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for the hope of it all

@ghostsofmemories / ghostsofmemories.tumblr.com

august, he/him. poet, novelist, and at least a couple other things that would sound really pretentious if you introduced yourself that way.
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9, 19, 29, 39, 49?

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All the nines, radical.

9 - Least favorite trope to write

Uhhh I have never and will never write a love triangle. Sue me, but it tends to be super toxic and unhealthy and most of the time is used as a way to show a girl narrator is naive and can’t make her own decisions.

19 - First line of a WIP you’re working on

The first line of OITW:

Things like this normally happen past midnight, which might be why I ignored every weird feeling I had prior.

I actually don’t know if I like this line :/ I kind of just.. wrote it

29 - who do you write for?

I write for myself and people who are like me.

39 - Do you base your characters off of real people or not? If so, tell us about one.

I almost never base my characters off of real people. In OITW, Arthur has a lot of the same traits as my best friend, but more of an inside joke kind of way than actually basing a character on him.

49 - What do you find the hardest to write in a story, the beginning, the middle, or the end?

Generally I find that the very very beginning is fine, but between 6,000 and 20,000 words is very difficult. If I can push past the 20k point, it’s usually smooth sailing from there.

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20 and 35 for the ask game please!

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20 - post a snippet of a WIP you’re working on

I’m gonna be honest, I’ve written almost nothing because I just took an exam this week and have two more next week, but have something I wrote during my last writing session!

The silence wasn’t horrible. I didn’t ask him to hand me the water bottle, and I didn’t ask him why he was crying, and I didn’t ask him how he was tired enough to fall asleep sitting up. I didn’t ask him to move when his head ended up on my shoulder. I wanted to be a good brother. I didn’t always need to know.

35 - tell some backstory details about of your characters in your story [Ocean in the Woods]

I think the person with the most interesting backstory is easily Ocean, because she came from an entirely different world. She really struggles with wanting her parents to be proud of her, but she’s also mildly manipulative. When she was a child, she had an older sister who was extremely successful and everyone loved her, but she died from wounds after fighting (which is considered extremely honorable, and her sister Blossom saved a whole bunch of lives before dying). She’s spent a lot of her life struggling with self-image because she isn’t as good of a warrior as her sister, and she looks so much like her that many people get upset being around her.

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7 and 14 for the asks ✨

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7 - Do you edit after the draft is done or edit as you go?

I do a bit of both! I tend to go back a page or two whenever I write and edit until I get to the spot where I stopped before.

14 - Is there a specific moment you’re looking forward to when it comes to your WIP?

It’s actually coming up really soon! A little bit after Ocean and Arthur meet and talk (talk as in she convinces him to help her try to get home) they got to the lake and try to open the portal to get her home, and then they get attacked by the big bad monster. I’m really looking forward to being able to explore the magic in this scene!

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Tell me about the languages your characters speak! Are any of them multilingual? Which characters use slang or dialect, and which don't?

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Oh this is a fun one!

The Benz family is black and Latinx, but most of them didn't know Spanish (as their Latina grandmother died when their mom was young & she was raised in the states by a non-latinx dad). However, Mrs. Benz is in the process of learning Spanish as an adult and Anne speaks it almost fluently! Both of the boys are making an effort to learn, but aren't as "into it" as their mother and sister.

Other than that, Vanessa speaks somewhat decent French and Maya is taking an ASL class online through the school.

Most of this doesn't really come up in the book, but I'm glad you asked because I came up with this while developing characters and I wanted to use it at some point!

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Ocean In the Woods: Character Portraits/Profiles

I hope everyone enjoys this because this has taken Forever™ and it's the reason I haven't gotten anything done all week. I drew some portraits in my comic sans presentation but I'm not very happy with them anymore so here's some better ones!!

Arthur Benz, he/him (MC)

I've already posted his portrait once, but it wouldn't be right to ignore him here! Arthur is 17, a trans guy, and a little impulsive. His family is very supportive of his gender identity (because I literally never see that in stories ever) and he has been on testosterone for just over a year. He has a tendency to feel guilty over things out of his control, is extroverted but distant, and is observant in terms of detail but oblivious in terms of emotions. He's not really a school kind of guy and can't wait to get out of there.

Anne Benz, she/her (older sister)

Anne is a 24 year old woman who still lives at home (by choice because she loves them). She's a programmer, family genius, considering giving her a secret girlfriend. She's extremely caring and closest to Arthur out of the rest of his family. Takes her responsibility as the oldest Very Seriously but still knows how to be a cool badass.

Aiden Benz, he/him (little brother)

Aiden is 14, in 8th grade. He is my baby, small and soft and even though he's a bit of an asshole at times, I still love him. He gets very good grades and listens to Bach and sort of thinks he's above Arthur because of that, but he's going to grow a lot over the course of the story. He's just an adorable child and deserves better.

Maya Bright, she/her

Maya is Arthur's best friend, who is also 17 but 12 days older and will let you know. She is absolutely fucking wild, and still manages to keep straight A's. Chaotic bisexual. She and Arthur feed each other's impulses. Would get into an ivy league school but get arrested for rioting and throwing bricks. I love her.

Lance Fisher, he/him

The other best friend! 18 and the only straight white person in the group, but he's still rad. Has gotten suspended from school and (temporarily) kicked off the soccer team because someone was messing with his friends and he was not having it. He's kind of an all brawn no brain at times, but he's not actually stupid and it hurts is feeling when people make fun of him (but he'd never tell them that).

Ollie Cook, they/them

Local freshman at 15, and basically got thrown into the friend group after coming out in the fall. They are feminine and Do Not Care what people think about it. Loud, fun, go-with-the-flow kinda friend. Unsure about their sexuality. They're always there for everybody but kind of insecure about their place in the group due to being younger and new to this whole thing. Very sweet, 100/10.

Vanessa Pierce, she/her

16, a sophomore amongst many juniors and a freshman. Dating Ollie, and the two of them are a very cute couple. Local lesbian (listen I don't wanna get into the gatekeeping stuff about nb people and sexualities, yeah? Let them exist) and lover of all things in shades of red. Probably secretly a goddess.

Ocean, she/her

Possible love interest from a parallel dimension (it's basically our world but set back 20 years and with monsters? I don't really get it either tbh. I'm just going with it) who accidentally brings a very scary monster/demon/whateverthefuck to our world. She's very desperate for approval in most things she does, as she's very unfamiliar with the technology and social dynamics here. She's very homesick and misses her family, but the portal back home won't open until the physical world is as it was before she got there (AKA no monster). Idk how old she is yet, but between 16 and 18. Mysterious. Unpredictable. Nervous wreck.

The Benz parents also play pretty big roles in the story, but I didn't include them here as I don't really have a clear picture of what they look like yet, so here they are (I basically just made some Really Awesome Parents because I don't think we see enough of that in fiction, especially YA):

Denise (mother) is very nurturing and careful. She wants to do everything as perfectly as possible with the fewest amount of repercussions. Her father is of Nigerian descent and her mother was born and raised in Mexico, but died when Denise was a young girl. She's trying to learn spanish as a tribute to her mother and heritage, but she's also juggling a career and her children, so it's a process.

Richard (father, who will always be Richie to his wife and in my heart) is also a programmer, and sparked Anne's interest in the job when she was young. He tries to spend time with all his kids and struggles to accept the fact that they're growing up. He does whatever he can to make them happy. He owns up to the mistakes of his past (spent some time in rehab when Anne and was a kid and Arthur was a baby), but does his best to move forward.

Overall, this is my favorite cast of characters ever!! I might have to slightly pair down some of the stuff I've got going in my head for them because frankly, there is Too Much Subplot (but. I love them so much) and there is not room for all their development and characteristics.

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