Last Line Meme
here here, I meant hear hear. I was tagged by the relentless @galadrieljones :D
Anyway, the last line of writing was dedicated to a project I’m not entirely convinced I should ever finish/publish. Unless I’m determined.
So, that’s supposed to be a sequel to ‘Unexpected’, you know that story where Solas ends up in modern England and falls in love with a human. Yup, that’s the one!
I am considering writing the next part titled ‘Foreseen’. So, here’s a tiny bit. More than a sentence though.
“Vhenan, please,” he leaned over her softly whispering words of endearment into her ear. The need to see the blue laced with light yellow of her eyes overwhelmed him. Just to know she was here with him. Whole, safe, and sound.
Solas was sitting next to her brushing the hair out her face and watching in wonder how she changed. The changes were subtle and yet very noticeable. He dampen the cloth in a cold water and wiped her face again. She was either sweating or shivering. He was with her all the time making sure to warm her up or cool her body down. There was no need to move to a more secure area or build a fire yet. He looked towards the horizon peaking between the distant trees at the end of the valley. He still had a few moments to decide whether to stay here or move her to the nearby cave. The place could offer a decent protection if he decided to hunt. They needed food and with her being probably weak after waking up, because she would wake up, he repeated to himself, she would need food.
and I would like to add that this was the worst struggle in all. I could not decide whose POV I should go for nor tense nor tone. The writer’s pain is real, trust me.
If I were to admit writing something in between, which I do very often, than this line would be the quintessence. Taken from the next lesson of ‘Harel Deliss’, a banter between Sera and Ellana, after the latter fails to return home last night.
I snorted. “No. I was at my parents, Sera. Not in a sorority house. And besides,” I continued foreseeing her next question,” he left after the dessert and some wine.”