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Hey y'all, hate to do this but our roof is leaking really, really bad and it's gonna be expensive to fix so I'm putting it out there that I have commissions open.

I can help develop your world and characters

I can help you dive into comparison titles and figure out how to being your favorite things out in your book.

I will read your story, create a list of questions I have and help you figure out which information you want publicly known, implied or a total mystery.

I have different packages available and am eager to help you out. If you don't want a commission then I have the Kofi opened as a tip jar for the stories I am writing. If you would like to read them I have a lot uploaded to Wattpad free to read.

Even just a repost is appreciated

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So,

Because apparently I'm a work-obessed fool and can't take even a week off of thinking about wips, I opened up a poll on Twitter and decided to swap the MC of The Terrible Tale of Orson Turner to Calista, the baddie.

Originally, Orson was going to be the sympathetic anti-hero who just wants a decent life despite of all the bad he's done in his past and how shittily he lives his life now. When running into an old flame who he was terrible to in his teen years, he finds out she's been turned into a vampire and tries to convince her to leave her husband and try to find "purity" to "save herself".

In the end Calista was going to die. Leading Nelo to seek long, slow revenge on Orson by following him around and tormenting him.

But then I remembered, no one likes those stories anymore.

So I decided to flip it.

Orson is a guy who has his head so far up his own ass he can see how he's wrong, but refuses to change. He kills Nelo in an attempt to cave man steal Calista and is terrified to find out Nelo was the gentle soul and Calista is willing to scorch the earth for justice of her husband's death.

Now it's Calista who will torment Orson, becoming a powerful and terrifying force of abnormal nature to satisfy her need for revenge on the man who screwed up her life not once, but twice.

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So I've never done a bullet journal before but for this upcoming Nanowrimo I want to be more productive and on point, so I am going to try doing this for my romance novel The Ballad of Blue, Aqua, and Black and my dark fairytale retelling called Ever After

Anyone ever try this method?

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I just broke 13,000 words on my Camp Nanowrimo project.

technically I am super far behind. I should be a LOT further along by now but I am proud.

Ive written around 3,000 or possibly even more words that have been outright deleted, like, hours after writing them because I realize they were crap or didnt flow right.

I've edited over 8,000 words I already had written from when it was a contest entry!

Part of me wants to slam my head into the wall because I should be around 24,000 words and I am about 11,000 worfs behind. Part of me wants to take a break from it because I get stuck and burned out easily.

But I am trying hard to not beat myself up. Life happens and sometimes I need a break. I can't remember a time revently when I've sat down with something this plotted and wrote so much in a month.

Nano isn't a contest, it's not a shameful thing to not make your goal. And I need to keep that mindset.

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So today I had a "what if" moment.

What if my D&D cast found an amulet that forced the wearer to tell 100 truths before they could remove it?

So now the moost secretivr Triphan is being forced to spill his guts and secrets anytime someone asks him a question or he has a thought he would normally keep to himself.

Luka is loving. every. second.

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Lady Luck: Cayde's Monster

Di waited patiently, closer...closer. She swung down, her legs keeping her secure to the landing above as Cayde returned to his usual place in thr hanger, distracted by a map in his hands.

"Boohyah!" she bellowed in her best Shaxx impression, making Cayde jump in shock, map ripping down the middle as she cackled in hysteric laughter. The workers in the hanger joined in on the joke, laughing and clapping as Cayde sighed heavily and dipped his head.

"hows it feel!" one worker yelled

"butt of your own joke now hunter!" another bellowed.

Cayde looked to Amanda Holiday who was leaning heavily on the sparrow she was tuning, laughing so hard it was shaking in the rig.

"Taught her, too well, didya Cayde?" She asked between laughs as Di dropped from the cage, bopping Cayde on his horn as she ran past, making him look up and watch. As quick as the fabeled Gazelles from the Before, she ran up the steps and vanished around a corner.

"I've made a mosnster." cayde said softly, looking down at the map pieces in his hands.

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Breakthrough

So lately I've been plotting out 2 huge high fantasy novels side by side. I've wanted to write them for years, but never really gave much thought as to what would happen in them.

One follows a group of travelers who happen to work well together and decide to stick together to help each other achieve their goals. They eventually become like family before parting ways.

The second follows the asscention and rule of a queen who brings magic to her kingdom after saving it from her murderous brother. (Magic had been previously banned by death and banishment.)

While working a few days ago, I had a breakthrough. One of the characters, Luka, will transfer from the D&D story to the queens story when they (the party) part ways. But I had no idea how.

The queens story really took off and it's been easy to plot for the most part--although I have hit a bit of a wall. The D&D party has been stalled from the word go.

So after beating myself up about it, I decided to put down my pen and play Destiny 2 with my fiance and clan. While raiding, during a moment when we have to time our movement, I had another breakthrough.

Luka and another party member crash into one another, literally, in a forest at night as they try to capture a young animal who creates a medicine that cures a disease. They accidentally alert the mother who attacks, making them run for their lives, only to be saved by another party member who has been watching them both. Que the loudest, biggest, dundering party member who sweeps in and scares their prey off.

I finally know how they all met.

In conclusion: I need to play more games.

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Creepy dream, good ending

Had the strangest dream and thought I'd share because....how often does shit actually work out like this? Kinda long but stick with it, it gets good.

So in my dream I was like a ghost following these three teens (1 girl, 2 guys, all punk/scene/techno mixed for clothing) around a GIANT library / train station. While there the girl climbs up a ladder to look for a book high on a shelf and comes across a cursed book. No matter how many times she lays it down and picks up another, the book takes its place and leaves a paper cut on her hand somewhere. She brings it down to the boys who groan and tell her she's gotta see him.

Him

That's all they call him. She rolls her eyes and tells them that he isn't that bad but the guys look between one another and you can tell its not good. So they go to a diner and get food because its tradition to offer something to him in exchange for information. And he's apparently to broke to afford real food. Word gets around pretty quick and people are warning this girl to just accept that she can't read anymore instead of going to him.

"Youll get impregnated by his devil spawn"

"He'll kill you for your skin, slowly, piece by piece while your alive"

"He will ruin your life, you'll be so twister you won't want to leave his side."

"Hes the one responsible for all those missing kids you know."

But she just buys some meat and weird plant thing and goes about her business as if she can't hear any of them. She makes the food at her apartment before asking her buddies if they want to go, they don't but they go 'for (her) protection.'

When they get to this place its easy to see it used to be a mansion, just short of a palace. Yet partying and vandalism has turned it into a sort of rave, squatters paradise. Lights are flashing, black lights on in certain rooms, music is so loud you can feel vibrations in the air, people are drinking, partying and sexing it up like its the end of days.

It doesn't phase the girl, she walks right through and finds a white haired young man dressed in blacks and purples. He greets her happily and takes her up to the third floor to where its less loud and crowded. It's a large room, probably meant to be a bedroom suite of some sort. She called him by name, but it was lost to me, as if I was barred from hearing it because of a spell.

She offers him the food, which he accepts happily but doesn't eat right away, offering her some in return for her coming all that way. She declines because she tell he's been eating "fakies", he grimaces playfully like caught in a bad joke and eats like he's starving. When he's done she tells him about the book and shows it to him, he laughs at her for being drawn to the cursed and dark and takes the boom from her, tossing it into a corner and saying he will take care of it.

He picks up a dark, squat bottle and takes a swig before offering her some. She shrugs and takes a drink, I could taste it in my own mouth. It's was irresistibly sweet and creamy, like clouds made of warm sugar and honey, spiced with something forbidden. I wanted more and so did she. She tried to chug the bottle and I could see the horror in the guys face. There was something in the bottle that didn't effect him. He hadn't known.

He took the bottle from her and noticed she had nearly drank the last half, only a few sips left. To keep her from trying to get at it, he drank the last bit and smashed the bottle against the wall. She stopped trying to take it and just...stared at him oddly, like they hadn't met before. He was speaking to her, trying to warn her that the drink had been spiked without his knowing when she kisses him. In her mind he would taste like the drink because he had some too.

At first he gave into it, kissing her back and pulling her close. But something came to his mind and he stopped her, pushing her away and dragging her along by her wrist until he found her two guy friends who got lost along the way.

He demanded they take her home and make her eat "real" food, along with purified water to rid herself of the drug that had been in the drink. She kept begging him to take her back upstairs (and well, do things) and her friends were in shock at how the guy turned her over so forcibly and demanded with a snarl that they don't bring her back, no matter how hard she tried to escape or how much she cried and pleaded.

He would seek her out when he was sure the drug had worn off and he was done with the curse. The boys panicked and hauled her away, the girl acting like a lost puppy: calling and whimpering his name while trying to get back to him. Then it was like I was attached the young man, following him back up the stairs. When he got to his room his nose started bleeding and he looked into a corner where two red eyes were staring at him.

The young man went to the corner where the book was thrown and picked it up, running his hands over it to reveal a silver aura over it, twinged with red.

"I thought you'd like that?" The res eyes purred.

"Shut up."

"What? It's what you truly wanted right? Instead of some normie food?"

"I want it to be real, not because of you!"

"You mean the jingjing I put in your drink."

"Dont split hairs, and if you mess with her again--"

"What? You'll cut the ties? You know that's not smart."

"No ones ever claimed I was the brightest."

Thinking about putting this away for a story I had. Reblog, message, drop an annon if you wanna know more

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I want to write a piece similar to the song 'get back up again.' A girl traversing a dangerous magic filled forest with optimism.

For most of the song, luck helps her out until the 'ahh!' Point where she gets chased by a monster and evades it long enough to catch her breath.

or so she thinks when it shows back up and it ready to strike, suddenly the optimism and happiness is replaced with: "no! I cant think that way, cause I know that im really, really gonna be OK!" She coldly attacks the monster and beats it into running away, no more smiling, no more wonder, she stomps around the forest with a club, ready to fend off the next irratance.

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Killer Roll

I want to write this little scene where this tiny little character is tied up and looks absolutely harmless like they don't belong as a hostage cause they're such a cinnamon roll. A team of their tough friends split up to find them quicker. But as one part big, hard team of badasses bust in to rescue them, they see the cinnamon roll smile. Then cut away to the second team as the first team runs past them for their lives screaming stuff like

"shit, go, get the fuck out!"

And you hear the screams of the enemy in the distance, the cinnamon roll appears covered in blood and fire and smoke it billowing behind them and they look creepy but still adorable and helpless ad they carry the heavy head of a decapitated enemy.
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