mcfly july 2024 || 🌲 || day 11 Reading George's First Draft
“It’s, uh, something.”
George brandishes an exaggerated grin. “You hate it.”
“No!” Lorraine says. “No, no, no! It’s just… Well, it’s a lot! All the storylines and motives! And the world you’ve built, just...wow.”
George steeples his fingers and puts them to his lips.
“But?”
Lorraine sighs. “But do you have to use our middle names?”
“Lorraine, this is our story.”
“It is –”
“Raylene is such a unique name! It’s perfect.”
“But I hate my middle name, George.”
“Tell you what,” George says. “If it’s not a bestseller, then you can be mad at me. Deal?”
Lorraine laughs. “Deal.”