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Hey, That Hurt

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Cw: threatened eye trauma

capturing and restraining a powerful hero by using a hostage

Hero was a force of nature, tearing through enemy after enemy without ever faltering or breaking a sweat. They were the distraction, a rampaging beast to draw enemy attention while Teammate grabbed what they came for.

Their awareness of the battlefield was perfect, so when they heard a pained gasp in a familiar voice, it caught their attention immediately.

“Stand down, everyone.”

At Villain’s order, the forces around them forced themselves to lower their weapons and step away, limbs shaking from adrenaline. Hero itched to take advantage of the openings they were all presenting, but they forced themselves to stand still, attention on the Villain who had entered the room.

In Villain’s arms, hands behind their back (bound!?), was Teammate. Their head tilted back at an uncomfortable angle, making room for the knife ever so slightly digging into their neck. A gag sat between their bared teeth, digging into their cheeks and pushed slightly forward by the wad of cloth that seemed to have been shoved into their mouth. Their nostrils flared with the deep breaths they were unable to take with their mouth. Their eyes, tears glinting at the corners, were filled with fire, darting furiously from Villain’s cocky smirk to Hero’s darkened expression and back again.

Villain grinned.

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This miight’ve been done already, but the whumper whump writer reminds of an idea that’s existed in my head for a while: whumpee whump writer. Like, even if they’ve written the most horrific shit anyone has seen, they’re still not prepared for all the stuff whumper is going to put them through. (Granted this has mostly existed in my head as self-insert shenanigans)

im sorry u mentioned self insert and this suddenly turned into second person pov i apologise i hope u dont mind

content: second person pov, implied gore, kidnapping, captivity, restraints, gagged

You know what's coming. You know damn well — you've written about it a thousand times. As the table saw whirrs to life and your kidnapper grins at you, you suddenly lose feeling in your hand that's secured to said table.

You really, really hope you've well and truly lost feeling in it.

"I read this in one of your stories," they explain cheerfully, half-yelling over the sound of the equipment. "You painted quite the captivating picture, but honestly, I've never been good at visualising."

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whumpshaped

Counterpoint to that last prompt about firsts: a Whumpee who's used to it. Who's been abused, hurt, humiliated, tortured their whole life, whether by a parent or in school or whatever. A Whumpee who barely reacts to some things, which pisses Whumper off. But through some trial and error they find other things Whumpee *does* react to. Trauma responses, flashbacks, crying, etc. And Whumper knows they can use those to their advantage.

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tw implied past trauma, dehumanisation, humiliation, captivity

“Quite stoic, are we?” Whumper asked, looking down at Whumpee with thinly veiled annoyance. “I don’t like the stoic ones.”

Whumpee couldn’t say a thing. Their throat felt impossibly tight with terror, something that Whumper had clearly mistaken for stoicism. As if they wanted to spite their captor. As if they could choose how to react in a life-threatening situation. They’d thought they were doing a good job by following orders and kneeling on the floor quietly, but apparently, that couldn’t have been further from the truth. Apparently, it was annoying.

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When the villain first entered the room, they didn’t speak. Instead, they walked to either side of Whumpee, inspecting them, gaze wandering up and down, lingering on the chains at their wrists and ankles. Whumpee made sure to stand up tall and proud, doing their best to communicate a lack of fear, though they couldn’t stop their eyes from tracking the villain’s movements. They longed to lunge forward, to defeat their opponent with a single mighty blow and run, but they’d already learned that the chains would easily halt any such attempts. The bruises under the cuffs were proof enough of that.

Finally, the villain came to a stop in front of Whumpee. When Whumpee met their eyes, they smirked.

“Kneel.”

Whumpee couldn’t help but bark out a laugh. “Kneel? You lot are even more foolish than I thought if you think I would follow even one of your commands.”

The smirk grew into a grin. “Oh, I am not the fool here, hero.” The villain pulled a radio from their belt and spoke into it, still smiling. “It seems our guest hasn’t realized what’s at stake here. Make sure to kill one civilian during your patrol tonight. Someone who won’t be noticed, of course.” With a click, the radio turned off and was returned to the belt.

Whumpee’s next breath caught in their throat. They went to step forward, but the chain caught and they stumbled, nearly falling. Their eyes were wide. “No— no! Why would you..? This is a trick, isn’t it. A lie. There’s no reason for you—“

“Oh, you know that’s not true, hero. Haven’t you been keeping up? My reason is right here.”

They paused for a moment, allowing Whumpee to come to the realization that there was little reason to doubt the validity of the threat. They shivered, steeling themself once more.

“Now, unless you’d like to test me again, I believe I issued an order.”

Whumpee lowered one knee, then the other to the floor, glaring at Whumper all the while. They looked up at whumper to find an expression filled with both violence and affection. Swallowing felt difficult, as though they were going to choke.

Whumper stepped forward, resting their hand softly on Whumpee’s shoulder, then letting it creep towards their neck. Light fingertips turned to fingernails digging into skin. They were standing more than close enough for Whumpee to knock them out, search them for a key. That would probably be the best course of action. They could escape, come back immediately with a team. Take down the villains before anyone else could be hurt.

But…

Would the villains be careless enough to let them escape that easily? Maybe not.

Still, heroics often meant weighing risks. Maybe people would be hurt if they were caught escaping, but knowing this group, allowing them to roam free was even more dangerous, down the line. They couldn’t let threats stop them from taking these villains down. And they really, really wanted this person to stop touching them. They were feeling sicker every second.

They swung up their hands and slammed them to the sides of the villain’s head, dazing them, then pulled the chain tight around their neck, waiting, waiting, one hardly breathing and the other not at all, until finally they could be certain the villain was unconscious. They checked for breath, then a pulse— still perfectly alive— then searched the belt for keys.

Then the jacket.

Then the pockets of their pants.

Then……

Someone young and scared came to pull the villain out of the room shortly after, making sure to stay out of reach. Whumpee didn’t move, keeping their hands still and gaze lowered.

They weren’t surprised when Whumper reentered what must have been hours later, though no bruises were yet showing behind the scratches at their neck. They’d anticipated anger, but instead, Whumper was chuckling as the heavy door closed behind them.

“Well shame on me I suppose for expecting you to be smarter than that. Live and learn, as they say. Speaking of which.”

Whumpee had been feeling their heart beat as surely as they felt the cold of the floor for hours. As they watched Whumper reach into their pocket and pull out a folded piece of paper, they felt it beat faster.

Whumper held out the paper. Reluctantly, Whumpee stood up to grab it, took a step away and cautiously unfolded it.

A body.

A photo of a body, lazily printed out in low quality on ordinary paper. A dead body, wrapped in blankets and huddled up against a brick wall. Sleeping, if not for the dark stain of blood, shining under the flash of the camera.

The paper was shaking. Their hands were shaking. The paper began to tear under the strain of their grip and they suddenly let go, watching it drift to the floor.

“I trust you’ve learned your lesson. I’m afraid you’ll be receiving five more pages like that one, due to your little stunt, but I’m optimistic that there will need to be very few after that. Ink is expensive, after all. Now then.”

The villain once again stepped within Whumpee’s reach, seemingly completely unconcerned about any sort of danger to their person.

“Kneel. A bit more enthusiasm this time, please.”

There was a crack as Whumpee’s knees collided painfully against the floor, and after only a moment’s hesitation, they lowered their forehead as well, fingers splayed at either side of their head against the cold concrete. They forced themself to take deep breaths, keeping down the bile but unable to stop the tears that now sprung their eyes.

When Whumper began petting their head, they failed to suppress the first shuddering sob.

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I feel like we don't talk enough about how uncomfortable having your hands tied behind you is, especially if it's tight.

Imagine having to sleep like that! How tired does whumpee have to be to be able to fall asleep while uncomfortable and in pain?

Also - whumpees being tied up for so long their hands lose feeling? Hello?? It would also hurt like hell when they get freed and blood starts circulating properly again.

All right, yeah!!

And here are the extra facts:

Tied too tight you say? Hope your whumper intends to keep you in good health and checks your circulation every few minutes or say hello to nerve damage that may NOT be repairable.

Your hands go numb? No way to shake that feeling loose? Sleeping like that? Nerve damage.

This is why in BDSM scenes (consensual whump, for those not in the know) it is on the receiver to immediately report when they are losing feeling ANYWHERE because that is an immediate red flag to stop and adjust. The scene will wait. It is also on the giver to always check rope tightness and check in regularly because the receiver isn't always in their right mind.

It's a fantasy that whumpee can wake up in the morning with aching limbs and be freed, and eventually get back to (mostly) healthy functioning for the next torture session.

Nerve damage can happen in minutes in the right location EVEN IF IT'S NOT THAT TIGHT.

My hands are generally susceptible to going a bit numb, which is why I dislike the behind the back poses - it's a quicker recipie for numbness, and a more regular need to call for adjustments. And that's with the ropes fairly loose in the wrist area. It's the shoulder, arm, and wrist position that all combine for a quicker onset of numbness.

If you're talking fic whump levels of tightness and you want realism? It depends on the person, but your whumpee could go numb in minutes.

You'll have the same problem with feet, if the legs are suspended above the body. Even simply tied to a bed, with hands and/or feet tied to the bedposts, is an easy recipe for numbness in the restrained limbs.

So remember, it's not just uncomfortable pain, discomfort, ache, eventually shaking feeling back - it's risk of permanent damage.

Yay whump!

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i made a whump wheel

want to beat up a character but don't know how you wanna do it? same here, friend. behold, the whump wheel! it currently has 60 different prompts/tropes on it and is ready for use! 🎉 i...love this thing. it is wonderful for writing exercises. (if you wanna know what's on it before using it, take a peak at the screenshot below)

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TW for self harm, but not really.

I know that it's pretty common to have characters scratch at their skin and things like that in whump situations, so I thought it might be helpful for some writers to get insight into one potential reason someone might do this:

Dermatillomania [https://my.clevelandclinic.org/health/diseases/22706-dermatillomania-skin-picking] is a skin picking disorder, commonly associated with anxiety and ADHD and probably other things too. I have it, so I think it's fair game for me to talk about in relation to whump and angst.

Dermatillomania is basically the urge to pick at skin blemishes. Pimples, scabs, fingernails, maybe stray hairs, anything. It almost always makes these issues worse, and especially with scabs it tends to make things more painful in the end, and can even cause bleeding. My dermatillomania tends to be worse when I'm stressed or understimulated, so I imagine that if I were, say, a stressed-out prisoner with nothing to do, that my dermatillomania would get pretty bad.

Ooh, and imagine if the whumpee was supposed to maintain their appearance, and the whumper caught them damaging their face.

I will note that I would not personally categorize dermatillomania as self-harm, or at least not as the most commonly known kind of self-harm. The intent (to the extent that intent is present in the behavior, which varies) is to relieve anxiety and boredom/understimulation, not cause pain.

If anyone has any further questions, I can answer them. Askbox is also open I think.

(Btw, trichotillomania is hair-pulling disorder. Don't really have that one, but I imagine the reasons for the behavior are probably similar)

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Give me Whumpees that are less defiant and more resilient. They've taken their licks. They know the rules. They've survived and they will survive. Because they've given up their dignity long beforehand.

If the master says beg they beg. They might even do a good job at it if they're experienced enough. They know just how much to scream. How to breathe. How to weather the storm.

But they don't know how to live. To laugh. To open up. They deflect. Or are short and to the point. They survive.

Resilient whumpees

They have a special kind of strenght, more subtle than the open fight of defiant whumpees.

They're begging, they may beg well, but it doesn't wreck them inside. They will lick the ground and stand naked without batting an eye. You can't humiliate them.

They'll do whatever it takes to survive, and won't feel lesser for it.

But it comes at a cost. Now they can't switch it off. Nothing seems to touch them, the vulnerable part of them is buried too deep. The armor is stuck to their skin.

And tearing it off, that fucking hurts. It's the most wretched, terrifying, wrong feeling.

It's not in captivity, but in recovery that you'll see them fall apart.

I love this approach because it feels so logical. When there are characters who have shown that they aren't afraid to set their pride aside when it's necessary, I really love when this is their response to whump. So long as they aren't being tortured for information or some similar situation, there's little reason to resist. And then they're rescued. And maybe, initially, they seem to recover quickly. They were never truly conditioned, they simply chose to make the right choice for the situation. They're fine, they're the same as they always were. ... but when they were first captured, they pretended to be meek. And now it's really, really hard to pretend to be strong.

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On being lifted by your hair

Starting by saying that I am a white person with very thin-stranded hair.

As someone who has had my hair pulled pretty badly in the process of getting my hair put into a ponytail before, here is what I know about what this might feel like and how it might impact a person:

Getting your hair pulled hurts. It pulls at the skin of your scalp in a pinchy sort of way, and then leaves your head sore afterwards. Even slight pulling (like from, oh, a ponytail) over an extended period of time can leave you with a headache and a sore scalp depending on how sensitive your head is.

I have been told that your scalp can adjust to wearing tied-back hair over time, so someone who frequently wears their hair in a ponytail, braid(s) etc. might have a little more resilience.

(side note— if your whumpee is in more of a pet/model servant etc. kind of situation, being required to wear their hair tied up could provide a subtle pain/discomfort that is also somewhat symbolic of their mental pain from the control)

But that’s just the pain from tying your hair back. Take how painful such a simple thing can be, and then realize that we are now pulling with the weight of a person. Not only would it be extremely painful, you’ll probably lose some hair in the process. It might leave a person bleeding. You’d be left with a terrible headache, I’m sure.

Though apparently it is possible to get away from something like this physically unscathed, there’s a kind of circus act that involves hanging by your hair:

But even if you get to keep your hair, it’s still gonna hurt like hell.

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Breakfast, Part 1

Many thanks to @newbornwhumperfly for being so generous in letting me put their boy Morja in Situations, and many apologies to them as well for holding onto this story for so many months while waiting for me to finish it.

Morja is a diathésimos, one of a class of indentured servants owned by society’s elite - though some would call them slaves. He has been tasked with a mission of critical importance by his anóteros: to infiltrate a dangerous family that has taken refuge in the north, and kill the criminal that they are harboring: Gavin Stormbeck.

“It is your part to kill me, mine to die without flinching.”

Epictetus, from Discourses (Translated by Robert Dobbin)

Contents: captivity, conditioned whumpee, past drugging, thoughts of death, past torture

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There were footsteps in the hallway. Morja was instantly awake, eyes wide open, back ramrod straight as he sat up. He stared at the door from his sleeping spot on the floor, doing his best to stop trembling before the anóteros of the family - Gray, they told him to call them Gray - came in. They’d done that every morning for the past five mornings now, taking away his bucket of waste, bringing him something delicious for breakfast. It made Morja’s stomach flip with shame to be served in such a way, and by the anóteros no less. If his owner benefactor heard of this, he would be whipped for his insolence. He was still waiting to be whipped now.

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List of symptoms

I hate having whump fantasies that involve some vague fever that doesn’t have consistent symptoms to make it feel real. Here’s a handy list to flesh out the nature of your whumpee’s illness.

Let’s go:

  • Dizziness/faintness
  • Congestion
  • Sneezing
  • Coughing
  • Headache
  • Muscle aches
  • Joint aches
  • Cramping
  • Exhaustion/lethargy
  • Shivering
  • Wheezing/trouble breathing
  • Sore throat (trouble speaking and swallowing)
  • Sweating (leads to dehydration)
  • Flushed and/or pale skin
  • Delirium (delusions, nightmares, lack of filter, inability to regulate emotions, hallucinations, incoherent speech, confusion)
  • Nausea/vomiting
  • Abdominal pain (burning, stabbing, soreness)
  • Chest pain (burning, stabbing, soreness, tightness)
  • Pain/pressure behind the eyes
  • Feeling too hot or too cold
  • Weakness
  • Blurred vision
  • Weight loss (loss of appetite)
  • Rapid heartbeat
  • Abnormal breathing (rapid, shallow, panting)
  • Sensory sensitivity (light, sound, touch, smell, taste)

Tell me more……

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yuribalisms

You know, I’ve never personally been lifted from the ground by my neck to be strangled, but uh, is there a reason y’all never like….. kick the person holding you? Like characters straight up just dangle there and gasp, like you have legs! Use them you stupid bitches!

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jaywrites101

Actually, the physics involved with that is kinda weird. The thought, oh shit, can’t breathe, usually overpowers the rational part of the mind that can calmly assess the threat and comes up with effective solutions.

But that’s only the first obstacle. The second is leverage. I don’t know about you, but I hate stomach crunches. Thing is, why you’re being gripped by the neck, the only way you can get your feet up on your attacker is to move using muscles in your neck and spine. There’s not really any other source of leverage you can draw from like this.

It’s not an easy feat. It takes conscious thought, thoughts that keep getting drowned out by the oh shit, can’t breathe, instinct.

And then

in order to kick effectively, you’ll need some kind of leverage. Putting your back against a wall would be the most effective tactic, but a person being held like that literally has no choice in this regard.

The next best tactic would be to lift your legs as high as your opponent’s shoulder and use the combined leverage to try and break their grip on your throat. Except:

  1. If they’re lifting you up off the ground by the neck, they’ll probably not have their grip broken by human force.
  2. Your neck bones are fairly fragile, you could end up paralyzing yourself making the attempt.

“Just kick them” doesn’t work in this situation because you’re off the ground. An ordinary kick relies on manipulating leverage and muscle from one leg on the ground and another exerting force on the target.

Trying to fight back without a good source of leverage is like trying to beat them to death with a pool noodle.

And that’s assuming you can think of any of this at all.

This was actually very informative and I revoke my earlier snappish words, thank you

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