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too many people are biased against 1st person fiction bc they associate it with shitty YA or booktok romance or whatever (or maybe some other reason, but it’s an opinion I’ve heard nonetheless). But really I think it’s the ideal POV when the narrator is supposed to be the Worst Person Ever

and also narrators who are fucking hilarious. i’ve found that i’ve never been able to replicate the hilarity of someone’s snarky inner monologue with anything other than first person. first person is the most fun to write when the narrator is funny, the worst person ever, or both

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prokopetz

Any time somebody argues that you should avoid the use of obvious pop culture references and current slang in prose fiction in order to avoid "dating" the text, I'm reminded that our primary evidence for when several of Shakespeare's plays were written is that their dialogue quotes specific pieces of contemporary popular media, and that there's strong evidence many of the words he's credited by modern authorities with inventing are literally just contemporary youth slang. Like, if it's good enough for Shakespeare it's good enough for me, buddy!

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When inventing a fantasy religion a lot of people a) make the mistake of assuming that everyone in fantasy world would worship the same gods and b) assume that polytheistic religions see all of their gods as morally good

Some types of religions for your world building (any of these ideas can stand alone or be combined with each other):

  • One god, don’t play with any others.
  • Everything is God
  • One big god or small group of gods made everything but that doesn’t mean there aren’t other smaller ones that work for the big one(s)
  • There’s one god but all of these hundreds of gods are aspects of that one god and the aspects of the one god can absolutely marry each other and have marital squabbles
  • Individuality is an illusion and the universe is a series of vibes experiencing itself
  • The world used to be an egg but then that egg became a god and then that god made some other gods and then those gods became bored and made the universe and then they got to screwing each other to make even more gods and now there’s hundreds of them and exactly what gods are worshiped changes on who you ask in a particular region
  • Everything has a soul. Act like it.
  • Someone or something spoke the world into existence and we’ve been stealing other people’s stories ever since we’ll take whatever gods you have
  • A bunch of regional gods got smushed together and now there’s a state mandated religion that’s trying to make this smaller pantheon more popular than local folk religion
  • The difference between a god, a nature spirit, and a legendary person is extremely unclear even to worshipers but there’s shrines to all of them
  • A god chose these people to be their special guys and their special guys are gonna have a tough time. That god may be the only god or it may be one of many those people believe exist
  • Humans were kinda stupid until this one spirit or person showed up and taught them how to do stuff so now we do stuff to thank the person or thing that taught us how to do stuff
  • The world will keep on ending and being rebuilt it just does that sometimes nobody knows when it started or if it ever did
  • You can learn a lot from talking animals.
  • People were made to do work the god(s) don’t wanna do
  • People were made because the god(s) were lonely/bored/drunk
  • This river in particular is the most important thing in the whole universe
  • You need to get better philosophy. This guy was good at philosophy. Read his book.
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NGL very tired of having to constantly say "of course people can do what they want [when it comes to writing]" in response to people. Like obviously, creative pursuits are subjective. But sometimes I want to improve my craft, sometimes improving the craft is communal, sometimes I want to discuss writing practices and characterization, and pacing. Any trope or writing device can be amazing and interesting if approached with enough thought and skill, but sometimes I want to discuss why something doesn't work even if it's popular. I think constantly having to reassure people that any writing you ever do is totally fine and good is kind of detrimental to this process. What happened to things like "it's okay to make bad art it's okay for the first draft to suck it's okay for something to need a lot of work".

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princehendir

They're doing "disability in fantasy" discourse on twitter rn and I wanna say that like, on top of the obvious & already discussed (by people more articulate than me) ableism, the sheer level of ignorance about how medicine & bodies work you have to have in order to say "why would you ever need a wheelchair in a universe with healing magic 🙄" is astounding.

The ability to speed the healing time of cuts and punctures in flesh & bone breakage (<- this is what most fantasy healing is) does not actually have a lot to do with the ability to prevent disability or long term complications. A wound or bone healing isn't the same as function being restored, even in real life? And what if there's nothing to "restore", someone was born without function in certain limbs? Then there's nothing to "heal". You would have to restructure their internal anatomy! And what about damage from bacterial or viral illness? Bone mending juice has nothing to do with that! Like I'm sorry but this is like looking at the real world and saying "oh so they have antibiotics but they can't solve cancer 🙄" lol. Real bodies do not have "HP" and not all forms of "damage" [sic] are created equal.

See also: if your fantasy has a "fix all" option, there's absolutely no stakes or narrative tension.

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Genuinely I think one of the best things you can do to build characters in your story is give them a kink. You do not have to put that kink in the story. You do not have to tell anyone but yourself. But thinking about their wants and needs and what would bring them comfort or desire, about whether they crave power or crave a situation where they're blessedly free from any power, about which taboo they might kind of want to cross, is really useful for getting inside their head. Also "what situation would make my character stupid horny enough to make a terrible mistake?" is a good plotting device. "It's a plot hole that they made that dumb decision" no they were just whistling like a lustful kettle and forgot to turn their brain on.

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i understand the appeal of publishing "fic with the serial numbers filed off" as original work but i also feel like. what makes something a good fic is at odds with what makes something a good original story.

a good fic is in conversation with a source text, it may give a character an interesting role, it may reinterpret or subvert the rules established in the canon universe, whatever. but like. its transformative by nature. whereas original stories - good ones, anyway - have their own internal, non-referrential sense of logic and rules. it can be in conversation with the genre writ large but it has to have internal substance that can stand alone. which fic inherently cant do.

#this is why i can never understand the appeal of publishing fanfic lol#i always remember that post that was talking about fifty shades of gray that was like#'i didnt understand why there were all these random scenes with christians family until i realized it ised to be twilight fanfic'#bc in a fanfic esp a twilight one it makes sense to have scenes that include the other less relevant characters bc you enjoy them#and also like twilight just did have plenty of scenes where edward takes bella back to his house and etc.#like either your fic with the serial numbers shaved off wasnt a very good fic in the first place OR#it really shouldnt be published bc it just doesnt make sense without that engagement and understanding of the source material#i always look at it like okay your character has to make a choice#when writing fanfiction you are working with a set character that exists that you may be transforming but to some extent already has#all the 'what would they do in xyz situation' answered or that you can interpret#if i am writin a fanfic i will have characters make chocies not just bc it makes sense for the narrative but because this character already#has set values and shit#if im writing somthing original im molding the charactr as im going along#what i take into consideration for what a charactegr would do in a situation is worlds away from fanfic#how i adapt characters in fanfic is worlds away from how i create characters in original work#like even if you are writing something that is incredibly au in a fic you are still presumably making decisions based on their canon char#or the ship you are trying to push so then publishing that with names changed?#there is then something fundamentally missing from the readers understanding#writing
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