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blueskyscribe

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It took me way too long to realise you are the author of one of my favourite transformers fanfics, the one about knockout taking the kids from Prime on a road trip. At least once a week I think of that scene where the mechs are like 'oh my god the protoforms are so cute!' while meanwhile the kids are like 'oh wow this is something out of a horror movie'. Just wanna say I love your writing, anyway!

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Wow, thank you so much! <3 I had so much fun writing that one!

(Just going to drop a link in case anyone else is interested ho ho ho >> With a Side of Rust << )

I looove making the bots Not All That Human, especially in terms of reproduction, so I'm glad that scene stuck!

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greyliliy

While browsing around the Fairly Oddparents tag, it has come to my attention that once more, a lot of people have no idea what "proship" means.

So like many before, I shall break it down for you:

Pro- A preffix that means "in favour of; supporting" (Oxford Learner's Dictionary)

Ship (Shipping) - Short for "Relationship. (Fanlore)

Therefore, to be Pro-Ship/Shipping, one is in favor of or supports shipping. In other words, one does not care what other people ship.

Many old school ways to refer to this can be summed up as:

"Ship and let Ship." and "Your ship is not my ship, and that's okay!"

"Pro" does not stand for "Problematic."

In fact, many people who support the rights of people to ship and write whatever fiction they want do not themselves enjoy darker materials and consume solely good-feeling fluff.

Being "Proship" does not say what a person likes in a ship or their fiction anymore than being "Anti" says what they enjoy.

For example, an Anti viciously against age gap ships may also watch South Park, a show famous for it's mature-rated material concerning minors.

That being said, some advice for fandom:

Make things for the things you like and don't waste away focusing on things you dislike.

Want more content for your favorite pairing or platonic relationship? Write or draw it.

Can't write or draw? Give it your best go and learn, or write blog posts gushing about all the things you love until someone else is inspired to make the thing themselves.

You will be happier focusing on the things you enjoy than constantly policing everything you say or type on the internet.

Have a good day!

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avelera

Pro-writing tip: if your story doesn't need a number, don't put a fucking number in it.

Nothing, I mean nothing, activates reader pedantry like a number.

I have seen it a thousand times in writing workshops. People just can't resist nitpicking a number. For example, "This scifi story takes place 200 years in the future and they have faster than light travel because it's plot convenient," will immediately drag every armchair scientist out of the woodwork to say why there's no way that technology would exist in only 200 years.

Dates, ages, math, spans of time, I don't know what it is but the second a specific number shows up, your reader is thinking, and they're thinking critically but it's about whether that information is correct. They are now doing the math and have gone off drawing conclusions and getting distracted from your story or worse, putting it down entirely because umm, that sword could not have existed in that Medieval year, or this character couldn't be this old because it means they were an infant when this other story event happened that they're supposed to know about, or these two events now overlap in the timeline, or... etc etc etc.

Unless you are 1000% certain that a specific number is adding to your narrative, and you know rock-solid, backwards and forwards that the information attached to that number is correct and consistent throughout the entire story, do yourself a favor, and don't bring that evil down upon your head.

Editor here. Can confirm.

"Two centuries later" just triggers a mental note to check if timing is consistent throughout the book, because it may mean more time jumps are ahead. "200 years later", or heaven forbid, "201 years later" will have me draw up a time line. The more specific the number, the more critical people become.

Strange phenomenon. Well spotted, OP.

actually i think i might have an explanation for this from linguistics? i think folks get more nitpicky if you have specific numbers because of gricean maxims, specifically the maxims of quality and quantity

basically gricean maxims are a set of guidelines that we all carry in our heads that we expect other people to follow when having a conversation in good faith - i’m copying and pasting definitions from someone else because my attempts at summing up quality and quantity weren’t going so hot

The maxim of quantity, where one tries to be as informative as one possibly can, and gives as much information as is needed, and no more.
The maxim of quality, where one tries to be truthful, and does not give information that is false or that is not supported by evidence.

so basically, when you put a rough number in a text, people think subconsciously ‘oh, the exact number isn’t important, because if it was they would tell me an exact number, so i don’t need to worry about this’, whereas if you put something precise in, people’s brains go ‘wait, they think i need to know this information so i’ll remember it, but now it’s later and they’ve said something that contradicts it, so at least one of those times they were lying and i must figure out which time it was’

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dduane

Also: don't specify data storage sizes. Just, you know, don't.

it is the year 2005

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DONT BE AFRAID TO COMMENT ON OLD FICS DONT BE AFRAID TO COMMENT ON FICS IN A FANDOM THE AUTHOR MAY NO LONGER BE ACTIVE IN. IF THE STORY IS STILL UP LET THEM KNOW YOUR THOUGHTS IT MIGHT JUST BE THE REMINDER THAT MAKES THEIR DAY.

SINCERELY SOMEONE WHO JUST GOT A REPLY THAT MADE ME WANNA MAKE THIS POST

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16woodsequ

Listen. Authors' brains are really dumb. We start thinking people don't like a story anymore after too long of radio silence

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I don't think published authors should ever sue fanfic writers, but I do get how some fanfictions can be annoying to published authors on a personal level.

So, you know H.G. Wells' "War of the Worlds"? A story that posits: "Hey, maybe colonization feels PRETTY BAD when you're on the other side of it, helpless before a technologically superior invader who takes all your resources and murders your friends."

This was a bold stance for a British guy in 1895. Also, there's no triumphant moment where the alien invaders are killed by human ingenuity or human inventions; they are killed by the humble germ.

So I'm sure you're excited to hear about the unauthorized, real-person, fixit fic sequel published by Garrett Serviss, entitled "Edison's Conquest of Mars." Perhaps that title fills you with foreboding. It should.

The plot: Thomas Edison and every other contemporary scientist Serviss could think of (and his self-insert OC) build spaceships, fly to Mars, and commit genocide with Edison's ingenious inventions. The story goes out of its way to establish that the Martians aren't inherently bloodthirsty (it was just their tyrannical leader who made them invade Earth). But Our Heroes indiscriminately kill them all anyway, and take their resources.

Great sequel to the anti-colonization story.

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transisstor

Reblog if you think fanfiction is a legitimate form of creative writing.

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prismicnexus

It is. We twist canon timelines into something of our own making while still staying true to the original or we completely deviate and create our own ending. Of course it’s creative writing!

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cacodaemonia

[image id: The text "how it feels to write a serious fanfic when one of the characters has a stupid name" is above a photo of a man sitting in front of a laptop and cracking his knuckles. He's wearing a rainbow-colored clown wig and a red clown nose, both of which have been photoshopped into the image. end id]

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robobrainrot

All of Transformers

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Quick PSA, if you get one of those "Work scanned, AI use detected" comments on AO3, just mark them as spam.

Some moron apparently built a bot to annoy or prank hundreds of authors.

There is no scanning process, your work doesn't actually resemble AI writing, it's all bullshit. Mark the comment as spam (on AO3, not the email notification you got about the comment!) and don't let it get to you.

The spam comments have evolved.

They are now also linking to a site they claim is able to scan works and tell you whether they were AI written or not, and that you should do that before reading a fic.

It should go without saying that you should not, under no circumstances, visit a site advertised in a spam comment.

In this case, I'd say there's even a chance that the "scanning" site is actually used to scrape fics and use them for future AI writing. What it definitely doesn't do is tell you whether something was AI written or not. That's a bullshit claim.

Don't use that site. Don't believe these spam comments, whether you get them on your own works or see them on someone else's.

It's all bullshit.

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if you ever doubt your writing, be it your themes, or the reason behind it, remember that h.g wells wrote war of the worlds both as a commentary on colonialism and the horrors it brings, and because he fucking hated his neighbours and his 13 hour job, and wanted to write about the town in which he lived getting blasted to the fucking ground by lasers into an irreparable heap and all of the townspeople dying painfully 

you, too, can channel your hatred for that guy that lives down the hall and blasts music at 4am into the one of the most influential science fiction stories ever written! fuck it! i believe in you!!  

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spookydraws

This is one of the most inspirational things I’ve ever seen

Been looking for this

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Hey! I just wanted to thank you for writing one of my favorite fics ever. I consider "A Side of Rust" to be one of (if not THE) best Knockout fics out there. I reread parts of it every few months; Usually KO's banter with the children bc I think its endearing.

Some specific highlights; I love your understanding of lore and working in little pieces of the greater TF universe into the story (ex: Sparklings/Hot spots/etc). I feel like the pace and story is pretty in line with TFP and what we'd expect from an episode, with the freedom of not being for television. The new human characters are compelling and believable. On a personal note, I'm so glad you brought in Swindle bc he was my favorite con before KO. The "KO drive in" thing made perfect sense and was HILARIOUS!!

Overall, kudos upon kudos for you!

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Wow, thank you so much!! I love Knock Out and the thought of him owning KO Burger was just too funny NOT to write about! :D And everything else grew out of that idea. I too love Swindle, he's just great! He was originally going to be a one-chapter cameo but then I realized he would be useful later too.

Coincidentally I was working on part 2 of the epilogue last night! Getting there, ha ha!

Thank you again!

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The 12th and FINAL chapter of "Leading from Behind" is up!

OMG, I can't believe how long this ended up being (it was supposed to be a one-shot) and yet I also can't believe it's done!

I hope you enjoyed it because I had a great time writing it! This was the fic that broke me out of a long stretch of writer's block, which led to me picking up "With a Side of Rust" again, which at the time had been on hiatus for a few years.

But mostly I like this fic because it's so weird and, imho, pretty darn funny.

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