New pages 24 and 25. The first is all new, the second is a redraw. I think redrawing comic pages is not a good use of my time without a good reason. I have always wanted to redo how Jacky got caught. The method is fine- but it didn't have any personality. I like this much more.
This will read better overall when I revisit the conversation she has with Belz at the beginning, which I have thumbed, but I'm still kicking around dialogue. If I change a few interactions up earlier in the story it'll make new pages easier to write. That's the goal at the moment.