of his right wrist, flashing with every motion over his wounds. “Where is the Chalice going? Time’s of the essence here.” “Bah, it shouldn’t be in the hands of you bastards, anyway. It’s Helinda’s property.” She scoffed. “Well said ‘Helindian property’ can heal your wounds far better than your sleeve if you help me get it back. Do we have a deal?” Voices filled the chambers, the ground vibrations stronger with every second. “Last chance.” She put out her hand, clasping his right forearm in earnest. “North Arobyre, the Majkra Ljkoren.” Her fellow High Councillors acquainted with the shadows.

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First line/ WIP Wednesday/excerpt

Here is the first line I worked on today. From Snow on the Pines:

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“I should warn you, the waters of the lake can be unpredictable at the best of times. At this time of year, storms, waves, and ice flows will make the crossing treacherous. Don’t let your guard down one bit. If the boat sinks, there is almost zero chance that anyone will find your bodies.”

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aalinaaaaaa
WIP (not-) Wednesday

Tagged by @jev-urisk ! :D

Down below is part of a longer piece I've been working on (more specifically, the part that was written on Wednesday, lol)

“I understand.” Another nail to her heart. “Did your nephew get healed, in the end?” “The only good thing out of this, it seems. He recovered in full by morning.” He leaned on the railing, turning away. The moonlight gave a sheen to his hair. “It should’ve been my cost to bear. And now she’s gone.” His words and the strain in her calves beckoned her to stand, though she refrained. “If you did, you wouldn’t be here, you’d be trapped.” She got the full brunt of the glare from his light brown eyes, simmering. “That’s precisely the point, I’d be in this position, not you. Gods, I wish you didn’t interfere.” “And what then? Getting drugged and bound for your nephew’s sake? Say it to my face.” Eshani rose her face closer, meeting his gaze as she loomed over him by a slight. “Say it to my face that you loved her, and I’ll leave.”

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✨🧞‍♂️WIP Wednesday Tag 🧞‍♂️✨

It’s that time again! Thank you for @justabigoldnerd and @pippinoftheshire for tagging me here and here for this! 💖✨

Time to share my progress on YWIMC. As we near the end, the excerpts will get sweeter than baklava 🧞‍♂️💖

Shkran ‘lak.” Noah hummed happily against his djinni’s chest.
'Uhibuk (أحبك)”
“Hm?” Noah tilted his head quizzically.
‘Uhibuk. I love you.” Ali repeated in soft adoration.
“—!!” Noah’s heart skipped against Ali’s palm as Cauldwell felt the fingers curl gently in response. Then, enthusiastically, Noah repeated back: “‘Uhibuk!!
A gentle laugh vibrated in Ali’s chest. “You got it in one.”
“I love you too, Ali….!” Noah hugged his lover’s arms tightly over his torso, blushing furiously. “I-I think you’ve kept me waiting long enough.”
“I’m sorry about that, Noah. I really am.” Ali took a deep, steadying breath. “But I won’t stop saying it now, and I don’t want you to stop saying it either.”

I’m going to leave this as a +open tag, and since this is a writing share I’ll also gently alert my tag list ✨

👇✨Tag list for writing snippets below. DM me if you’d like to be added 👇✨

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Writing Share/WIP Wednesday Tag

Thank you @kaylinalexanderbooks for the tag and @the-golden-comet for the tag!! I'm using this for my Wednesday posting schedule. Two birds, one stone, all of that.

Rules: share some writing!

I recently redid Rage and 703's first interaction and figured I'd post that! I think I've posted some snippets from it before, but this is the "full" scene, or at least until a scene change. Or I decide to rewrite it again...

Anyway! Hovering at about 1k, so a little long, but most of my posts are haha! Enjoy :D

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Last line tag

Thanks to @indecentpause and @ashfordlabs for the tags! I'm also sneaking a WIP Wednesday tag from @kaylinalexanderbooks in here too because I'm trying to stop doing day-specific tags on the wrong day 😆

This is a last editing line from Spin Cylinder (Brett's POV)...

I stretch, not because I really need to, but because I want to feel the fabric of my clothes against the cuts on my back.

Tagging @talesfromaurea, @talesofsorrowandofruin and @theeccentricraven if you'd like to do it, with an open tag for anyone else who wants to share a last line 💙

Reblogs, replies etc on my tag posts are always welcome, but if you're doing this tag yourself, please make your own post instead of using mine to start a reblog chain.

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elsie-writes

WIP "Wednesday"

Thanks so much for the tags @whatwewrotepodcast and @kaylinalexanderbooks!

Rules: Post something about your WIP!

In honor of it officially being Pride Month, I'm going to share my characters gender identities and sexualities as a treat :)

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Project R.S:

Rousseau: Male (He/Him) - Aromantic & Asexual

Birdie: Unlabeled (She/They) - Polysexual

Fury: Transgender Female (She/Her) - Pansexual

Cutthroat: Transgender Male (He/Him) - Bisexual

Mickie: Intersex Genderfluid (They/He/She) - Pansexual

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Project H.A:

Haven: Female (She/Her) - Pansexual

Bex: Female (She/Her) - Bisexual

Bo: Female (She/Her) - Somewhere on the aromantic spectrum & Asexual

Rosheen: Female (She/Her) - Lesbian

Kai: Male (He/Him) - Bisexual

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And a few of the Paragons from Project H.A as a bonus round!

Odette: Female (She/Her) - Aromantic & Asexual

Zalaph (LITERALLY directly from the doc): Um... no thank you?/Concept (He/It/They) - Hella Gay

Maddox: Transgender Male (He/Him) - Biromantic & Asexual

Charr: Demigirl (She/They) - Queer

Apricity: Female (She/Her) - Unknown

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This was really fun, happy pride everybody!

I feel like I've done about four of these Wednesday ones this week, so I'm just gonna leave it as an open tag for anyone who wants it <3

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WIP “Wednesday”
Rules: post something about your WIP!

Was gonna wait for Wednesday but I am impatient.

Decided it would be fun if I compared the Going Into the Portal scene from each Draft of TSP so far!

All of these are in Lexi's POV (or Alexia, before she got her nickname)

Draft One (2013):

The beautiful blanket of May flowers stretched out all the way… to my house. <3 I sighed. Nothing was better than… “AAAHHH!!!” I whirled around. Aurora had disappeared! I moved the grass where she had been standing. A rock. A metal rock? I stood up, confused. I put my bag down, next to Aurora’s (which she probably dropped) and felt the rock with my hand. “AAAHHH!!!” I screamed. EVERYTHING WENT BLACK

Draft Two (2014):

I stared in the place that I was pretty sure Aurora was standing. I stared at the backpack. I was pretty sure that it was hers. I looked at the name plate. Yup. Her handwriting. Aurora Austin Where was my friend?!?!?! I looked all around. Nothing. The only place I hadn’t looked was the ground. Why would she be in the ground? I have no idea. But it’s worth a try. I moved the grass. The only thing I saw was a rock. As I looked closer, the rock seemed to be metal. I crawled a little closer. It still looked metal. I reached out to touch it when…. “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” I was falling through nothingness. All I saw was a bunch of rainbows swirling around me. I kept falling and screaming. Then everything went black.

Draft Three (2015-16 I don't remember):

I stared at the spot where Aurora was standing. The rock was still there, and a few feet away was her backpack, but Aurora herself was nowhere to be found. I set down my backpack and violin and crept forward. I looked at the rock. It looked metal. I got out my metal detector just to check. Yup! Definitely metal. Then I thought of a crazy thought. What if the rock was a portal? I knew it was impossible, but it was the only explanation to why Aurora disappeared. If it was a portal, what was on the other end? Air? No air? Well, whatever was behind it, I knew I had to go. Aurora was in danger. Possibly. Actually, I don’t know. It might be Band Land over there with all the boys you can crush on. I slowly crawled away from the portal and shuddered at that thought. Band Land would be anyone who wasn’t in band’s nightmare. Band is just noise to me, so Band Land must be torture. I shook the thought away. That was a stupid thought. Maybe this was a dream. Well, usually in dreams you don’t think they are dreams, but I actually did have a dream inside a dream, and I knew I was dreaming then, but in the dream, the edges around my vision were a little foggy, and I could see perfectly fine here. Well, except for the fact I wear glasses. Without them, I can’t see worth crap. I crawled back to the rock. Last year, we learned metals rusted after rain. And it was super rainy this year. So, why was it shiny? This was frying my pour brain. Despite whatever was behind there, there was still a chance Aurora could be in trouble. Without thinking, I reached out my hand and touched the rock.

Draft Four (2017* probably edited a bit though):

I waited for Ash to answer, but she was silent. “Ash?” I asked, making sure she was okay. I turned around, about to say something based on her reaction, but she wasn’t there. “Ash?” I said, standing up. I looked around in all directions, but there was no sign of Ash. “Ash!?” I said louder. Still no response. “ASHLEY!” No answer. I fell on the soft, green grass and tried to hold back the tears, as I often did if I were stressed and felt lost, not a clue what to do. I had no idea what was happening, and frankly, wasn't even sure it was happening. I fell on my back to contemplate what happened when I hit something hard with my head. I cried out in pain, and shot up, rubbing the back of my neck. I turned to see what I hit, and jumped when I saw millions of colors shoot up from the ground and wrap around me. I looked around and watched the endless field disappear around me. I must’ve hit my head hard. I looked down at the ground and watched as the colors started to erase the grass around me. “Oh, sh—” The ground disappeared completely and I fell through a tunnel of millions of colors. I never knew there were so many in the world. I would’ve been in awe if it weren’t for the fact that I was falling to my death. I ended up spinning around somehow, which caused me to fall headfirst down the tunnel. At the end, I saw a bright white light. Was it Heaven? Was I dead? The light became bigger and brighter and whiter as I fell closer, and closer, and closer. Soon I landed in the light, and I felt it enclose around me, sucking me up in its brightness. I felt content, safe, and warm in the light. But then I felt a cold wind at my feet. I felt cold air-like ropes tie themselves around my ankles. I was suddenly yanked down. Then everything went black.

Draft Five (2021):

“What the—” “Ash?” I asked at her sudden exclamation. “You okay?” I turned to make sure she was but jumped when she wasn’t there. Just her backpack. “Ash?” I said, standing abruptly. I looked around in all directions. “Ash?!” I said louder. No response. I wrung my hands through my hair, my eyes burning, as they did when stressed. I had no idea what was happening, and frankly, if whatever was happening even was happening. I had to be dreaming. This didn’t make any sense otherwise. I tried to sit on the grass to contemplate everything when I hit something hard. I cried out in pain and shot up, rubbing the now-sore spot—feeling awkward even though no one was around. I turned to see what I hit and jumped when I saw millions of colors shoot up from the ground. I looked around and watched the endless field disappear from view. I must’ve hit my head on the concrete. Yes, that made sense. A sudden panic of long-term injury caused me to reach up to touch my head. I didn’t feel any sign of injury, but that didn’t mean anything. Maybe I was hallucinating the lack of injury. My breath quickened as the colors around me grew bigger and more vibrant. I looked down at the ground and watched as the colors erased the grass. “Oh, shit!” The ground disappeared and I fell through a tunnel of millions of colors I never knew existed. Is this what it’s like to have more photoreceptors? Is this how shrimp see? I would’ve been in awe if I wasn't falling to my death. The air whipped around me—my braids disconnected where I’d tied them in the back, causing my looser hair to partially obstruct my vision. A bright light forced my eyes shut, the inside of my eyelids red. I felt warm and safe around it, but it was too bright for my taste. Without warning, I hit the ground on my feet, stumbled, and fell on grass again.

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Supernova Initiative - WIP Intro/WIP Someday Tag

I wasn't tagged for this recently, but I wanted to make a WIP Intro/WIP Someday post for this story in the style of my previous post for Song of Thorns (here). So here we go😅! Feel free to make your own version of this Tag for one of your WIPs, if you'd like!

By the way, if you like this, please reblog, it helps a lot 💕 And tell me if you'd like to be added to any future taglists of this WIP!

Rules: Pick a WIP. Post something about it. On a Wednesday. Or whenever! It can be literally anything! (:

WIP INTRO - Supernova Initiative

Title: Supernova Initiative

Genre: Science Fiction/Space Opera/Adventure & Mystery/Whump

Tags: #wip supernova initiative #supernova initiative

Synopsis/What Is It About?

Jack Tithus, a young and charming intergalactic thief, along with his crew - Vesper Foxx, a feared cyborg assassin; Cassiopeia Tithus, his younger sister who is also a genius engineer; Aleks Keldora, a master in the art of temporary identity theft; and Artemis Zreeth, their edgy new recruit - are the most wanted criminals in this quadrant of the galaxy. Never once caught, the team defies their galaxy's oppressive government by using their combined talents to steal from the government as their own act of rebellion.

However, their luck takes an unexpected turn for the worst when they find themselves set up and arrested after a botched heist. Taken to the most secure facility in the whole Junction, the group expects nothing but problems in the coming future - instead, they are offered a strange deal: if they agree to work for the Junction and retrieve some highly classified files that were lost in a hostile planetary system, they will be spared from execution. With few other options, the group begrudgingly accepts to carry out this heist for the government they spent their lives trying to undermine.

Meanwhile, Jack finds himself trapped in a horrifying web of unethical experiments and illegal bioengineering when, while still having to carry out the heist along with his crew, he is secretly forced to become a test subject to the fearsome Director, head of the Junction's division of sciences, unbeknownst to his crew.

The team will need to count on the help of old allies-turned-rivals such as the cold-blooded mercenary and sniper Deimos Soll, their former crewmate, and the secret agent assigned to oversee their mission, an uptight and by-the-book young man called Noctus - if they wish to complete the most dangerous heist of their lives, and get their freedoms back.

Tropes and Nice Stuff! (Or, a.k.a. What you can expect in this book!)

  • Found Family/Team as Family!
  • Space adventure, exploration of unique, uncanny, beautiful, and outlandish alien planets, all the good science fiction stuff!
  • Robots, cyborgs, and sarcastically friendly AI!
  • A terrifyingly strict aspiring utopian regime that promises progress and freedom but is actually an unethical dystopia in disguise, with many bloodied skeletons in the closet, if you will.
  • Intergalactic politics, multiple alien cultures, and a bubbling interplanetary conflict about to explode between vastly different civilizations, each seeking either revenge or power.
  • Sibling bonds! A lot of this story centers around the siblings Jack and Cassiopeia Tithus, and the struggles they go through to keep each other safe and live another day, among some other notable siblings throughout the book.
  • Laboratory whump - A LOT OF IT. Also expect a crazy, unethical scientist/politician as a villain who is willing to do absolutely horrid things in the name of progress, even if it means human experimentation.
  • A suspicious, morally grey antihero with a reputation for being a cold-blooded killer, whom you'd expect is going to betray the group sooner or later, but is actually one of their most loyal allies and HAS A REDEMPTION ARC aaaaaa
  • Heists! Heists! Heists! And all the good stuff that comes along with this trope!
  • An edgy rogue-type character who is super impulsive and does not always make the best decisions, who only recently joined the group but would defend them with his life.
  • Traumatized - and hot - cyborg assassin lady on the path to have revenge on the people who destroyed her life in the past, and who is going to get said revenge in ✨style✨
  • A conformist secret agent who has always been "the perfect soldier" and follows rules like his life depends on it has an existential crisis and learns that his government has lied to him
  • A subplot that follows a young cadet from the Junction's Void Program, who discovers a dark secret about their government and starts investigating, but who needs to escape (and ends up meeting the MCs) after the government makes an attempt on his life + his war hero (adoptive) older brother who is a fighter pilot and really just needs a break and was tasked by their parents with trying to keep Pax from getting into even more trouble, but fails successfully.
  • Outcasts and society's "rejects" decide to make a better future together and it is great
  • Angst, team dynamics, and a lot of action-packed fight scenes!
  • And more! ✨

Meet The Main Cast! (The good guys)

Jack Tithus

A charming and rebellious intergalactic thief, Jack always sought a better life for himself and his younger sister, Cassiopeia, his only family - and he finally got his chance many years ago by joining a famous space pirate crew and leaving the dusty mining settlement moon he grew up in behind. After that, he took on a solo career - along with his sister and a few friends they had made along the way - and became the most wanted thief in the galaxy. He only steals from the government and seeks to help people who are oppressed or neglected by the system. He has a kind heart and a free spirit, and despite being a thief has a stronger moral compass than most, believing in breaking the rules to do what is truly right.

Cassiopeia Tithus

Cassiopeia - or Cassie, as she is usually called - is a brilliant robot engineer and inventor, able to build even the most complex machines from little more than scraps. She built her first robot when she was a child and has had a passion for mechanics ever since. A part of her older brother's outlaw team, Cassie uses her tech to aid in the heists and allow them to be mostly undetected. Most times. A lively young girl with a fiery personality, Cassiopeia has a lot of passion for what she does and is the glue that keeps their little team of misfits together.

Aleks Keldora

Raised by his two mothers on a struggling planet on the edge of the system, Aleks always wanted to help his family financially and give his mothers the life they deserved. However, struggling with self-esteem issues and often feeling discarded by society, Aleks knew what it meant to be invisible in the eyes of the world around him - with his family being the only ones who ever saw him for who he was. Tired of feeling left out by the world, and wanting to help his mothers - whose business was about to go bankrupt - Aleks decided to take a stand after winning a high-tech device in an underworld completion, a mask that allowed him to shapeshift into anyone he'd like. With the help of this mask and his other talents, Aleks completed his first heist in secret and was able to use the funds to help keep his family's business afloat, though they never knew the truth about how he got the money. After that, finally able to use his feeling of being invisible to his advantage, Aleks became more and more bold, eventually leaving his home planet in search of better heists to be able to continue to support his family.

Vesper Foxx

Traumatized by the day her home planet was raided by a ruthless group of mercenaries - who were hired by the neighboring galaxy's government to establish a Junction colony in Khosmonian territory - Vesper was kidnapped by the soldiers along with her oldest brother, Atheris, after their mother was killed in the raids. After witnessing him be tortured and killed, which scarred for life, Vesper was able to flee in an escape pod, being reunited with her little sister, Lysia, and their cousin, Deya, with whom she left their destroyed homeland behind. Despite settling down in another planetary system with the family she had left, the girl was never able to let go of the past, yearning for justice and revenge. Eventually, she left behind her sister and her cousin to pursue the deaths of the mercenaries who destroyed her life, using cyborg implants and upgrades to turn herself into the deadliest assassin in either galaxy.

Artemis Zreeth

The son of a renowned bounty hunter, Artemis never thought he would ever join their galaxy's criminal underworld, but after his father was betrayed by the crew he trusted the most, Artemis was left to fend for himself. Feeling betrayed by the system he trusted and lacking a purpose in life, Artemis survived by doing some gigs as a mercenary and pirate, a gun for hire in the criminal underworld. After winning a race and accidentally meeting the main cast, Artemis joins the group thinking this would just be another job to pay the bills, but as they spend more and more time together, the teenager finds that this group of outcasts might be the closest thing he's had to a family in a long while.

Pax Stellaryn

A genius young cadet, on his way to becoming the youngest cadet to ever graduate from the Junction's Void Program, Pax always wanted to make his beloved adoptive family proud, feeling oftentimes like a fish out of the water. After discovering a terrifying government intrigue by accident, Pax finds a chance to prove that he too can be a hero, and sets off to investigate more about this and seek a way to prevent the Junction's wretched plan from coming to fruition, after realizing his life too is in danger. However, he may have overestimated his ability to get out of this mess alone.

Deimos Soll

A cold-blooded and practical sniper, Deimos was Jack and Cassie's childhood best friend and their first crewmate. The trio split ways years ago due to conflicting beliefs and a few bad misunderstandings and ended up becoming rivals and competition when it comes to stealing from the Junction. Years later, however, after a harrowing encounter with a cruel and sadistic woman who sought to enslave him in order to force him to join her army, Deimos ends up fleeing to the only people he ever trusted - which unfortunately means having to confront his past and face Jack and Cassie again, who is very confused about his return to the crew - while being hunted down by the insane general he seeks to escape from.

Noctus

Though his full name is classified and unknown to the cast, his reputation precedes him. He is the single most successful special forces secret agent currently in the employ of the Junction - he has never failed a mission, never missed a target. And he always follows orders, always obeys the rules. However, is everything about him what it seems? A forgotten and suppressed part of his memory may prove that the system he fought so dearly to uphold may have actually made him into their perfect living weapon, and there may be many other lies yet to be uncovered

Ethean Mirannir

Pax's adoptive older brother, Ethean is a fighter pilot who has made a name for himself as a war hero and has always been the perfect soldier. Unexpectedly, he finds himself having to choose between his duty to the government and keeping his family safe when Pax discovers a secret that even he had no idea existed.

A few Plot Points, chaotically described🙃 (A.k.a - Badly Summarized WIP Tag but different)

  • Celebrating a successful heist on a space diner with the homies
  • I don't know why but I have a feeling this is going suspiciously well for our standards... Are we being set up? Hmm. Nah, I must be thinking too much into it-
  • Yep. Yes, we were being set up.
  • 🎶Hell to the no, to the no, no, no🎶 WHAT IN HE DYSTOPIAN BULLCRAP EVEN IS THIS PLACE?
  • "Making shady deals with psycho government officers and bargaining for our freedom - with a bonus of Trauma✨"
  • THIS JUST-IN: 20-something agent totally done with everything must babysit this group of reckless space pirates that refuse to obey the rules
  • Cue the most uncomfy space travel in the whole galaxy~
  • "Hey guys, so yeah, this wasn't my plan either -" Promptly passes out, and everyone has more questions than answers.
  • Preparing to steal important files lost✨IN THE MIDDLE OF NOWHERE✨ with a plan with came up with at 2AM with three bottles of energy drinks and a dash of improv
  • Operation "Let's Try Not To Die In Less than 20 Mins" begins and goes about as well as you'd expect
  • Losing communications with any backup we might have had and having a bit of group therapy because why not~
  • Things get Oh, so much worse, Special Edition - a.k.a - a not-so-nice crash landing on the worst possible planet ever
  • Let's improvise again Pt.2
  • Questionable problem-solving and emergency hot chocolate bottles
  • Cyborg Girl and Sniper Dude absolutely do not get along for a whole week and make it everyone else's problem
  • This is nice! Finally, something goes according to plan in this mess. I'm honestly surprised we got this far. Bravo to us!
  • (POV Shift) "Hi, yes, you're probably wondering how I even got into this mess. Let's start from the beginning."
  • This isn't a regular doctor's appointment, is it? What is that needle?! What are you doing -
  • Political drama, espionage, and manipulative teachers
  • And The Whump Begins
  • Well, well, well if it isn't the Consequences of my actions striking back at last. I probably should've mentioned this teeny tiny major problem sooner though. Yeah, my bad...
  • This is either the single most adorable little alien or the most concerningly ugly thing I've ever seen and now I'm confused
  • Cue existential crisis - "So no one was gonna tell me my whole life was a lie? Cool. Cool. Just checking... WTF"
  • HEIST! BADASSERY! BAD LIFE CHOICES!
  • Two tired older brothers try to keep their respective gremlin younger siblings from encouraging chaos and fail miserably
  • Insane Femme Fatale makes everyone hate her in less than 2 seconds and is so proud of it
  • Midnight Talks and Crispy Snacks
  • Things just got serious, Oh No.
  • How To Keep Two Rival Civilizations from Destroying Each Other 101 - We're still trying to figure it out
  • Hm. This plan wasn't half bad. Except it was. It was oh, so bad, OMG
  • To be Continued...

Playlist

  1. Antigravity - Runaground
  2. Superhero - Simon Curtis
  3. Die For You - Valorant
  4. Notorious - NEONI
  5. Fighter - The Score
  6. Glitter and Gold - Barns Courtney

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🌹 — WIP Wednesday/WIP Intro — 🌹

Art by me (@diabolical-blue)

Thanks for the tag @mysticstarlightduck! I have attempted to summarize this story and write bios for the characters scattered across several different posts and blogs, but I suppose it’s high time I just share one comprehensive, consolidated rundown of the whole project in one post. Reblogs are appreciated if any part of the story/characters/themes described below resonates with you. 💕

Sincere apologies for any double tags or if anyone tagged has already completed an intro post for each of their WIPs; I try to read and make mental notes of all the ones I come across, but I may have missed some. I do want to see everyone's WIP intro masterposts though, so I'm tagging a bunch to hopefully nudge people in that direction <3 If I didn't tag you but you still want to make a WIP intro post, please consider yourself tagged and make one anyway so I can see it!!

Rules: Pick a WIP. Post something about it. On a Wednesday. Or whenever!

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WIP Wednesday (or Whatever)

thank you for the tag @frostedlemonwriter !

here's a snippet where Maeve's thoughts aren't completely filtered ;)

I quietly follow Jace into what appears to be a small dining area lined with breakfast foods. Eggs, bacon, sausage, hash browns, and made-to-order waffles cover one counter and the other counter holds cereal, oatmeal, milk, and juice. I grab a single waffle and try not to actively watch Jace pour cereal, his muscles flexing with the motion. I never realized his arms were that toned. I shake my head at the involuntary thought.
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