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Rebels Georg

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Christian, deep lover of Kanera and SWR but in a crap ton of other fandoms, fan fic writer when I'm not working on my book series. If you want to be on my tag list, send me an ask or a DM! If you're into an obscure book series, send me an ask, I might have read it!! (If I haven't, it'll end up on my TBR) Always happy to talk to new people!!! Recently published my first book, feel free to ask me about it! Absolutely NO NSFW YOU WILL BE BLOCKED
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Okay I'm stuck on many of my fics right now so!! We're gonna do a writing sprint ask game. Send me one of the following fics and either A) a number between 1 and 6, and I will write for that amount of minutes, or B) two songs you want me to listen to, and I will write while listening to them!! After I'm done I'll share a snippet

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  • Kanereoke
  • The Steve Miller Au season 4
  • A Diamond In The Rough
  • The Anti Vader Squad
  • Land of the Tales book 2
  • Land of the Tales book 3
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Jod’s smug facade falling when Wim yells him name. Even after everything, Wim calls out to him. This man finally broke

First of all these tags are immaculate!

And ur right with the shadows and blue light, makes me think of this part to

Like he’s glimpsing into that blue light for just a moment and sees things as they truly are, his ship is gone, his crew gone, his plan over. Maybe with everything else gone he’ll finally walk into that light

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Actually, the most impressive thing about Skeleton Crew was how it understood the value of keeping the story small.

When your heroes are small, sheltered, inexperienced children, everything feels huge and threatening.

When none of the characters have the Force, you don't need characters who can move buildings with their minds. The guy who can do a teeny bit of stuff with the Force has a terrifyingly huge advantage.

Barely using the Force means that little examples of using the Force--like making a small object float--can invoke a major sense of wonder.

When only one character has a lightsaber, you don't need huge sword battles. A single blow from a lightsaber becomes a terrifying dramatic moment.

The villains don't need to have weapons that can blow up entire galaxies. If you have a few villains who can put the heroes, their families, and their home in danger, the stakes are as high as they need to be.

You don't need to draw characters and plot points from fifteen other stories. You just need to set up plot points that are well-foreshadowed in this story.

It keeps the story grounded, relatable, and understandable, while still having tons of tension and excitement and adventure. You don't have to make the story big. You just have to keep the heroes small.

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joninhaart

Eu fiz essas ilustrações durante o Dia dos Namorados de 2022, eu amo demais esse projeto! “Uma moça inteligente e determinada, que para salvar seu pai de uma dívida, vai trabalhar na mansão de um jovem veterano da Segunda Guerra, recluso e amargurado pelas cicatrizes em seu rosto devido ao campo de batalha.” >>> I made these during brazilian’s Valentine’s Day 2022, and I love it so much! “An intelligent and determined lady, to save her father from a debt, decides to work on a manor of a young, World War II vet, recluse and bitter due to the scars in his face caused by the battlefield.”

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tinydooms

#oh???#fairy tales#disney#fanart#batb#i can’t stop thinking about these possibilities actually#belle could have a university degree#could be recruited for the soe during the war#but afterwards#when her mother has died and her father’s health (broken by the first war) is not strong#she goes home#as all dutiful daughters are expected to do#and she settles into a different sort of life#she earns a little money doing translation#she volunteers at the library#is recruited onto parish committees#she tries to loan books to as many girls (and boys) as she can#she hasn’t met the lord of the manor since they were both climbing trees as children#he was (of course) sent to boarding school early; their paths didn’t cross at oxford#village rumor casts him as the ogre keeping people off his land#and she mentally shrugs#unsurprised to find him spoiled by privilege and the celebrity of being one of the few to whom so many owed so much#but when her father comes home in tears – he had only wanted some plums from the manor garden; they wouldn’t be missed or begrudged surely#she marches up the front drive and rings the ancient bell pull#(she and her father live in the lodge probably)#(maurice is basically allowed to keep the post out of charity though belle would be FURIOUS to have this pointed out)#anyway he’s patching up the hall from the scars of requisition#she agrees (ashamed at her own breathless eagerness) to help with the library#she starts helping out elsewhere too: polishing the silver with the arthritic housekeeper etc.#she wouldn’t live in but he’d have a bedroom aired so she wouldn’t have to cycle home in bad weather

Yes, hello, @oldshrewsburyian, OBVIOUSLY you have to write this story now!

Friend, friend, I am diligently telling myself I do not have time to do so. This is a slippery slope.

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bkwormkate

Ooooh love these ideas! Also, the drawings are MAGNIFICENT!

Sending you writing vibes and time, @oldshrewsburyian 😁

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magpie-trove

I think it’s so so novel and kind and good and true that Skeleton Crew has the bad guy in a coming of age story embody the BADNESS of not growing up, and then instead of symbolically destroying him at the end to show the wrongness of his approach to life and the way those coming of age move past it, they simply have him watch as his negative worldview literally crashes in front of him, so maybe something better can come in

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magpie-trove

The arcs! The arcs!!!! The character work was so well done!

•Wim wanting adventure and no one else wanting it, and then they learn the goodness of the outside world and he discovers the goodness of home as well. Home IS the treasure world all the pirates want to get to! Because it’s something they didn’t get! And he helps KB and she says bet you thought it’d be more exciting, saving someone’s life? And in the end his dad’s boring job is exciting and saves everyone!

•Wim trusting people because they seem friendly and him being the one able to figure out who the good and bad guys are and warn his dad who believes Jod just like he did, and figuring out who he wants to join in the end (the people that help other people!) BUT being someone who saves other people also means recognizing WHO needs saving, and he’s the one that gets to humanize Jod a little bit in the end

•Wim’s dad starts with aren’t you too old for bedtime stories (growing up=getting boring) and he has a whole arc of acting childish and then childlike, and having to realize there’s more of the story in the world than he thought, and he GETS to realize that! Because all the was keeping him from believing it was the idea that it wasn’t that way.

•Fern and the tower! She lives at the top of the hill and her mom is anxious to keep her safe up there because there’s not room for everyone at the top. But she goes out and learns that being on top is a responsibility, that being a leader and a captain means looking at the people around you and seeing what they are good at and helping them do that! And she also sees the outside world her mom’s afraid of also has good people who will help you in it. The very first thing when she steps into the pirate world a lady they don’t know pulls them aside to help them! And so with her and her mom in the actual tower she’s able to convince her mom to bring the barrier down that separates them from the outside world. It was keeping them safe but it was also shutting out the good!

•Neel teaches the warrior girl the value of a peaceful life. Kindness isn’t weak! Saying sorry isn’t weak! It’s the way you actually resolve things and *live*. He changes that planet. But he also learns from her! Neel who’s kind partially because he’s scared of everything ends by saying we almost died like every day but it was fun! That’s how you know it was a real adventure! And he saves his friend with the actual knowledge Hana the warrior girl gave him—the big gun on top of the school. (Think it’s insanely fitting that Neel who aced his school exams at the beginning gets to defend everyone with the weapon of the school. Again! The boring ordinary takes on new life and power! The goodness of the ordinary! It’s actually exciting! But it does have to transform to be. It has to be part of something bigger!)

•KB is the brains! Jod says trust your gut but Khym the owl lady says think! Use your head! And she learns on the hotel planet with Wim that what she needs is to communicate! And she’s the one that sends the message!

•Jod!!! He gets to be an antagonist and he’s scary not because he’s a grown up but because he can’t grow up!! His nemeses aren’t the adults it’s the KIDS because that’s the level he’s on. He’s Emma Swan!! He’s stuck in the idea that the world is awful and no one’s coming to save anyone so you just have to fend for yourself and take what you can get (pirate worldview), until!!! That literally crashes and burns in front of him! Because someone DID show up to save them! His whole world crumbles!! Who knows!! He can start again!

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the whole "I couldn't get into Rebels because of the animation" excuse irks the heck out of me because. You certainly seem to have gotten into The Clone Wars despite the Quality of the pilot/seasons 1-2 animation.

Ok, seriously. This was one of my big concerns going into Rebels (I liked how scrungly and geometric even the rough animation of The Clone Wars was, and I wasn't sure if the rounder, smoother animation style they used in Rebels would ever grow on me. But I decided to ignore it in favour of the plot).

JOKE'S ON ME! I fell in love with those little details. Yeah, the running animations in like, the first 2 episodes are rough, and I don't like Hondo's new outfit. Big deal. THE LANDSCAPES AND THE BODY LANGUAGE ARE SO GOOD, YOU GUYS. Even in the early episodes. LOOK!

Look at Hera's subtle expressions here! The little nuances in how she bounces her toes and leans on her knees, how her face scrunches up as she talks, how her lekku move around her, how her eyes are big and bright as she looks at the night sky. Look at the lighting of this scene, and how the dusk outside contrasts with the warm light of the Ghost behind them, and glints off their eyes and Hera's goggles.

Look at Kanan's posture, how comfortably he can flip around on the speeder bike even as it bounces and drifts beneath him. Look at how he positions his hands, so he can steady them against his knee if need be. Look at how he shouts as he makes his shot, and how the recoil of the blaster combined with the movement of the speeder throws him just a little off balance.

Look at the lighting, how the shadows are moving over Ezra and Zeb! Look at how Ezra at first winces at being reprimanded; then he relaxes as he he listens to Zeb, and his eyes go wide as he pleads with Kanan. And Zeb!!! I was ENTRANCED by Zeb while I watched this show, honestly. His body language is just really cool. Look here, at how he grimaces listening to Kanan shout, but mumbles out of the side of his mouth to reassure Ezra. Then his eyes go wide and his face falls, before he squints a little and his ears droop in disappointment as he complains at Kanan.

Look at the way Sabine makes a point to look over at R2D2 directly when she's talking to him, and the way she leans casually and comfortably on the gonk droid while she speaks. Look at how she pats the gonk droid as she finishes speaking, and brushes the hair out of her eyes as it falls back in her face while she stands straight again. And look at how the droids all wiggle, or spin their domes around, or in Chopper's case sticks out his little actuator arm to express himself.

And even in a flat grassland, look at the variation in the grasses and the soil. Look at the way the clouds and fog engulf the ground, and the way that Kanan and Ezra's breath steams in the cold, the way their hands tremble as they concentrate, the way you can tell Ezra is focusing on the effort while Kanan relaxes, in order for them to complete it.

There's so many little details like that, which make the animation really fun to watch. And that's just the early stuff. If you can get over a couple odd running animations in the first few episodes, you get to look forward to shots like this:

And this:

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AND your life will be significantly improved by seeing Howl's Moving Trailer Home the walker that the clones turned into a home.

Not to mention how beautiful a lot of the skies and murals are. Also, I couldn't find any gifs I liked of Zeb fighting. But holy shit. Hoooly shit you guys. He moves like a dancer. He's so FAST. He's so powerful, yet so agile. It is a treat and an HONOUR watching him kick someone's ass in melee combat. And as someone who's very familiar with cats, I found it so fun to watch his ears; there's really a fair bit of nuance in how he expresses himself, between his face and his ears. And the way Zeb moves his ears is very similar to a cat, so you can tell when he's focusing on a little thing in the background, or when he's annoyed, or when he's chillin, even if he doesn't say a word.

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Alright today's question. could you get away with naming your kid after your favourite blorbo yes or no

And what I mean is would it work both as a name for an actual child and is it a common actual name or is it something more obscure. And is it from a media where people won't recognize where you got the name depending on whether or not that's a good or bad thing

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