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Comments from Viewer1060
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2015-02-12 07:32:15 | Invasion of the body snatchers | Readers WTF hit the bulls eye. My simple understanding of biology is that only humans can mate with humans not dogs, ponys, or sheep. Yet since the hit film ALIEN the impossible does happen. If those stupid lizards grabs humans they get our diseases: Herpes, AIDS, TB, the Black Death, and the common Cold. With no resistance to Earth illness a 100 % death rate. |
| 2015-02-18 03:23:59 | Emo Girl | 5. You may not post any text featuring sexual character under 18 years old. This is cut & past from Forum Rules. A 14 year old girl is called Jail Bait for good cause. This was Reported. |
| 2015-02-14 04:28:44 | Experimentation and Exploration the beginning | Another person recommended finding someone to poof read your stories. If you pick up any novel of the last 20 years the author thanks many people and his or her editor. Several people had poof read the book . If that is your future start recruiting your team now. Spell Checker can help and harm the writer, example "I look at my pray " The hero was looking at his lover not praying, or was he ? |
| 2015-02-14 05:05:46 | Forced Love_(2) | Dragons Girl you have talent as a dramatic writer. Your creativity shines through. about 90% of the stores I read her are formatted with a blank line or space between paragraphs. If you can do that more people will read and comment on your stories. |
| 2015-02-18 03:07:15 | Chante | There is a custom or convention followed at this site. Writers leave a blank line or space between paragraphs. This is about formatting not your plot or your writing style. It is harder to read very large blocks of text. Some like I skip stores that are tiring to read. There is not Editor here. |