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;semihiatus; on queue/ infp / asexual /multifandom blog｡･ﾟ･*:･ﾟ✧*:･ﾟ☆ ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗWelcome!! Edna Here, i repost, i draw and talk about my latest obesession. Thank you for visiting my blog and happy tumbling CURRENT OBSESSION: BNHA
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softmushie
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bitchesofostwick

me: okay time to jump into the action scene

me: don’t say it

me: don’t say it

me: don’t say it

me: don’t say it

me: don’t say it

me: don’t say it

me: don’t say it

me: don’t say it

me: … “SUDDENLY”

My go-to fixes for this:

  1. but before [Character] could [verb], ACTION!
  2. [Character] was about to [verb] when ACTION!
  3. but no sooner had [something] than ACTION!
  4. but just as [something boring], ACTION!
  5. BANG!/CRASH!/BOOM! ACTION!
  6. “Character dialogue starting some sentence about–” ACTION!
  7. Character’s internal monologue starting some sent– ACTION!
  8. Narrator starting some– ACTION!
  9. … ACTION!

Why extend your readers the courtesy of a ‘suddenly’ except to vary sentence structure?

One of my go-to fixes is 

“Well, what could go wrong now?” [Character] said. 

As if on cue, ACTION!

#lol
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lastoneout
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twilightown

CAUSE EVERY TIME WE TOUCH I GET THIS FEELING

EVERY TIME WE KISS I SWEAR I COULD FLY

CAN’T U FEEL MY HEART BEAT FAST, I WANT THIS TO LAST

NEED YOU BY MY SIDE

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the-husbando

This is the closest gif that can really capture the utter chaotic energy that is released when people hear this song

#lol
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